Accelerando

by Cobalt Shine

Chapter One: The Fight(Edited)

Octavia was hit badly by that blow. But though she hurt, she responded, "If that's what you would like to make it, then I guess it's a battle!"

As she then dodged a hoof thrown by Vinyl, the crowd stood in confusion. Their jaws hung loose, their eyes wide.

"Really Vinyl, if that's all you have then you're not even worth my time!"

"Oh no! This is just the beginning!" she yelled, running full speed at Octavia. Curses and hate flew from her mouth. "I'm so sick of your shit Octavia! Your uptight ways, and how you always think you better than everypony else!"

"You bitch!" Octavia screamed.

In the distraction, Vinyl threw two hooves straight into Octavia's stomach. She was unfortunately hit by Octavia's knee, knocking her in the chin as they both went backward towards the edge of the stage. Octavia got up and picked up her bow. Vinyl, who by now had gotten up, put her turntables on her back (cue music). Octavia stood on her hind legs, holding her bow in her teeth. Vinyl stood on all fours with her DJ set on her back, the turntables spinning away.

Octavia rushed forward, swinging her bow as a sword. Vinyl leapt to the side, slamming her feet into the ground. She sent two records flying towards her in a whirling fury. Octavia spun in the air, slashing through the records and leaping toward her enemy once more. She glared at Vinyl, jumping in the air, attempting to bring her bow down over Vinyl's head. The unicorn dodged the strike, and sent back a buck from her hind legs, hitting Octavia right in her stomach.

Edited :yay

"Oomph" She was winded from the kick

"There's more where that came from!" Vinyl announced. She took the offensive on Octavia, ripping the needle of the turntables and clenching it in between her teeth. She darted toward Octavia at full blast.

Octavia realized this, taking the violin dropped by the butler and using that to ward off the attack from the incoming unicorn. Their 'swords' met, clashing and making the violin create a horrid screeching noise. Everypony in the audience groaned and wailed.

"How dare you call me a bitch! You arrogant piece of shit!" Vinyl screamed.

"Shit? How dare you, you ugly little whore, parading around the place like you're hard to get! Please!" she responded.

"Why you!" Vinyl screamed. She tried another attack, using her needle, swinging it at Octavia's leg. Smack. The needle hit her leg, a slapping sound echoing around them. Blood started spurting out of her leg.

On instinct she leaned over on the leg, cringing from the pain. But she was still in a fight, and this was no time to lay down. Quickly she stood on two legs, completely smashing the violin against Vinyl's head and sending her across the stage. The cellist took a good look at her leg - she was losing a lot of blood. Vinyl must have hit an artery. The DJ, on the other hoof, was having trouble standing up herself; Octavia had done some serious damage. Upon realizing this, Octavia picked up her cello once again and limped over to Vinyl, scraping the stage with a horrible, ominous screech.

(once again a massive thanks to Lynked and Mcyav)!!

Comments

[Lynked]

By Celestia's beard man, what happened to getting a proofreader?

[n]

You probably want to get a editor of sorts. The current state is pretty hard to read through.

[Cobalt Shine]

455884 i cant get one, but did you like the new chapter? 455886

[Lynked]

455891 Yes, I did . But it was...hard to read. And why can't you get one? There's an abundance out there.

[Cobalt Shine]

455905 well can you? please???, and I cannot find one like at the time being also did i mention im in year 11 and the worst english class....

P.S how awesome is that music hey!

[Lynked]

455911 I'll send you a pm.

[Cobalt Shine]

455928 cool

[Nyysjan]

W.T.F.

[Cobalt Shine]

456175 what? good or bad?

[Nyysjan]

456184
Haven't gotten past my shock enough to make value judgements yet

protip: if the venue is doublebooked, it is frowned upon to settle who plays by the means of deathmatch, talking with the host and possibly contacting your manager is usually more appropriate

[Cobalt Shine]

456274 i can ruin the story for you if you like in a pm (the ending is not what you think)

[Nyysjan]

456368
please don't, i'll wait and see how it goes and decide on wether to thumbs up or not later.

[Lynwen]

It seems too blunt and, I dont wanna say unrealistic, cuz I bet this could easily happen in real life, but it feels like there wasn't much thought into it. Just like, "They don't like each other......cat fight, bad names, go go!". I really didn't thoroughly read it, just skimmed it and saw curse words and ROYAL CANTERLOCK. Might just be that I hate to read stories of my favorite couple fighting, with a few exceptions, but I didn't like this chapter.

[Cobalt Shine]

463259 it gets explained later on, i always seem to do that For now everypony Bob Dylan

[Mcyav]

You've got a good idea, it just seems really rushed with little thought put into it. Slow the pace, add more detail and try to explain things. I'm not really sure why vinyl hates tavi.

[Cobalt Shine]

464930 GAH, you'll find out later