Ok, this was good. Better than What I thought it would be. If I may offer a suggestion, though. Redo your description. It's very vague and boring and it almost made me skip the story entirely. Which would have been unfortunate.
This, I like. The concept is strange, but well detailed. The background story of the man is foggy but believable, I like it quite much. The state of the pony is surprising, to say the least, but expected after the things that happened to her.
Now I only have a small amount of questions.
1. Will we get a better description of her, including colors and name, some past too, even?
2. How detailed the mature parts will be?
3. When will you continue it and how far will you go, dear author?
You got my intrest, I expect this quality to carry over the whole story.
1. I don't like doing colors/names for oneshot OCs, so probably not, some past may be mentioned but may not be - after all, that's not what the story's about. 2. Very detailed. That's what the story's about, duh. 3. No idea and no idea.
4714158 So we won't get a single color of her? That's depressing. With her current state, even moreso. But I must wonder. Why? I think it really isn't a difficult task to put a color combination together, which is also true to the show. Oh well.
This story had me going, I would like to see how far you go with this. Hopefully this story doesn't end up in "incomplete" hell like most good stories. Keep it up.
this is interesting a little dark for my tastes but you got a good story going on I will continue to read this story out of sheer morbid fascination this is going to be a unique read
Well it threw me off from the very beginning, as I read along the story very interesting enough for me to want, to continue. I like how dark it is, but I want know to is what has happen to this mare and the backstory to this. Maybe in chapter for a late time I guess. Over all keep up the good work.
Ok, this was good. Better than What I thought it would be. If I may offer a suggestion, though. Redo your description. It's very vague and boring and it almost made me skip the story entirely. Which would have been unfortunate.
Nah, it's perfectly accurate as it is.
Continue Please.
I'll definitely follow this for now.
This, I like.
The concept is strange, but well detailed.
The background story of the man is foggy but believable, I like it quite much.
The state of the pony is surprising, to say the least, but expected after the things that happened to her.
Now I only have a small amount of questions.
1. Will we get a better description of her, including colors and name, some past too, even?
2. How detailed the mature parts will be?
3. When will you continue it and how far will you go, dear author?
You got my intrest, I expect this quality to carry over the whole story.
-Zeph
1. I don't like doing colors/names for oneshot OCs, so probably not, some past may be mentioned but may not be - after all, that's not what the story's about.
2. Very detailed. That's what the story's about, duh.
3. No idea and no idea.
4714158
So we won't get a single color of her?
That's depressing. With her current state, even moreso.
But I must wonder. Why?
I think it really isn't a difficult task to put a color combination together, which is also true to the show. Oh well.
-Zeph
It was the worst I've ever seen.
Nah, just kidding.
Keep up the good work, maestro!
This story had me going, I would like to see how far you go with this. Hopefully this story doesn't end up in "incomplete" hell like most good stories. Keep it up.
This story is strange... It's a one shot, a short story or a full story?
Yes.
this is interesting a little dark for my tastes but you got a good story going on I will continue to read this story out of sheer morbid fascination this is going to be a unique read
Well it threw me off from the very beginning, as I read along the story very interesting enough for me to want, to continue. I like how dark it is, but I want know to is what has happen to this mare and the backstory to this. Maybe in chapter for a late time I guess. Over all keep up the good work.
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I know right. A good story comes along but not has been completed for what ever reason. I want to see how it ends.