i like this story fuck the haters!!! go phone writing xD

4672148 thanks glad to be of good service. I would write more on my other stories if it weren't for the fact my computers mother board crashed the day I was gonna complete them by uploading 20 hours of non stop writing the night before.

Needs work, but im chalking it up to the phone thing, gave it a thumb and will wait for the changes. Keep up the
writing

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4672574 ok I have 2 agree on that one xD

4672222 I didnt see to many mistakes and i still enjoyed it so keep it up my good man

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Why in the name of all that is sane a dangerous transdimensional artifact would be moved from guarded castle vaults into unsupervised barn?

Why would Applejack even agree to have that thing in her barn? It`s courting the disaster - if that mirror ended up at Sweet Apple Acres, it`s a foregone conclusion that CMC would try to screw with it.

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Nope. This just ain`t gonna work. If you begin with such a plot hole, it`s a given the rest will be even more full of WTF.

Perhaps the mirror is being moved from place to place to hide it from someone. How often have you read or watched a story where the searchers go to a place and finally find the object that they are looking for, and… It’s not there.
As for the Cutie Mark Crusaders... well, even though they end up going to the wrong place and getting into trouble, if Apple jacks tells them to stay out of that part of the barn... they might listen.
The difference between non-fiction and fiction is non-fiction has to make sense.