The nightmare is far from over. Join Daring Do and a band of mercernaries as they follow the trail of a mysterious prize. Little do they know, something else is after what they want.
Wonderful chapter. I was waiting to see when skinning was going to make an appearance.
Also, I'm glad to help! Anytime you need me to edit anything, whether it be because you want a second opinion or because your usual editor is unable to, just give me a ring and I'll take a look.
Well Epsilon you asked for my opinion a while ago and now I finally had some time to check this out and here is what I have to say.
I love it. Though I'm not so much a fan of the predator as I am of the xenomorphs but to each their own. You are crafting a mythos here, not something easily done my friend. The story is believable and it's hard to craft these characters into that, I mean they have such fantastic abilities and traits that make them superior. So kudos to you mein friend.
Wonderful chapter. I was waiting to see when skinning was going to make an appearance.
Also, I'm glad to help! Anytime you need me to edit anything, whether it be because you want a second opinion or because your usual editor is unable to, just give me a ring and I'll take a look.
4873816 Alright, I'll make sure to do that.
Will the Aliens survives so we can see all out war at Alien vs Predator vs Equestria?
Well Epsilon you asked for my opinion a while ago and now I finally had some time to check this out and here is what I have to say.
I love it. Though I'm not so much a fan of the predator as I am of the xenomorphs but to each their own. You are crafting a mythos here, not something easily done my friend. The story is believable and it's hard to craft these characters into that, I mean they have such fantastic abilities and traits that make them superior. So kudos to you mein friend.
Keep up the grand work.
4895382 It was spoiled sometime ago, and yes. The Alien will survive.
4896117 Thanks man. It means a lot to hear people say that about my story.