Wait a second, the queen was killed in the last story, is this an alternate universe fic to the last one? Either way so far, u pleased the creed. Continue.....

awesome

4661579 Yes... she was...

4661929 Why thank you.

Wow, starting the story with the gruesome death and destruction everywhere, can't wait for the next chapter.

4662101 Oh... just you wait...

That was bloody awesome! ...Ouch. Okay, that pun was bad even for me.

Still, really excited for this.

4662561 Why thank you. Me and Diablo made sure to start this story off with a terrifying beginning.

awesome

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i really enjoyed all the death and destruction for an intro chapter. Call me macabre, but no Alien/Predator story is complete without without a lot of brutal deaths, even if it all was just a nightmare Celestia was having.

Aside from that, I'm no critic, but in my opinion, everything seemed to be well written, and descriptions were thorough enough that I could easily imagine the scene in my head. It may just be my anticipation for Alien: Isolation, but I even imagined it all in first-person from Celestia's POV.

4663024 Wow, first one to figure out what this scene was. Nice job. Have a Twilight and mustache.

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Wait...what do you mean "figure it out?" The readers needed to figure out that this was a dream sequence?

It's in the title of the chapter. "Waning Dreams." Seemed pretty obvious to me.

4663620 I just said that because no one else talked about it.

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Can't wait for more. No grammar errors I could see, which is definitely a massive step up.

For the rest of it, and what I feel for later chapters? Allow me to sum it up:

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Ten hours in and no dislikes

Bravo my friend

4664573 Why thank you.

I like it and I am wondering if the Predalien is going to be in this story?
(If you do not know what is a Predalien, it is a Alien and Predator hybrid. It's a real thing look it up)

4664738 I do not believe so, it probably will not.

4664752 Dang, but hay at least you have Predators. Also are the aliens going to return in this story. If so, one word .... Aliencorn. I'm jokeing about the Aliencorn thing.

Part of me thinks this is a bad dream

But some part Of me wants this to be real

4665086 What do you think?

I thought it was Alien vs Predator?

4667109 Nope!

4667167 aw man when this spin off is over you might try to put Alien vs Predator if you can?

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We are planning to make this a trilogy. Part one focused on the Xenomorph. This one focuses on the Predator. Part three...

4669076 Aww... you spoiled all the fun! Oh well!

3 days and still no dislikes, good for you.

4676364 You betcha!

4676775 Why thank you.

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part three...

AVP?!

4800923 Well of course not, the next one is facing off against the transformer-OF COURSE IT'S AVP!!!!