"I here by order you," began Celestia, "To masturbate for my enjoyment!"

"Hereby" is one word

"I wasn't asking," said Celestia, "serve and obey remember? I can have your head chopped off and your family hunted down."

To be honest, it was pretty good up until Celestia went way out of character with this line. This is something she'd never say, and it kinda killed the story for me. Because of that, you might want to use the alternate universe tag.

"I will send you to the moon."

So she threatens to summon the Mane 6 and tell them to banish him...
Not a good idea, I think he would just tell them what she did

This oddly like a cycle...

NOOOOOO not my little Woona!!! She is not this vulgar and disgusting noooooo
you make me cry.....

Hah, fuck that.
I ain't licking up my own jizz.

I'd rather die...after I've escaped, spread the word, and slander their name. Alternatively, I'd just run away and live as a hermit.

AWESOME STORY!!!

this is so good Luneth spark approves hahahahahahahhah I thank you for this wonderful story

some kind of knee accident

You crafty Skyrim-playing motherfucker...

"Masturbate," said Celestia. You look up at her. "You heard me. Masturbate. Pleasure yourself for me to watch."
You kept your hooves at your chest. Was the princess serious?
"I hereby order you," began Celestia, "To masturbate for my enjoyment!"

I... I really wish I didn't have to read that again... I had hoped I would never have to hear that again... Those words came out of my exes mouth, and I did not enjoy the act following...

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Nah just kidding. Good clop!

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Oh god, that metal image.

Im still prettynew what does hiatus mean, if im spelling it right

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Are you serious? That's fucked up, man. Bitches be undoubtedly fucking tripping, I tell ya'.