After the Fall, women are oppressed. Put enough pressure on someone and they will push back, harder than they ever might have before. These are tales of women pushing back.
Thank you for not having her bowl over him. Too many of these kinds of fics have the heroes run roughshod over the caribou, and it gets boring. I almost didn't see the betrayal coming here, but she telegraphed a bit.
I wanted it to be a bit more of a fight. Plus the title of the fic was supposed to mention the betrayal (the song after which it is named is also about skeins distracted by a woman while fighting a beast.)
I grew to like Maureen, mainly because my mother influenced my love for all things Irish. She makes a return in "The Avatars" in the first Laughter chapter.
That and I generally assume Ahuizotl and Daring have a mutual crush but in a peaceful Equestria they're free to be so coy and take their time with things.
Thank you for not having her bowl over him. Too many of these kinds of fics have the heroes run roughshod over the caribou, and it gets boring. I almost didn't see the betrayal coming here, but she telegraphed a bit.
Damn fine chapter, Gabe.
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I wanted it to be a bit more of a fight. Plus the title of the fic was supposed to mention the betrayal (the song after which it is named is also about skeins distracted by a woman while fighting a beast.)
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I grew to like Maureen, mainly because my mother influenced my love for all things Irish. She makes a return in "The Avatars" in the first Laughter chapter.
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Hear hear!
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That and I generally assume Ahuizotl and Daring have a mutual crush but in a peaceful Equestria they're free to be so coy and take their time with things.