Off to another recovery start I see (tragedy does seem to be your thing). Considering the way you've written them before though, I look foward to the next chapter.

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Hehe, I seem to write my best romance stories on the heels of tragedy. I've tried coming off "normal" experiences before, but it's not my forte. I'll need practice for that.

By Celestia, it's almost physically painful to read what happened to poor Twilight... But you write well and I want to see where you are going with this, so favorited and upvoted.

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Exactly as intended, I am sure...

This story has potential. Read it, wasn't sure what to expect. But I am hooked now.

Favorite and upvoted.

why you never, EVER fuck with equestria. they re ruled by demigods with the wrath of fire and ice and the aiblity to slice castles in half.

For anyone who is wondering, this is me taking a shot at the Fall of Equestria tumblr. To put it mildly, I'm not a fan.

Upvoting just for that. I goddamn hate that tumblr.

Another not-a-fan of Fall? I like the cut of your jib and wish to subscribe to your newsletter. Keep up the excellent caribou-slaying.

Who sane guy doesn't hate Fall of Equestria, i mean come on rape brainwashing mind control Male domination female humiliation, and all sorts of other things. Just thinking about it, angers me and makes me sick.

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I support artistic freedom, but there's a fine line where if crossed, it's gone too far.
Insta-faved and like. Reading now.

okay I liked and am faving and following now - you set the tone and scene perfectly - right now my own anger towards Caribou is rather. . . heated

A fic involving Equestria kicking Caribou ass and not being enslaved? I'm In.

I liked the Caribou better when they were bluff hearty Nordic types, as in the Three Wishes continuity. I was just reading a so-called fic by the name of 'Risk of Epic', and complaining about the blood and mindless slaughter. This first cjhapter is at least as gruesome in it's own way, but thsi is done right. unlike the 'protagonist' in that fic, the caribou antagonists have been brilliantly sketched out as fanatics and their goals and the events leading up to the scene made clear.

This has everything that 'Risk of Epic' lacked, and so I declare it good and worthy.

Author's Note:

For anyone who is wondering, this is me taking a shot at the Fall of Equestria tumblr. To put it mildly, I'm not a fan.

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For anyone who is wondering, this is me taking a shot at the Fall of Equestria tumblr. To put it mildly, I'm not a fan.

Well, you have my attention now. To quote you, I'm not a fan.

What smells like caribou?

It's a good concept, but you REALLY butter up the whole misconception that Celestia is a "goddess".

Quick question for clarity, since I saw both 'four legs' as well as 'arms' used in this chapter. This isn't anthro, is it?

5054280 Nope! Full pony. Sorry it took so long to reply!

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Celestia is a goddess. Stop trying to deny it.