What happens when two creatures cross paths? Then what happens when one has a heart full of love and the other does not.
The first transition between Jackson and Cadence needs someway to be signified. It's a little confusing as it is right now. I know you just overlooked it because there's a clear transition in the later part.
4506163 Thanks for telling me this, i've fixed it up
4529678 Good to hear.
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Maybe a heart breaking final chapter????
Go on motherfucker, I dare you...img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130530004138/dragonball/images/6/67/Cthulhu.jpg
heart breaking chapter you saywhat do you say on a bullet in the ass then.
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When's the next chapter?
4575953 chululululu really?
5178267 Too subtle?
5178335 aye
Love it!When will there be a new chapter?Great story!!!
i like it
stay classy
when is the next update
I didn't hate it outright though I still hate it at this moment. I do not pass my final judgment until there is a third part.
current rating: 4/10
Will this continue?
pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/1377197667/we-need-more-avatar2.jpg
6632871 6661174 Never fear another chapter is near
This was a awesome read how we got a Cadence pov, I love this fic so far can't wait to see what happens next.
Una historia tan
Deberia ser continuada, NICE STORY DUD CONTINUE!
The first transition between Jackson and Cadence needs someway to be signified. It's a little confusing as it is right now. I know you just overlooked it because there's a clear transition in the later part.
4506163 Thanks for telling me this, i've fixed it up
4529678 Good to hear.
More
Go on motherfucker, I dare you...
img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130530004138/dragonball/images/6/67/Cthulhu.jpg
heart breaking chapter you say
what do you say on a bullet in the ass then.
...
When's the next chapter?
4575953 chululululu really?
5178267 Too subtle?
5178335 aye
Love it!
When will there be a new chapter?
Great story!!!
i like it
stay classy
when is the next update
I didn't hate it outright though I still hate it at this moment. I do not pass my final judgment until there is a third part.
current rating: 4/10
Will this continue?
pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/1377197667/we-need-more-avatar2.jpg
6632871
6661174 Never fear another chapter is near
This was a awesome read how we got a Cadence pov, I love this fic so far can't wait to see what happens next.
Una historia tan
I N C R E D I B I L I S
Deberia ser continuada, NICE STORY DUD CONTINUE!