Will read.

Why not? I suppose this is worth a shot. The mash of Dark/Comedy and Human/Anthro is scary (and a writer's nightmare), but I'll give this story a try.

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Thank you.

4383548 No problem.

Please make more of this. I used to feel so alone being against Fall of Equestria. Seeing something like this makes me quite happy. And please slay vast armies of caribou.

4383548 Have read. It is a interesting concept. Though not as interesting as the Hulk showing up and bitch slapping the caribou as a collective entity.

4383608 Your wish will be granted, though this story will be put a bit on the backseat compared to my other two stories.
4383628 True, but I'm not good at writing superheroes like him.

4383650 I was once complemented on being able to write OP characters well. SO I might stand a chance as writing the Hulk. If I weren't currently bingeing on all the Dragon Ball. Though if you're willing, I have a few ideas that need external creative in put to unfuck them.

4383661 PM me and I'll try to help you as much as I can. Maybe we'll even do some...
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4383663 Caution: May make some of the rambling of the sites more notorious members look like christians preaching their filthy religion. So ya know, probably are pretty good. P.S: I really hate christianity, doesn't help that I was forced to go to it until I was eight, were upon the church was bought out and turned into a casino.

He had the right qualities... He was even addressing himself as a knight...

We've got some pretty serious shit that's going to happen about some Gary Stu human......I'm ready.

It was another day at the job for me... I was standing in front of the restaurant, dressed in armor that shone under the may sun as I gave out leaflet and greeted the customers...

Wait...what? BAHAHAHAHAHAHA, thank you.
Well if you haven't already discovered what I meant by my comment i'm saying I'm glad that he hasn't been made into a massive Stu and I hope this story continues.

4383699 I figured that out.

Just for you, I'll share that the job I described actually exists, as well as the restaurant.

I would definitely enjoy seeing how you develop your knight. He may not be Excalibur, but he sure knows what's right and what isn't.

Hopefully you concentrate on this story because the way you executed it is quite do e well.

4383749 Umm... Excalibur? That's a sword, not a knight...
But he does know what's right and wrong, yeah. I kind of put my morals as his own.

4383708 hm... How the heck will he defeat magical users? Wait... Never mind, that guy is a human, and we all know qhat happens when a human is determined enough

4383708 Really?Like you said in the story, standing in some place forever with a sun bearing down on you would suuuuuck....unless you get like a massive discount on the food there then it' worth it.How much of a medieval style restaurant is it? It actually sounds quite appetizing now that I know it's real.

4383955 They'll be his biggest challenge, but as you said, we all know that with enough determination a human can overcome anything.

4383987 I don't know... I haven't been to the restaurant myself, though it looks nice from the pictures on its website.

4384014 NOOOOO.....ah well, probably won't have a outlet near me considering my luck in restaurants.
Anyway good luck with your stories.

4384034 I seriously doubt it, since I live in Bulgaria...

Well, it's not exactly my cup of tea, so I'm going to back off and leave you to it. I doubt any input from my side would really be helpful here, seeing as I'm a fan of the setting.

I wish you best of luck!

PS: The downvote isn't mine.

4384060 Welp there goes my restaurant idea.

4384083 You could still help me by pointing out any mistakes I make with the fanon.

4384142 You could always start a chain of restaurants with that theme.

4383749 You do know excalibur is a sword not a person right?

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If I find any overt problems, and you believe it would be helpful for me to do so, I will.

4384352 I always appreciate help. Thank you.

I like this story's opening chapter. I shall see where this goes.

Hmmm... Reminds me of a video.

I like this... I like this a lot...

Ahh....Justice. Such a sweet thing that will always leave a taste of fulfillment for the righteous.
I always have had an affinity for stories such as this, where you seek to rewrite a horror written by another author. Not that I have anything against the Fall of Equestria universe. As far as grim/dark fics go it is great, seeing as how it leaves me feeling helpless reading about all of the atrocities committed against the innocent and helpless.
But these kinds of stories, which I call the Liberation Fics, are fabulous. After all, who doesn't like a happy ending in the form of bringing a Righteous Fucking Hammer down on the heads of evildoers?

4384522 4384872 Thank you.
4384749 That animal really wasn't giving a fuck...
4385297 You just mirrored my thoughts on the inspirations for this fic, redskin122004's Fall of Equestria: Tartarus and Fall of Equestria: A Single Guard, and Dropbear271's The Fall of The Caribou...

There's a reason why humans hunt caribou and not ponies.

I love your other story and want see how this goes here have a moustache

wow i suddenly feel worse seeing the idea I was trying to show off then finding a similar idea done so much better than mine I applaud you no doubt but it still hurts to look at the terrible piece of crud of mine compared to yours

WARNING: Rated M for Mature. Contains:
Blood and Gore, Nudity, Sexual Content, Sexual Violence, Killing a lot of caribou, Strong Language, Occasional bad pun, Violence

..wait, what was that?

Nudity

. . . Ponies are always nude...

I barely felt any resistance as the blade skewered his body. I could see the bloodied tip that had emerged from his back... I could also see the life leaving his eyes...

If you're planning to heavily feature combat, especially with swords, you should do some research first. Just a tip to help you enhance your story.

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But anthro ponies are not always nude, right?

4386418 And my character is going to show them that reason.

4387615 Thank you, thank you. Now if I can get a beard I can have a nice goatee.

4387657 Anthros wear clothes... At least in this fic they will.

4387808 Thank you for that. I guess I should be a bit more specific when writing... I'll fix it as soon as I can.

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Oh! I totally missed the anthro tag.

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LOL, silly blindy mcblindeyes

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I fell silly, oh so silly,
Silly and witty and bliiind!

He may not be a real knight but he will do.

Next chapter??

4388690 When I can make it. For now I'm concentrating on my other stories.

4388860 like evil always finds a way?

4389280 And The Cabal.

4387959 yeah!!

4389283 goody goody when can i expect the new chapters??

4389332 As soon as they're done.

4389335 you respond Quick huh?

4389345 Did you see my latest blog post? After seeing that I'm just staying here, giggling like mad.

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If I may suggest something, two stories of mine. "Etiamsi Omnes, Ego Non" and "Etiamsi Omnes, Ego Non- The Promises." They are also against Fall of Equestria. The second set even takes classic inspiration. One chapter has an epic poem the other is Chaplin's speech in "The Great Dictator."

this is awesome wright more bro