A mutant who was the prey of bullies long ago with a Dark Legend/Truth of his downfall, and a prisoner of the Rainbow Factory, who loses his wing as punishment for saving a mare, go on a quest of revenge. Their target? Celestia, Princess of Equestria
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5247555 Ain't dat teh truth.
:3
5247555 We just can't handle the bad storytelling. Gore had nothing to do with it.
5247555 You're saying we can't handle the gore?
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Some of us 'haters' write gore. Hell, I even wrote a semi-apocalypse fic full of the stuff, and another where a red and black alicorn gets torn to shreds by a tentacle-futa unicorn mare. What's your argument for that? I'd honestly like to hear it.
5247555 The proper word is actually "Squeamish."
With an A.
5266341 The comment wasn't towards you.
5266331 If it's bad, then maybe you should explain why and how I can revise or edit my writing to help, besides, what would you expect, this is my first story after all.
5266351 The comment was actually directed at the people who disliked the story. (Read: "Haters.") Ms. Fox happened to dislike the story, so the question was in fact, directed at her.
5266351 Technically, yes and no--Guardian was directing it towards my friends, and I felt the urge to jump in. So pardon me if I do become a bit annoying; I'm merely sticking up for my friends.
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5266364 I have no problem with people sticking up for others, Its a rare sight to see people to stick up for others these days, let alone stick up for strangers. I'm just wondering how could I improve my writing.
5266371 Well, I'd have to read all 30-something chapters you have here to effectively tell you what's wrong with the whole thing in a nutshell before I even begin on the chapters individually.
5266383 I get it.
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Changelings, my friend.
5266391 Good thing most of them aren't painfully long, though. I think I could breeze through this, given time.
5266394 ?
5266398 We all have to start somewhere.
5266412 True. (I'm currently dealing with eight five-week-old puppies, so yeah...juggling over here.)