Spike sees himself as more of a bodyguard to Twilight, and he knows he is meant to look out for her, otherwise Princess Celsetia will be on his tail LOL XD And don't worry Spike is actually nice, he's just not so sure if the pegasi from Couldsdale are really ponies Twilight should trust and become friends with.
Plus she hasn't got any sort of feelings for Twilight, she's just welcoming the new Princess like Applejack and Rarity did, she's also not hitting on her or trying to get her into her bed, she's just being friendly really.
I knew that she hadn't done that yet, but it was something I could image would maybe happen.
"It's fine Rainbow Dash...just a few broken bones as (is) all," the Princess stated with a small smile as she stood back up and shook the dust off of herself, whincing (wincing) at the slight ache that was now in both her wings and all four legs. She stretched slightly as she bit her bottom lip and tried to get herself up in the air again.
Millons (millions) and millons (millions) of big, fluffly (fluffy) white clouds all bunched up together to make a floating city, with thouands (thousands) of different pegasi flying in and out of the clouds, tall buildings made out of clouds, and huge waterfalls made out of rainbows. While it was true that places like Canterlot and Manehatten could be augured (argued) as more ravishing, this really was someplace to behold, whether you were a pegasus or not.
It was now late in the evening as Rainbow Dash and Twilight were ending there (their) little journey around Cloudsdale, having visited the hustle, and bustle of 'The Weather Factory' first, meeting a few of the workers there, then moving onto much smallers (smaller) sites like shops, nearby streets and 'Flight Camp' for all the young flyers that lived up in the floating city. And although Cloudsdale might look like some big city that's always busy from the outside, Twilight soon realized that the town was very different from the big cities in Equestria, such as 'Canterlot' and 'Manehattan', and it mostly resembles Ponyvile with how peaceful it was, and the fact that although the pegsai did seem a little on edge when meeting their new Princess at first, they soon were found to be just as welcoming and humble as the ponies who lived down in Ponyvile were.
"Well to be honest I never imagined it would be anything like this, plus everypony was very different to (from) how I first thought they would be," Twilight wasn't really taking anytime to think before she said that, immediately regretting what she had said and covered her mouth with a hoof.
Twilight just nodded in reply, "I'll admit some of the working pegasi seemed a little cautions (cautious) of me at first, but really you are all just as welcoming as the ponies in Ponyvile are, plus none of you crowed (crowded) around me, wanting to ask me questions like the ponies from Ponyvile did."
Rainbow Dash had now gone slient (silent) as she obviously didn't want to answer this question, not even glancing to Twilight now as she had an unreadable expression on her face.
Well Dash & Rarity are 2 VERY different ponies. R is all about fashion & D is all about flying & probably thinks fashion is too fru fru to live. The episode "Super Speedy....6000" hints at why Dash & Pinkie don't get along
Thankfully she had found where the bedroom was without much trouble, and smiled to herself as she walked into the room and closed the door behind her. She thought she was save (safe) and wouldn't have to deal with Spike until the morning, however she was clearly very wrong as a light switched on and there was said dragon looking up at her as he was standing in the middle of the room.
"And just what time do you call this?" ("Past your bedtime, mister.") the dragon asked, his arms folded, while he tapped his foot on the woodden (wooden) floor.
"Well some of the wokring ones were a little cautions (cautious) of me at first, but I found out that they very welcoming just like all the ponies here in Ponyvile, plus they didn't ask countless questions that I didn't know the answers to," Twilight explained with a smile to Spike, her voice taking a relaxed tone to it.
The two then slowly fell into a slience, as they carried on their way to Rainbow's home. However Twilight soon broke that slience as she wanted to ask Dash about something that had been bothering her since she first met the pegasus.
Here's a tip. Go through and listen to each chapter on the auto read function so you can catch spelling and grammatical errors, and also make sure the story flows the way you want it to.
Spike isn't really well nice, or at least he allows himself to much.
Not bad so far, and while it is actually pretty harmless I don't really like it that Spike is acting like her father there.
Lol in the end Spike reminded me of a overprotective dad after his daughter has came back from a date.
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Spike sees himself as more of a bodyguard to Twilight, and he knows he is meant to look out for her, otherwise Princess Celsetia will be on his tail LOL XD And don't worry Spike is actually nice, he's just not so sure if the pegasi from Couldsdale are really ponies Twilight should trust and become friends with.
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Yeah that was kinda what I was going for LOL XD
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7196986 okay but him more or less telling her how long she can stay up was just stupid to me.
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I knew that she hadn't done that yet, but it was something I could image would maybe happen.
Woah, things are developing fast, aren't they?
But interesting story so far.
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Glad you are liking the story so far, and thank you ever so much for commenting. :D
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Well he didn't tell her how long she could be up there for, he just didn't want her being up there for too long by herself is all. :)
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Well Dash & Rarity are 2 VERY different ponies. R is all about fashion & D is all about flying & probably thinks fashion is too fru fru to live. The episode "Super Speedy....6000" hints at why Dash & Pinkie don't get along
Here's a tip. Go through and listen to each chapter on the auto read function so you can catch spelling and grammatical errors, and also make sure the story flows the way you want it to.