word of this will make its way to every board room, dive bar and schoolyard
"Boardroom" is one word; there should be a comma in front of the "and". I really don't think they combine dive bars and schoolyards.
“Right away, Your Highness” he replies crisply
comma
the bench -- and by extension, his rod -- take on a pistoning motion
I see you are trying to use em dashes. Unfortunately they are not showing; for Windows the code is Alt+0151 and for Mac it is Shift+Option+-. There are also no spaces before or after em dashes. "the bench—and by extension, his rod—take on a pistoning motion"
The gift of...this.
There are is a space after an ellipsis.
I didn't pick out everything; I was too engrossed in reading.
because breathing is apparently overrated when it comes to getting caught giving head in the equivalent of a taxi
"Boardroom" is one word; there should be a comma in front of the "and". I really don't think they combine dive bars and schoolyards.
comma
I see you are trying to use em dashes. Unfortunately they are not showing; for Windows the code is Alt+0151 and for Mac it is Shift+Option+-. There are also no spaces before or after em dashes.
"the bench—and by extension, his rod—take on a pistoning motion"
There are is a space after an ellipsis.
I didn't pick out everything; I was too engrossed in reading.
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I don't understand how people can go into scalding hot water and find it a pleasant pain.
Damn nice laugh i had about that old Lady... Reminds me of a odd situation in a past job i had Well written story chapter