In a wasteland of ice and ash, a nameless man tries to find himself. With the help of a team of eight ponies, he might just accomplish that goal. However, in this wasteland, nothing is certain.
Ok so, first of all, loving this story. I really like this universe and I really like to know how it's going to continue ( I read the 7 chapters in 1 night ) and for this, I give this story 9 clows out of 3 circus ( a.k.a. "fucking love it ) Also, I get that the stalker ( awesome drawing by the way, for real ) is a feline ... Thing ... But everytime you wrote about it, I can't stop geting the idea of a Blizzard Chaser from the game Parasite Eve 2vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/parasiteeve/images/f/f3/Pe2-blizzard-chaser.png/revision/latest?cb=20150315152121 Hope seeing more of this story and good bye ... Because right now un Argentina it's 2:40 am ... Fucking awesome story.
I agree with the author. In addition, you'd probably want something that's common, such as 7.62x54mm (or x39), 5.56x45mm or 9x19mm parabellum, because that's what everyone else would have, right?
And you mentioned the K31. Love that rifle, I haven't found one on the market yet (mainly because I just go and browse gun shops instead of online.)
In all honesty, i'm that one asshole that would probably try to kill fluttershy for such a major bitch. I understand you want to protect animals and all, but do seriously want to take a bullet that would most likely go into you and exit you, killing the big ass cat behind you? My god, fluttershy...
Great story! The first only I really enjoy in a while.
Also, I hate to be that guy but...
"Your hurt, Fluttershy. Right front leg, your suit is ruptured. Go back to the tent and patch yourself and the suit up. Soon or you will get frostbite. Use antibiotics if you have any left, stalkers tend to carry nasty diseases."
I think you meant to say (You're hurt, Fluttershy) Instead of (Your hurt, Fluttershy)
It was a really cool looking chapter and I wonder what the stalker is thinking of the crazy pony who literally stared it into submission/Hesitation.
7311166 Well, I'm glad someone thinks so; so far. Thanks for the comment.
In my opinion, this chapter does not need a rewrite.
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Maybe I'm too hard on myself?
Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it.
I think the chapter is fine the way it is. I can't wait for the moment where he tells the ponies what happened to his home world.
...Why are you not working with Bethesda on the Fallout Series this would make a great story to play through
I wonder how they react to bandits and raiders... and maybe cannibals...
Ok so, first of all, loving this story. I really like this universe and I really like to know how it's going to continue ( I read the 7 chapters in 1 night ) and for this, I give this story 9 clows out of 3 circus ( a.k.a. "fucking love it )
Also, I get that the stalker ( awesome drawing by the way, for real ) is a feline ... Thing ... But everytime you wrote about it, I can't stop geting the idea of a Blizzard Chaser from the game Parasite Eve 2vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/parasiteeve/images/f/f3/Pe2-blizzard-chaser.png/revision/latest?cb=20150315152121
Hope seeing more of this story and good bye ... Because right now un Argentina it's 2:40 am ... Fucking awesome story.
I know Fluttershy cares for all animals, but come ON sometimes you need to put down predators, ESPECIALLY when it comes to survival.
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I agree with the author. In addition, you'd probably want something that's common, such as 7.62x54mm (or x39), 5.56x45mm or 9x19mm parabellum, because that's what everyone else would have, right?
And you mentioned the K31. Love that rifle, I haven't found one on the market yet (mainly because I just go and browse gun shops instead of online.)
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Guess the chapter really wasn't as bad as I thought...
Alright then, thank you all for your support! I'll stop worrying about it now and work on the next chapter.
In all honesty, i'm that one asshole that would probably try to kill fluttershy for such a major bitch. I understand you want to protect animals and all, but do seriously want to take a bullet that would most likely go into you and exit you, killing the big ass cat behind you? My god, fluttershy...
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Your comment reminded me of this.
Great story! The first only I really enjoy in a while.
Also, I hate to be that guy but...
I think you meant to say (You're hurt, Fluttershy) Instead of (Your hurt, Fluttershy)
0o0o0o shit my nigga Bambi did what i would have done
Some people call them stalkers, I call them BITCHES.
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