My eyes widened at the voice... No... nononoonono... Not again...
ENOUGH OF THIS
A howl of pain escaped my throat. My blade dropped to the ground as I gripped my helmet.
No... I don't want to here them again...
The pain was unbearable, and I fell to the ground, kneeling.
No... I don't want to go there again...
I am taking a guess that he is being transported to either silent hill or the nightmare realm/otherworld ?
Mary: In my restless dreams, I see that town... Silent Hill. You promised you'd take me there again some day... but you never did. Well, I'm alone there now in our special place... waiting for you.
Wait, how can he be hit with the stare? I mean, it's not lock she can make eye contact. And without it she can't use that kind of dark magic. Really, it's funny. The element of Kindness can use dark magic, and only dark magic.
3979304 ..... No, the fact that I'm stating here, is that most of these bad guy/villain stories do a good job of humanizing the villain, allowing the audience to understand and agree with their actions, setting up a sort of antihero type protagonist in the process. With Pyramid Head outright butchering/damaging the mane 6 as he did, it makes it harder for the readers to agree with his actions, and thus continue reading. A bit of exposition as to why would have been helpful, but still, the story did a bit of a 180, with that display of violence..... especially towards the mane 6. As for having a sheltered childhood, I'd say no. I've seen much worse, it was just surprising, and maybe not all that thought out. I'll still keep reading this story though....
He, if it can even be called an he, don't even know what sympathy or mercy is, doubt it give a shit about, pretty much everything that is not it's duty
3980072 i was making reference to Silent Hill 2,You can obtain his knife,And it can absolutely fuck his day up,With the downside of making him a fair bit faster
3980308 I know what you're thinking; "How does this guy know some much about Silent Hill then?"
Guess what. I don't. The only Silent Hills I've seen were both Movies (first one was better in terms of style, second one for terms of monsters) And I only played 2 games, Homecoming, and Downpour.
3980314 id reccomend finding a copy of the first three games,They honestly are the best...And im pretty sure you can find a couple of them on PSN,Which for SH2,I reccomend over the xbox,Due to the ps3 having a pressure sensitive button,Which you need in SH2 to do your different attacks
3980331 Quick note,Silent hill 1 doesn't have PH,But it IS a good game,So while it isnt important for writing PH,It DOES explain backstory of the town a bit,Aswell as act as a good timesink
But it's a human turned into pyramid head. That's the thing, I mean, it's your story do what you want with it, but it seemed as if the protagonist was just a guy who's stuck in the form of pyramid head. Basically, showing pyramid head's thoughts, showing that he's a brony, etc. made it appear he was just a human in the guise of pyramid head, and then having him do what he did, threw me for a loop, and I'm guessing a few others. But again, do what you will.
3980181 ............ I am aware who and what pyramid head is, while I have never played Silent Hill myself, I am quite aware of the lore. As for the rest of your comment, see above.
He's not Pyramid Head. You're writing him with a human mind, and even the fucking description says he's a cosplayer.
But than you're just being a lazy writer and word of godding the fact that he is supposed to be pyramid head. If you want PH in Equestria, than write a bleedin' PHiE. Don't add the fact that he is supposed to be a cosplayer brony who than mercilessly slaughters the mane six. It makes no fucking sense.
is it bad that i was completely unaffected by the story up to this point? i looked at the pictures and everything, an i felt nothing. also, i'm eating breakfast right now. the sausages are tasty.
Wow. Jolly good show!
I am taking a guess that he is being transported to either silent hill or the nightmare realm/otherworld ?
You do know that's the name of a cartoon right?
...Horey shet...
Good show my friend
Wait, how can he be hit with the stare? I mean, it's not lock she can make eye contact. And without it she can't use that kind of dark magic. Really, it's funny. The element of Kindness can use dark magic, and only dark magic.
and in the end there was one
...be glad that you are..
...... Hard to empathize even a little bit with that display of violence.
Kill...
Everything!
S*** just got REAL!!
Now that was a hardcore display.
3978104
I agree, KILL EVERYTHING IN-SIGHT! HAHAHAHA!
3977995 You clearly had a sheltered childhood.
3979304
..... No, the fact that I'm stating here, is that most of these bad guy/villain stories do a good job of humanizing the villain, allowing the audience to understand and agree with their actions, setting up a sort of antihero type protagonist in the process. With Pyramid Head outright butchering/damaging the mane 6 as he did, it makes it harder for the readers to agree with his actions, and thus continue reading. A bit of exposition as to why would have been helpful, but still, the story did a bit of a 180, with that display of violence..... especially towards the mane 6. As for having a sheltered childhood, I'd say no. I've seen much worse, it was just surprising, and maybe not all that thought out. I'll still keep reading this story though....
3979325 He's Pyramid Head! He's as inhuman as they come!
There is no sympathizing, just run and hope you're not found.
3979750 Or steal his knife,And fuck his day up
3979942
You can't handle that level of power!
3979942 Actually, the opposite. Twilight stole his Knife. She went insane.
3979325
Pyramid Head is the Embodiment of sins, and more
He, if it can even be called an he, don't even know what sympathy or mercy is, doubt it give a shit about, pretty much everything that is not it's duty
BTW, who it has come back to punish?
3980181 You'll see soon enough...
3980072 i was making reference to Silent Hill 2,You can obtain his knife,And it can absolutely fuck his day up,With the downside of making him a fair bit faster
3980256 Oh... (one does not simply...)
3980266 One DOES simply
3980294 No I mean i didn't understand because I haven't played it :/
3980305 ...Forgive me for assuming you had
3980308 I know what you're thinking;
"How does this guy know some much about Silent Hill then?"
Guess what. I don't. The only Silent Hills I've seen were both Movies (first one was better in terms of style, second one for terms of monsters) And I only played 2 games, Homecoming, and Downpour.
3980314 id reccomend finding a copy of the first three games,They honestly are the best...And im pretty sure you can find a couple of them on PSN,Which for SH2,I reccomend over the xbox,Due to the ps3 having a pressure sensitive button,Which you need in SH2 to do your different attacks
3980321 God, I'm good at being Pyramid Head. Only about four days, and I already have over 200 likes. I love you all, Homo or not!
3980331 Quick note,Silent hill 1 doesn't have PH,But it IS a good game,So while it isnt important for writing PH,It DOES explain backstory of the town a bit,Aswell as act as a good timesink
i need more chapters i havent played any of the games either but i have watched the cut scenes on youtube
3979750
But it's a human turned into pyramid head. That's the thing, I mean, it's your story do what you want with it, but it seemed as if the protagonist was just a guy who's stuck in the form of pyramid head. Basically, showing pyramid head's thoughts, showing that he's a brony, etc. made it appear he was just a human in the guise of pyramid head, and then having him do what he did, threw me for a loop, and I'm guessing a few others. But again, do what you will.
3980181
............ I am aware who and what pyramid head is, while I have never played Silent Hill myself, I am quite aware of the lore. As for the rest of your comment, see above.
3979750
Ok, but there is a problem with that.
He's not Pyramid Head. You're writing him with a human mind, and even the fucking description says he's a cosplayer.
But than you're just being a lazy writer and word of godding the fact that he is supposed to be pyramid head. If you want PH in Equestria, than write a bleedin' PHiE. Don't add the fact that he is supposed to be a cosplayer brony who than mercilessly slaughters the mane six. It makes no fucking sense.
Disliking for bad writing.
is it bad that i was completely unaffected by the story up to this point? i looked at the pictures and everything, an i felt nothing. also, i'm eating breakfast right now. the sausages are tasty.
Yes! Something actually happening in a fic XD but really i love the whole concept of kill everything.
Space herd.
"subjects"
"they"
There is no need for the question mark
"still a monster"
"into the castle"
This sentence makes no sense.
"mighty"
Missing a word.
Unlike most readers of fanfiction, I am unfeeling toward pain inflicted upon any beloved character.
5112484 I like you.