They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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7070928 *sighs* On it...
And the plot thickens. I mean the story's plot, not Celestia's.
I hope Bait will be alright.
That changeling is a spy!
7071263 I know, that's what the warnings are for.
7071358 Lol yeah, weaponized cute is the greatest weapon Equestria has.
Before I leave any comment, almost this entire thing is in italics.
7071538 Oh for...thanks
Love it so far. That was a chilling nightmare: From what I can put together, Chrysalis's mother died and her father took it... poorly.
Of course, more cuteness with Fluttershy and the nymphs. I don't really get the Bait the Irate nickname though. Isn't 'irate' supposed to mean 'very angry'? I guess it rhymes and that's all you'd need but still.
Also don't see Chrysalis accepting this evidence. After all, it's based on the assumption that she had a shortcut, and it's only one pony.
7071847 Exactly :)
Still, on "the Irate" thing, nicknames don't need to be particularly clever to stick. Plus, it can mean, "crazy" like "mad" can mean crazy, right? You get it? It works!
*sweats nervously*
I lost it at that.
Also, looks we're gonna have a gambit pileup.
7072262 I warned ya.
I love this story and love where it's going. Maybe we won't have to wait another six months for more?
7073906 God willing...
Yay, it's back!
7132165 warned ya.
7665443 lol glad to satisfy
Loving every moment of this story so far