Sexy story, sexier cover picture. Vinyl in a loose tank top should be its own genre.

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Is it just me or are her eyes a little dull? Aren't they supposed to be a brighter red?

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That's technically her canon eye color. The fandom gave her red eyes before we knew better.

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Oh ok, I guess your right. I didn't even notice that her eyes had gotten red. I guess I just accepted they looked the same.

My only complaint is it should have been longer. Other than that, very hot.

hope you actually continue this eventually.

You're a good writer, this was pretty fun for a one-shot, and I could see it developing into something cool. You have my fave and my like.

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Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story and the cover art. (Seriously, it's tough to find any art of Vinyl with her hair down.)

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I've been getting a good response, so I think I will probably pick this story up when I finish my currently running chaptered fic.

This story is complete for now, but I've had my head filled with ideas for taking the story further along the path of discretion, infidelity, and the advantages of being a princess. Be sure to favorite if you'd like to see the story continued.

Done. But I think there's a slightly different direction you might consider here: presuming narrative causality, how good are the odds that Vinyl might find herself independently accidentally hooking up with Shining Armor? After which there's a really obvious path towards getting them to forgive each other, which works rather well when Vinyl wubs both ways...

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That could be fun, but not quite as fun as the ideas I've been filled with.

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Might make for an interesting conclusion, though. (Or a side story of dubious canonicity.)

The dangers of reading simultaneously too much and not enough (never enough) of TheWraithWriter's work.

I could totally get behind the continuation of this. :D

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So can I. So. Can. I.

Great story and super funny. Would really like a lot to see it continued.

Oh Cady, you naughty girl you.

expected pinkie pie

gets cadence

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Fails to look at character tags.

Gets tricked by optimism.

3932678 twas a joke. perhaps i did not make that clear.

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Twas also a joke.

>The beat grew to a grueling pace, and suddenly quit, letting the sound of wet, frantic sex echo off the walls for a moment before the song ended on a single powerful bass note.
I don't know why but for some reason this caused that noise from inception to play in my head.

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“Y-you’re not my husband!”

Whoops...

you have my like and my fave. make more pleaseeeeeeeee.

3927215 Seconded! Sexy story and cover. I really liked the premise of the mistaken identity, too. Never caught my eye until now the similarity in color scheme and even the name. Nicely done!

More more more more!

Ok, I want more, Jondor. Pleaaaaase

just makes me want more of the fan.....

I see potential in this ship. I'm surprised it wasn't thought up sooner. I It's unconventional, unorthodox and undoubtedly provocative. Keep it up.

Somepony deliver some fan art pronto!

That Ending Though

Damn!

Lol, will Octavia be jealous?

“Y-you’re not my husband!”

Haha!