While I probably won't be reading a clopfic involving an 80+ year old granny, due to personal tastes, I admit I must applaud you for actually writing the damn thing.
Though slightly less great since they’d gotten a black princess…
It had been years since anyone had treated her as anything else than an elderly old nag [dats the N word for ponies]. None had treated her like a mare in years… well, unless you count family reunions.
I am speechless. I don't even know what to say to that. I don't think you want me to find the words either.
Also, why did he have green magic then? His magic is normally purple. Why would it suddenly change while fucking her?
I wanted to like this, because Trenderhoof/Granny Smith is awesome. I also love oral and rimming. Couldn't fully get into this story though, I'm sorry.
4152509 Laughter aside, I congratulate you for attempting such a thing, and with that I wish you a good morning, afternoon, or evening, depending on where you live. However, for future reference, look for grammar and spelling mistakes.
NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE
Ah SHIEEET...
I saw this and I had the reaction as the person below me.
hot
I've been waiting for this to happen. Now I can die fulfilled.
alive or dead nopony knows
I'm sorry to say I couldn't clop to this; at all
I think that every abomination of clop such as this requires two things
Puppies and kittens.
That should help prevent projectile vomiting.
While I probably won't be reading a clopfic involving an 80+ year old granny, due to personal tastes, I admit I must applaud you for actually writing the damn thing.
3929622 I'm allergic to adorableness!
Okay, that was pretty good. So far, it's the only Granny porn I've managed to read all the way through.
One gripe, though: a lady of that age would not get wet so easily. Things... dry out. (Then again, maybe it's different with horses...?)
*slowly stands up*
*walks over to sink to wash out eyes*
I am speechless. I don't even know what to say to that. I don't think you want me to find the words either.
Also, why did he have green magic then? His magic is normally purple. Why would it suddenly change while fucking her?
I wanted to like this, because Trenderhoof/Granny Smith is awesome. I also love oral and rimming. Couldn't fully get into this story though, I'm sorry.
4244728 two words: I don't know.
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I suppose those are the two magical words, even if they magically brought a third friend along.
I reviewed your story. Here, have a link.
3921710 I can safely agree with that comment.
4152509
Laughter aside, I congratulate you for attempting such a thing, and with that I wish you a good morning, afternoon, or evening, depending on where you live. However, for future reference, look for grammar and spelling mistakes.
YESYESYESYESYESYESIDONTCAREIFTHISISTHEWEIRDESTTHINGIVEEVERREADITSSOAWESOMEYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
This is good and weird at the same time. Liked reading it.