Underneath the saccharine veneer of Equestrian society there dwell the morbid, ominous realities unknown to most. Rainbow Dash and Big Mac are of the few who know something is wrong. Together they must stop the madness which threatens Equestria.
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I fully understand, friend. The anger stays. Sometimes you just want to stomp everything around you into fucking dust with your boot.
I'm sorry about the cursing in the story and my comment, but we both know that comes with it. Thank you for the kind words, man. Good luck to you.
And now you've basically summed up how I feel about my wife.
I'm pretty sure that I'd kill for her, if it came down to it - she's all I've got that I can look to and feel whole, do you know that feeling?
I'm not going to lie, this is one of the better stories on this site. It's real; no bullshit, no fairy-tales, no cushioned plot - just raw emotion and broken problems. It's like looking into a mirror - sometimes it makes me feel uncomfortable, other times it makes me feel better about my own life.
God bless you for this - I appreciate what you've made here.
Just kiss and get it over with, your pussying around Mac and you know it
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It's not quite that simple, my dear. Some people are just fucked up. You know it, and I know it. There's barriers keeping them apart. Eventually, they might break them, but it's not at all a forced literary mechanism on my part...in my humble opinion. They're afraid. Terrified.
Also, you're from Britain, correct? Would you mind correcting me on any of Steelheart's UK slang? He about as Cockney as you can get, so there's a lot of it. Plus, it's fun to say "wanker."
I got a bad feeling of that party. Mac should go to protect Dash... maybe not, or he will kill flitter. The feels!!!
I had a problem with the change of scene. I don't know the others. Just saying.
So, when is the next chapter?
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It's never that easy, they are (in this moment) to scare and trapped with their inside demons. it had to happen in a certain time, and when they are crushing for still trying to be alive.
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I know it isn't that simple XD Just expressing my feels, something I'm not good at, the slang seemed fine to me ^^ and "Wanker" is a fun word, as is "bollox"
Well, stop expressing them! STOP IT!!
Understood. I wasn't criticizing you, by the way. I can hardly have the two get together in the beginning chapters, though. Anticlimactic.
UK slang is indeed fun to say. Bollocks, wanker, sod off, shite...etc.
Also, just a heads up, guys...
Chapter Eight's going to be a little sexually graphic and violent. If that makes you guys uncomfortable, this ain't the story for you, I'm afraid.
But don't worry. I'm not inserting this sort of content to make it grotesque or pornographic. It's just to elucidate the nature of a new character. I'm not too keen on making cartoon horse torture porn...so, yeah. None of that.
Prepare yourselves.
Seriously...you are NOT going to like this new character. Even a little.
If you do, then you have some serious problems. But don't we all?
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But if you really like the story, would you mind sharing it with a few people? I'd like it to get a bit of a wider audience.
Cripes, Mac. So judgmental. I mean, sure, she's a hateful, smarmy, manipulative, cruel pony, but you didn't know that.
That's so sweet! He wanted to FUCK- I mean... Kiss, her so badly!