Underneath the saccharine veneer of Equestrian society there dwell the morbid, ominous realities unknown to most. Rainbow Dash and Big Mac are of the few who know something is wrong. Together they must stop the madness which threatens Equestria.
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Sigmund Freud was a hack - he couldn't accept that people had more than two dimensions. This is why modern psychology is a joke. Other than that, this was a good chapter.
That was pretty good, and it's getting better. Having Mac start freaking out at the end about actually developing feelings for Rainbow Dash was a tad melodramatic, but whatever.
The long expository pieces were also better woven into the narrative, and seemed more relevant to the plot this time around. They still feel like a diversion when the main story involved Mac squashing a mountain lion and him and Rainbow giggling about it for the rest of the day (that was some high quality loser-bonding, there), but it had enough apparent importance to convince me to read the whole thing.
That ending....
Fuck me that's deep.