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Hross
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This story is amazing, I hope Mac and Dash get together soon
Thank you, friend. But it's going to be a long story...you'll have to wait.
I've got some cray cray stuff planned for future chapters.
thats a lot of deleted comments. almost makes me not read the story.
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Sorry about that. They weren't exclusively negative comments. I only deleted them, because they were no longer relevant to the now defunct pilot chapter. I've long since gotten rid of that chapter, so it didn't seem necessary to keep the comments about it. I've fixed all the problems with the story since. Don't worry about me censoring criticism or anything. Feel free. Fire away.
THE FEELS!!!!!!!! This is now my favorite story
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More feels inbound, my friend. We're taking a trip into the Void itself with this one.
Hang in there, buddy. It'll get better. Thanks for reading.
Damn it Rainbow! Kiss him already
next chapters please! this is getting mysterious!
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I appreciate your enthusiasm, miss. I'm almost done with the seventh chapter...I'm working on it at the same time I'm knocking out my mid-term paper. Bear with me. It'll all make sense later.
By the way...what does "yaoi" mean? I'm...afraid to Google it...
4110282 I understand you, I'm working on my thesis. Take your sweet time!
Yaoi is the japanese name of man same-sex relationship. Yuri is the same but for females. Nothing to be scary about it.
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Err...I'm not sure I follow...Not trying to be rude, though....
So, you're a gay male? But a mistress? I apologize, if I seem ignorant on the subject. Just a confused, former Marine Neanderthal.
4112089 I'm a girl that like stories about same-sex couples, mostly manga and anime. My english suck so bear with me for a while:
I hope you have a better translator than me.
As a veteran myself, I can understand that rage... I've had to fight it for well on a decade, and it never goes away. It really does get to you; you think about doing things to people that aren't right - you get a sick thrill over the thought of physically hurting others, and it makes you sick for hours afterwards. It got so bad one week that I physically evicted myself from my own house in fear of what I might do to my wife... You never truly leave the war-zone, or at least I never did.
Thanks for bringing this subject out there. Not many people actually know about Battlefield Rage.
Aside from the gratuitous cursing, this looks to be a good story.
Ah, Nightmares... Those are always such a nice way to wake up...
You've pegged the condition proper. I commend your writing skills.
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I fully understand, friend. The anger stays. Sometimes you just want to stomp everything around you into fucking dust with your boot.
I'm sorry about the cursing in the story and my comment, but we both know that comes with it. Thank you for the kind words, man. Good luck to you.
Sigmund Freud was a hack - he couldn't accept that people had more than two dimensions. This is why modern psychology is a joke. Other than that, this was a good chapter.
And now you've basically summed up how I feel about my wife.
I'm pretty sure that I'd kill for her, if it came down to it - she's all I've got that I can look to and feel whole, do you know that feeling?
I'm not going to lie, this is one of the better stories on this site. It's real; no bullshit, no fairy-tales, no cushioned plot - just raw emotion and broken problems. It's like looking into a mirror - sometimes it makes me feel uncomfortable, other times it makes me feel better about my own life.
God bless you for this - I appreciate what you've made here.
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It's not quite that simple, my dear. Some people are just fucked up. You know it, and I know it. There's barriers keeping them apart. Eventually, they might break them, but it's not at all a forced literary mechanism on my part...in my humble opinion. They're afraid. Terrified.
Also, you're from Britain, correct? Would you mind correcting me on any of Steelheart's UK slang? He about as Cockney as you can get, so there's a lot of it. Plus, it's fun to say "wanker."
I got a bad feeling of that party. Mac should go to protect Dash... maybe not, or he will kill flitter. The feels!!!
I had a problem with the change of scene. I don't know the others. Just saying.
So, when is the next chapter?
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It's never that easy, they are (in this moment) to scare and trapped with their inside demons. it had to happen in a certain time, and when they are crushing for still trying to be alive.
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I know it isn't that simple XD Just expressing my feels, something I'm not good at, the slang seemed fine to me ^^ and "Wanker" is a fun word, as is "bollox"
Well, stop expressing them! STOP IT!!
Understood. I wasn't criticizing you, by the way. I can hardly have the two get together in the beginning chapters, though. Anticlimactic.
UK slang is indeed fun to say. Bollocks, wanker, sod off, shite...etc.
Also, just a heads up, guys...
Chapter Eight's going to be a little sexually graphic and violent. If that makes you guys uncomfortable, this ain't the story for you, I'm afraid.
But don't worry. I'm not inserting this sort of content to make it grotesque or pornographic. It's just to elucidate the nature of a new character. I'm not too keen on making cartoon horse torture porn...so, yeah. None of that.
Prepare yourselves.
Seriously...you are NOT going to like this new character. Even a little.
If you do, then you have some serious problems. But don't we all?
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But if you really like the story, would you mind sharing it with a few people? I'd like it to get a bit of a wider audience.
The feelsssss!!!!!!!! It almost makes me not want to read until it is finish it... damn it. what to do, what to do...
Poor red
sad but I can't wait to see what happens next
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Hang in there, buddy. Even broken animals like John Apple and Rainbow Dash will get a chance at love. Speaking of which, I feel it sufficiently relevant to state that us guys love a good romance as much as the ladies do...contrary to popular opinion...it just has to be genuine...unlike The Notebook...or any of the Twilight books.
On a side note, I've..uhh...just discovered some of the "brony community." I know not all of us are like this, but the bad eggs really...really seem to overshadow we non-neckbeards. Look at these motherfuckers!
http://images.sodahead.com/profiles/0/0/2/5/3/8/9/5/3/brony-my-little-pony-fat-86573561630.jpeg
https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQdUca_T1DHWvL9jcXS_ysyuYRYmwcG-nL7_SNeq9Ahw1z-OPDGhg
And...worst of all...this guy:
http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140221163809/real-life-villains/images/7/7f/Typical_brony.jpeg
Something must be done about this shit...I don't know what...but we gotta' do something. This is terrifying.
Oh yes the common stereotype where dudes can't read romance but girls love it
but whatever and those pics! The first one made me flinch. I can't Believe that people do that shit it's really gross
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I know, right? Man, them shits is fucked up.
Anyway...random question about these "human in Equestria" stories: How terrified would medium dog-sized, little ponies be of massive, smart chimpanzees running about? Pretty terrified, I'd imagine...I'm not a friendly-looking guy myself. I'd imagine they'd call us "trolls" or something similar.
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Nigga, you better answer my completely inane questions, or I ain't rollin' out Chapter Nine until Armageddon...which could be any day now...so maybe that was an empty threat....crap.
Can I try that again?
Lol sorry for not answering earlier and I think if humans were in it equestria we would probably be listed under the scary as shit monsters
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Nah, you're good, man. I'm just messing with you. Anyway...yeah. I agree with you. Humans are indeed terrifying. I wouldn't want to be a pony just for that reason. It'd be like having giant monkeys as your new overlords.
I would feel so bad for the ponies especially if people tried to ride them, it would probably Scar them for life
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Probably, man. That...and we'd break their spines trying to ride them. But they're so little!!...awww...who could be mean to little, talking horsies?
Ninth chapter is almost done...it's got an introduction to Mac's life as an SF operator...so get ready for military jargon and a bunch of references you probably won't know or care about! (Oh, joy of joys!!) Clearly, I'm best writer in human history. Clearly. Bear with me, and I'll be able to write the best Michael Crichton-esque fanfiction about little, cartoon horsies in human history!! Just as I've always dreamed! I have rather humble dreams, you see...
Don't worry, though, ladies. I know you just want the romance part...I shall deliver. But I need to expand both Mac and Rainbow's backgrounds before getting into that. You girls probably have no interest in hearing about weapons, fighting, and whatnot. Fair enough. But suffering begets profundity...pain makes pleasure worthwhile. Love is all the sweeter when you have to fight and suffer for it. It's a style of romance that can appeal to men as well. A roMANce. Eeyup. I know what my fans want...all four of you. Don't mob me all at once, guys! Please...it's embarrassing...hehehehe...I know...I know. I'm super cool, right? (...so alone...)
It's not all going to be blood, death, drugs, madness, and despair. I'll be adding bits of levity and light-hearted stuff here and there. It takes more than just gravitas to make good drama...all dark and no light doth wangsty, hipster crap make. Also, humor. "Stories without a sense of humor suck and are completely unrealistic," said the man who wrote a story about magical, talking ponies, dragons, chimeras, what-have-you. There's humor in everything...no matter how morbid. Even during the darkest, most dreadful times in one's life, one can find things to laugh about.
Ok it official chapter nine sounds awesome and only heartless douche bags get Joy by hurting innocent animals. And dude I think if it came down to it ponies would kick peoples asses
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Uhh...I gotta' disagree there, man...all humans would have to do is send a bunch of 220-250 lbs guys with automatic weapons. How is a pint-sized, little horse going to stop a bunch of big apes armed to the teeth? They wouldn't last a week. The poor things wouldn't stand a chance. But who'd be coldhearted enough to hurt 'em? Look at their widdle faces! Awww...they're scared...nobody could bring themselves to hurt 'em.
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ponyville_kneeling_to_Luna_S2E4.png
Hmm...maybe that's the ponies' primary defense against us...cuteness...
Hey they can give people heart attacks from over cuteness ponies can be dangerous, especially when they do the puppy eyes
http://iambrony.dget.cc/mlp/gif/17606__safe_pinkie-pie_animated_puppy-dog-eyes.gif
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*heart explodes in chest*.....well...I'm comin' home to see ya' again Grandpa....
See? Ponies can be deadly with ultra cuteness.