Good story so far but I just feel I have to point something out, beside the fact he says he can remember thing from when he was born ^^, and that is that no pony have more than one cutie mark, sure I can't remember how you described his cutie mark but will still have to have been one and not two cutie marks, would try and go into a more in dept talk about the cutie marks but I don't right now see ya..
You're bringing 9/11 into this....................................................
Good story so far but I just feel I have to point something out, beside the fact he says he can remember thing from when he was born ^^, and that is that no pony have more than one cutie mark, sure I can't remember how you described his cutie mark but will still have to have been one and not two cutie marks, would try and go into a more in dept talk about the cutie marks but I don't right now see ya..
435300 I apologize. I'm completely remaking the story, since I'm disappointed in it. The tragedy will not be 9/11.
435300 we will remember there who kill and die on that day. but we must move forwards.