I get sent to Equestria somehow. But, it's better than on Earth.
A young adult by the name of John Daniels is unknowingly transported to Equestria. Along the way, he makes some new friends, sees some new places, and even finds his own love.
And some other cheesy stuff.
This was the first story I ever made. The original version is on Fanfiction, but the version here is undergoing a modern rewrite.
It's not entirely done yet, so expect some moldy cheesiness ahead.
I'll make one thing clear: I was never good with introductions. Seriously, I'm EXTREMELY terrible at introducing myself...BUT that doesn't mean I won't introduce myself. To start off, my name is John Daniels. I'm a 21 year old white male, I was born and raised here in North America, and...well...my life fucking sucks. That's all I have to say.
I have no parents, no girlfriend, and until I can get some more money, I'm stuck in a small apartment in New York City, also known as "Crime Central." I like to call it the real life Arkham City. And there's many reasons why this shit hole of a city is given those names. Every night, I can hear a woman screaming for help, but everyone knows no one helps each other anymore. There can be only two options: She gets raped and lives, or is raped and dies. It's mostly the latter nowadays. Surviving rape is extremely rare in North America.
But rape isn't the only thing that happens. Some nights, you can hear a gunfight from a mile away as the gunshots echo in the air. After that, there's always those goddamn sirens. It's impossible to get a good night sleep. And yet the government doesn't give a single fuck about this city. Seriously, the government has done nothing to make America a better place. The worst came when Romney was elected in 2012. That's when things started going completely downhill. Gas prices rose, stores had gone bankrupt. Soon enough, America was labeled "the most dangerous country on Earth." Crime in America had risen to 93%. Yeah, I know. I can barely believe it, either.
A year ago, I hoped America would soon change and become a better country. Nowadays, I actually wish enemy countries would just wipe us off this godforsaken planet. Once you do so much to a world, there's no going back...
...Ahem...I seem to be getting off topic here. Let's get on with it.
It was one of those extremely and surprisingly rare calm days in New York. Meaning, no screams, no gunfights, and no sirens. Just the occasional traffic horns and sounds of shuffling feet. And so you don't constantly wonder about the damn date, it's April 30th, 2016. Happy?
...Anyway, today was a rather upsetting day. I just recently threw my remote on the couch in anger. Why? I had just watched a news report that claimed that the Titanic II had sunk. No, this wasn't a movie. It was the real deal. Three years to complete. An hour to take it down.
Damn Chinese. You may think it sounds racist, but it's true. Every product that China makes is easily breakable. They build a boat, tap it with your finger, you can easily puncture a hole in the damn thing. It took a tug boat...A FUCKING TUG BOAT...to take down an 886 1/2 foot long cruise ship. The Chinese need to stop making everything out of goddamn plastic and use a stronger material for once.
I apologize, I seem to be getting off topic here. AGAIN. Let me continue. After I turned off the TV, I held the note that my girlfriend had given me. Well, my ex-girlfriend. I opened it up and read it once more.
"We need to talk."
Those words echoed through my head. A simple conversation turned into a tragic break up. Ain't my life fucking grand?
...
Eh, she was a bitch anyway.
In anger, I crumpled up the note and threw it in the trash. Excuse me, tried to. Unsuccessfully, the crumpled up paper landed just a foot from the trash can, forcing me to get up and throw it away. Once I threw the trash out, my eyes made their way to a picture. My eyes quickly avoided the picture, but I couldn't resist anymore, forcing me to look at it again, bringing tears to my eyes once again. This wasn't any old picture...It was of me and my parents.
I forgot to tell you about them, didn't I? Allow me to explain.
When I was born in 1995, I was raised by a fairly money-sustained family. My mother, Wendy Daniels, was an architect for the Museum of Natural History. My father, Thomas Daniels, was a businessman at the World Trade Center - the old one, mind you. Over the years, we did fairly well. We made a ton of money, I did well in school, and once I was old enough, my father and I managed to create our own little business together.
My life was once perfect...until that one night. It was not too long ago, in 2008. I was only 13 at the time. In fact, it was my birthday, and my family decided to take me to a special place. I already knew where we were going, but I still acted happy and acted surprised, mostly because I actually was.
As my parents drove us to the area, a pair of headlights blinded all of us. I heard a crashing noise, and the next thing I know, I was upside down. Being old enough, I knew the car was upside down. It took me a couple of seconds to get my seat belt off, and I quickly crawled through one of the smashed windows. Just as I did, I felt a pair of hands help me up, and noticed that much of the people in the city block came to help out. Once they helped me, I went back to the car to see if my parents were okay. When I saw them, the tears quickly came down my face like a river. My parents didn't even look like people. Seeing them, they reminded me of sick, twisted, mutated monsters that you would sometimes see in the movies. It was enough to make me scream.
After that incident, I didn't speak for well up to a month, even at and after the funeral. It was too painful to know that my parents were gone. Taken away from me in the fraction of a second. It felt so unreal. But I had to face the truth.
After that, the business my father and I had started a while ago closed down. Even after all those years, I still walked to the place we started it, now beginning to become overgrown with vegetation and vines.
Just before the funeral, my grandparents visited me, feeling my sorrow. It wasn't long after that they actually bought the house. I could still live in the home I was raised in, but not with the same people, but I was at least glad it was with family.
Soon enough, 2013 came along, and I finally graduated from High School. I eventually packed up my things and was headed to college. Just a year later, I got a call saying that my grandparents had suffered fatal heart attacks. I didn't attend their funeral...I just couldn't. I just watched two of my most important family members die. I couldn't stand to go to the funeral of two more.
After that, the remaining college years went by like a breeze, and soon enough, I was out of college. That was two months ago. I decided to apply for a job at the World Trade Center, the same place my father once worked. The job was fine. I heard it payed its employees just enough as when my father worked here...I found out that was a big, fat fucking lie. They can barely pay any people two goddamn dollars as a raise now. I barely had enough money to afford the shitty apartment I now live in. Of course, I had completely forgotten that North America had gone into another Great Depression, much more severe than in 1929. And you know who caused it? Mitt Romney.
I'm just gonna go and break the 4th wall here. I basically live in an alternate universe, different from yours. Instead of Obama winning in 2012, it was Romney, and unlike your world, my world literally went to utter shit and chaos. Though some things in our worlds did happen at the same times. Like that Snowden guy who exposed what the NSA's doing to us, but different things have also happened here. Remember North Korea? In our world, they successfully managed to nuke one of our major cities. Right after that, just 24 hours after, America opened up a new tourist attraction, called "The North Korean Crater."
Alright, I've told too much. Allow me to continue where I originally left off.
After looking at the picture for what felt like forever, I headed back over to the couch and sat down once more in the cushions. I then picked up my remote and turned on the TV once more. I flipped through around twenty channels. Nothing good seemed to be on at the moment. Deciding not to watch television, I then got up and headed to my movie shelf, and looked through the DVD's that I had. There was nothing interesting to watch.
Then I remembered something. My friend had given me a DVD last month. I headed to my bedroom, and looked under my dresser drawer. There was a tiny little safe, with the same color as my carpet. I put in the combination, entered it, and opened the safe. Inside contained a DVD case, labeled, "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic - Season's 1 - 5".
For some of you people who probably don't know, My Little Pony was a rebooted cartoon that had this big fandom, called bronies. If I remember correctly, they were teenage to adult males who loved the show. When I first heard about them, I thought they were just internet trolls. Then overtime, I knew these guys weren't messing around. They actually liked this show.
I live right next to the place where they hosted this thing called "BroNYcon", some huge convention where tons of bronies throughout the U.S, and possibly the world, gathered. They had other conventions like this one, but the only ones I could remember were BroNYcon, GalaCon, and Equestria LA.
Since the show started in 2010, the fandom grew to an enormous amount of people. By 2013, there were over 50 million people on the Earth alone who had become bronies. By then, there were 8 billion people on Earth.
I didn't hate bronies. I had a few friends who were bronies, and I didn't hate them. I even listen to some brony music, like from TheLivingTombstone, YellingAtCats, and MicTheMicrophone. Online everywhere, bronies posted things, saying the fandom and the show, which was in its 5th season, would live on forever, and that the fandom would never die.
That was until the same year of 2013. Apparently, somehow, at one of the conventions - I believe it was Equestria LA - One of the voice actors for one of the characters - I think her name was Apple Bloom - was kidnapped. They noticed, like, 10 minutes later, then created a search party to look for her. They did manage to find her about an hour later, but when they did, a few had vomited at the sight. No, she wasn't dead...but...she was raped. They could see whip marks, bruises, and worst of all, semen and blood pouring out of her.
It sickened me, but the one thing that made my stomach turn was the fact that she was only 14 years old. 14. FUCKING. YEARS. OLD. Who the fuck does that to a 14 year old girl?!
Turns out, I got my answer just a week after the incident. It turns out, it was not just one brony, but many bronies, ranging from 10-13 bronies. When I saw this on the news, I was completely shocked, as were my friends. Bronies already had a bad name online, then some bronies brought the fandom to a whole new low.
Within a few days, there was another news broadcast, saying brony conventions were going to be shut down forever, then there was news that Hasbro was cancelling the show.
Just a few days after that was announced, riots broke out all across the world, ranging from the US, to Germany, to Australia, and even China. We eventually found out that the rioters were all bronies, outraged and angered by the cancellation of the show. The government announced bronies were dangerous to the public, but I thought the government was taking things a little too far.
Soon after, a group called the A.B.A. - Anti Brony Alliance - swarmed in and took out a large number of bronies. And by "took out", I mean they killed them. All over the world, the A.B.A. captured bronies and shot them point blank in their heads. Pretty soon, the world's population dropped from 8 billion to 7 billion, just as it was in 2012.
By the end of 2015, two years later, the government announced that if anyone were to see a brony, they are to be taken to the A.B.A. and executed, and that all My Little Pony related products were to be burned immediately. I then said to myself that the government stooped to an all new low. They have no rights to just take someone who likes a cartoon and kill them, even if a lot of the fandom went on a rampage.
Pretty soon, most of the artifacts of My Little Pony were erased from the world. The show no longer appeared on television, all of the songs, art, and uploaded episodes on the internet were deleted, and websites of My Little Pony were shut down.
Before that all happened, whenever I walked the streets of New York, I'd see many people wearing pony shirts with pictures of the characters, with captions such as "20% cooler" or "FUS RO yay". Do I see that anymore? Fuck no, thanks to the fucking government.
In order to avoid being killed by the A.B.A., my friends stopped wearing all of their pony shirts and clothing whenever they went out. But that doesn't mean they got rid of it. They kept this hidden safe in their rooms, where they would put their stuff. I forgot to tell you, the A.B.A. does monthly inspections in homes throughout the world, in search of pony related products. If they found one pony product in a home, that would be enough proof that the owner of the home is a brony, and he/she would be executed.
Just shows how fucked up the world is now.
Anyway, last month, my friend told me to meet in an alleyway at noon, so I met him. He then gave me a DVD set of the first - and last - 5 seasons of the cartoon. He wanted me to keep it. He got caught with it 3 months ago and was nearly executed, but with his clever mind and words, he was let off with a warning, but surprisingly, they didn't take the DVD from him. He knew it wasn't safe at his house, so he gave it to me.
I quickly headed home and locked my door. I quickly headed to my bedroom and put the DVD in the safe, which I installed several months ago.
So...I guess this leads to now.
I hadn't seen the cartoon yet, but since the inspection by the A.B.A. wasn't for another 2 weeks, I guess it would be a good time to watch. Although, I'll have to keep the volume down unless I want to attract attention from my neighbors.
I pulled the DVD case out of the safe, closed the safe, then headed back into my living room. I took the DVD out of the case, and put it into the DVD player. I then shut the DVD player, and pressed play.
The intro of the show comes on, as it shows the six ponies singing the theme song. Once the intro ends, it says, "Developed for television by Lauren Faust."
Wait...Lauren Faust made this?! THE Lauren Faust? The same Lauren Faust that created Powerpuff girls, Codename: Kids Next Door, and Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends?!
...Maybe this could be good, after all.
It was now 10:00 pm. I had already watched 10 episodes of the show. I have to admit...this show is pretty amazing. It has great acting, great animation, and great actors, such as Tara Strong. Yes, Tara Strong. Y'know, the actor that plays Princess Clara and Timmy Turner and Ben Tennyson. On this show, she plays one of the characters named Twilight Sparkle.
After watching just 10 episodes, I now knew all of their names. There's Pinkie, Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy.
I know this might be a little creepy to say, but Fluttershy actually looks kinda...pretty. I know it might be weird - and maybe a bit creepy - to have a crush or to fall in love with a cartoon character, but trust me, I'm not the only one.
Soon after, my stomach began to rumble. Of course, the last time I ate anything was at noon today, so obviously, I'd be hungry after 10 hours. Picking up my phone, I dialed the phone number to the nearest Papa John's. Since I had a bit of money left, I decided to order 4 boxes instead of the occasional one box. Tonight, I'd eat 1 box, and have the remaining 3 boxes for the next 3 days. Since I wouldn't get what is called a raise nowadays for the next week, this pizza will be my only last meal for a little while.
The time between calling and the pizza arriving was around 10 minutes, so not very long. The pizza man explained to me that he would've gotten here sooner, had it not been for the gunfight that occurred in a minor traffic jam. After explaining, he pointed to his delivery car, covered with bullet holes. Jesus Christ...
After paying the man, he bid farewell and left...I hope he made it safely back...
After I finished the box of pizza, I put the other 3 boxes in the fridge and headed to the bathroom to take a shower. I just sat in the shower, thinking about why the world went to hell so quickly. It wasn't the fandom's fault. It was those 10-13 bronies that raped that voice actor. They should be the ones executed. The government shouldn't punish an entire fandom because of some bronies' stupid actions. It almost makes suicide worth thinking about.
As I was thinking about the current years, I slowly close my eyes, letting my mind begin to wander off. I just did nothing but think...Think and wonder. Think about the hellish world I now live in, and wonder what it might look like in...10 years? 50? 100? Hell...there might not be anything left by next year.
I constantly wondered and thought of this world...until the squeak interrupted my train of thought.
Wait a second...squeak?
I open my eyes for a brief moment to see what could've caused it. That was when I questioned my mind if I was seeing a hallucination. In front of me was the yellow cartoon butterfly-flanked pony, Fluttershy. Of course, I didn't exactly question my mind. I definitely was seeing a hallucination. Fluttershy was in the bathtub with me, but she wasn't looking at me. Instead, her eyes were closed, and she was smiling, also playing with a little rubber duck. Everytime she squeezed it, it went, "Squeak! Squeak! Squeak!"
At that moment, I felt as if my heart was going to burst from the sheer adorableness that occurred in front of me. I just wanted to reach my hand out and pet her. And that's exactly what I was doing. But before my hand even got close to petting her, she suddenly faded away from sight, the duck fading with her, the squeaks fading along. I simply remembered that it was just a hallucination, not the real thing...Sad, really. It was the one thing that made me smile for the first time in...I don't know how long. But everything comes to an end sooner or later.
Not long after the hallucination occurrence, I finished my bath and finally got out. I grabbed my towel and began to slowly dry myself off. Once I was finally dry, I headed into my bedroom and proceeded to put on my clothes. Once I had my boxers and some shorts on, I turned on my TV, placed the DVD into the DVD player, and pressed play. I then headed to my bed and laid down. I grabbed the DVD remote and skipped the first 10 episodes until it got to episode 11, "Winter Wrap Up".
Finally, the episode started.
It was now about 1:30 a.m. The streets were still filled with the sounds of honking horns, people walking, and even the sounds of death. Lights were still on at this time of night. They always were...
I kept the TV on so the episodes still played. As I slept, I began to have a dream about...well...living in Equestria. As I dreamt this, I realized how different Equestria was from Earth. Equestria was a heavenly paradise. Everyone was nice to you, there was almost no evil, but also, nopony really died until old age.
On Earth, crime is daily, the government approved of a group who wants to wipe out the remains of the bronies, and global warming is melting the ice caps. The oceans are already flooding into the streets of Manhattan, but people decided not to panic. Pfft. Can't wait to see their faces when a tsunami comes in and kills them all.
Then, sadly, I woke up in my bedroom, which was dark but was partially bright because of the lights of the city shining through and the TV. I looked to see what episode was on. The girls seemed to be on a train heading to the city on the mountain side known as Canterlot. It was snowing outside.
I looked at the show description. The episode was called "Hearth's Warming Eve." I assume it's similar to Christmas Eve. It's pretty funny about the names of the holidays on here. Nightmare Night is basically Halloween, Hearth's Warming Eve is Christmas, and.....well, I don't think they have a holiday for Thanksgiving.
I realized that Equestria would be a lot better to live in than where I live now. Stupidly, I closed my eyes and made a wish.
"I wish I could go to Equestria."
Like anyone would expect, nothing happened.
"Well, that was pretty stupid of me," I said to myself.
All of a sudden, under the door that led to the living room, I saw a light. I also heard a sound, sort of like a very long "Wooosh" sound. I decided to get out of bed to check it out.
I opened the door, and saw in the corner, a bright ovaly circle, spinning rapidly. It was a portal.
The moment I saw the portal, I jumped back, startled.
"W-What the fuck?" I yelled. Some people would probably be cool with seeing something like this. Me? I was freaking out of my mind. Th-This was impossible! There is no way I was actually seeing this with my own two eyes. Could I...just be dreaming? Or was I awake and my mind was playing tricks on me?
I had to find out. Slowly, I began to walk closer to the portal. Expecting something to lash out and grab me, I jumped back, but nothing happened. The portal continued to spur and spin. I continued my walk towards it. Finally, once I was in "arms reach" of it, I began to risk peering through it.
It showed a faint view of a small village. Wait, that village looks familiar. Like, awfully familiar, like I've seen it before.
Wait a second...is...is that...Ponyville?
Suddenly, just as I knew what the village was, the portal seemed to grow, slowly at first, but quickly got bigger and bigger. Soon enough, I could feel a suction sensation, and quickly realized...I was being pulled into the portal. Before I managed to grab onto anything, the portal sucked me through. For mere seconds, I felt complete weightlessness, as if I was floating in the depths of space. However, I only experience it for almost 20 seconds before suddenly blacking out.
I slowly opened my eyes to see the sun shining brightly in the sky. I squinted until I sat up. I then looked at my surroundings. I happened to be in a large field. There was a path next to me that led somewhere. I then felt a little bit of my hair get in the way of one of my eyes. I brushed it away with one of my hooves.
Wait...hooves? I looked at my other hand, which was replaced with a hoof. I tried to look at myself but couldn't get a good view. I knew, though, that I was...a pony. Which means...if I'm a pony...I'm in Equestria!
I wish I had a mirror to see what I looked like. But then I noticed the physics of the show. If this place is the same as the show, the physics could be the same. What I'm saying is like during "Sweet and Elite," Pinkie suddenly grabs a Party Cannon out of nowhere.
Slowly, I reached into a fur pocket that I seemed to have. I reached around but felt nothing. I pulled my hoof out, and suddenly, I had a mirror in my hoof. Wait, how can I hold this if I don't have any fingers?
Never mind, that doesn't matter. I then brought the mirror up to my face.
I looked with interesting results. I was a darkish blue pony, with very dark brown hair. I looked to the side of me where a cutie mark would be. I had a cutie mark of a dark cloud with a lightning bolt shooting out of it.
That doesn't seem to be anything interesting. But then again, Rainbow Dash does have a cutie mark of a cloud with a Rainbow colored lightning bolt shooting out. I wonder if my special talent is the same as hers. That will be something to see later.
I then placed the mirror back into my pocket, and decided to follow the trail. It was a little difficult for a few moments to walk on all fours, but I got used to it pretty quick.
As I walked, I heard the sound of something passing by. I looked around. I spotted a blue blur flying through the sky. Was it Soarin of the Wonderbolts? No, that couldn't be him. He's always with Spitfire and...that other Wonderbolt that I can't seem to remember.
I then realized it wasn't Soarin. It was the fastest flier in Equestria. Rainbow Dash. I couldn't believe it. Just hours ago, I was watching Rainbow on a small television, and there she was, right in front of my eyes.
She had landed in the shade of a tree to take a break, I guess. She sleeps nearly all day. Then, I decided to talk to her.
So, I walked over to the shade. But while I was, I realized that they don't know me, so I have to pretend I have heard about her from Ponyville or something.
"Hey!" I yelled to her. She looked at me with surprise.
"You're Rainbow Dash, right?" I asked.
"Yeah! Fastest flyer in Equestria! You've heard of me?"
"I have. I am a big fan of you and I was wondering if I could...have your autograph," I said to her, pulling out from my fur pocket a pen and picture of Rainbow posing like a Wonderbolt.
"Sure," Rainbow said, smiling as she took the pen and picture. She signed her name onto it and gave it back to me.
I can't believe it. First I'm talking to Rainbow Dash, now I got an autograph from her.
"What's your name?" She asked me.
I completely forgot to think of a name. I then looked at my Cutie Mark and quickly thought of a name.
"Thunder. Thunder...Ice," I replied to her. I then smiled.
"Y'know, when you pulled that picture and pen out, you kind of reminded me of a friend of mine who happens to pull things out of nowhere."
"Pinkie Pie?" I said to her. Inside, I slapped myself. I completely forgot I wasn't supposed to know who they were.
Rainbow's eyes widened a bit. "How do you know about Pinkie?" She stepped back a foot. Or is it hoof...?
"Sorry. I had heard about Sugarcube Corner. I heard it had the best sweets in Equestria, and the greatest baker, so I decided to leave Manhattan to check it out."
"You mean Manehattan."
"What?"
"You said Manhattan. It's actually Manehattan." Rainbow smirked a little.
I then realized that many of the places here in Equestria have different but similar names to ones on Earth.
Like Detroit is Detrot, Philadelphia is Fillydelphia, California is Califoalnia, and like Rainbow said, Manhattan is Manehattan.
"Right, my bad. Hehe....So, where is Sugarcube Corner by the way?" I asked pretending not to know where Sugarcube Corner was. I knew it was in Ponyville, but I didn't know where that was.
"It's in Ponyville. I'm actually headed there right now," Rainbow said as she opened her wings and got ready to fly.
"Cool. I'll be there soon, I suppose," I knew I didn't have any wings, so I couldn't fly with Rainbow there, but I've always loved to walk, so it wouldn't be a problem.
Rainbow then flew off towards the direction of Ponyville. I began to walk the same way.
Finally, after a few minutes, I finally reached what I was looking for. Ponyville. It was so amazing. It looked a little bigger than it did on the show. In the hills, I could see the farm of Sweet Apple Acres, surrounded by dozens of apple trees. In the far distance, I could see Canterlot on the mountainside.
I knew I would end up making a lot of new friends, and heading to a lot of new places.
After a few minutes, I ended up finding Rainbow Dash, standing around.
"Knew you'd make it," Rainbow said to me. "Ready to head to Sugarcube Corner?"
"Yes!" I said excitedly, before correcting myself. "Sorry. Yes, I am." I then smiled.
Soon, we began walking. As we did, I was greeted by many of Ponyville's citizens.
Didn't think I'd be getting this much attention for being in Ponyville for less than 5 minutes.
After a few minutes, Rainbow and I finally reached Sugarcube Corner.
Inside Sugarcube Corner, The rest of the Mane Six were enjoying a fresh batch of Cupcakes made by Pinkie Pie.
"Delicious as always, Pinkie," Twilight had spoken to her.
"Ah wonder where Rainbow Dash is. She's missin' out on these," Applejack spoke up.
Just a few moments after she said that, The entrance door to the shop opened up, And standing there was Rainbow and I.
"Ooh! Rainbow's here!" Pinkie gasped before continuing, "And she brought a new pony! Who is he? What's his name? Huh? Huh?" She asked in her excitedly crazy voice. Not sure if that makes sense, But whatever.
"Everypony, This is Thunder Ice. He's a new pony I found outside Ponyville. I decided to introduce him to you guys," She said to the group.
"Hello," I simply said, then waved my hoof to them.
Then...Twilight Sparkle...THE Twilight Sparkle, came up to me.
"Good afternoon. My name is Twilight Sparkle," If I didn't have any self control, I would've made a fanboy squeal, and fainted right there.
"Nice to meet you, Twilight," I replied to her. Twilight smiled as a response. I actually made Twilight smile. This day gets better and better.
A white unicorn then walked up. I already knew that it was Rarity, the fanciest pony in Ponyville.
"My name is Rarity. It is nice to have a new stallion here in Ponyville."
"Well, I'm glad to be here," I replied before chuckling at my own comment.
Applejack then walked up and introduced herself. "Howdy do, Thunder. Mah name's Applejack."
"It's always a pleasure to meet a cowgirl," I replied before shaking her hoof. Applejack chuckled. It was true. I love cowgirls. Not in the lovey-dovey way, just a friendly way. Unless they like me back.
"And I'm Pinkie Pie!" Pinkie yelled in a sing-song voice. I was startled when she spoke, but I instantly calmed.
Pinkie then began hopping towards me, a batch of cupcakes on her back.
'How the hell is that tray not moving?' I thought to myself as I saw that the tray was not moving around as Pinkie was hopping up and down. Literally, it did not move. No matter how rough she jumped, the damn thing wouldn't budge.
I need to stop talking to myself more often.
Pinkie finally reached me, placed the tray on the nearby table, took a cupcake out, and held it out to me.
"Wanna cupcake?" She asked.
"No thanks, I'm not really into sweets," I replied. It was true. I wasn't really interested in sweets that much anymore.
"Not into sweets? Are you loco in the coco?" She asked with confusion.
"No, It's just that sweets can make you gain weight...But then again, I haven't had sweets in years."
"YEARS?" She asked with a louder voice of confusion. That kinda hurt my ears.
I then thought about it. I suppose having one cupcake wouldn't really do anything.
"Oh, What the hay, One cupcake wouldn't hurt." I then grabbed the cupcake that Pinkie still held out to me, and took a bite.
As I chewed on the cupcake, a blast of vanilla and other sweets tickled my tastebuds. Holy Celestia, this is amazing. I swallowed my bite.
"Well, Whadda ya think?" Pinkie asked.
"This is very, and I mean, VERY, Good. I can't believe I've been missing out on all these years. You baked these?"
"Yep!"
"Well, You are very talented. This is very delicious."
"Thank you!" She yelled in a sing-song voice again.
As I finished the cupcake, Rainbow looked around for a few moments.
"Hey guys, Where's Fluttershy and Spike?" She asked the group.
"Well, Spike's at the Library, But I don't know where Fluttershy is," Twilight replied.
"Fluttershy said she was heading to the market to get some fruit. Poor dear apparently couldn't stay long."
"Well, I guess we're gonna have to find her then," Rainbow replied. "Later."
We left the bakery, and continued down the roads of Ponyville.
As we walked to the market, I looked to Rainbow. "So, Where is the market of...Uhh, Ponyville?"
"We're here." Rainbow replied. I began looking around, and saw stands of apples, bananas, and other fruits.
"Wellll...that was quick." I replied. Rainbow chuckled.
We began searching the market to find Fluttershy. It shouldn't be hard finding a yellow, shy Pegasus pony with three butterflies on her flank.
Finally, after about a minute, we found her at one of the stands, paying the seller.
"Hey, Fluttershy!" Rainbow yelled to her yellow, pink maned friend, who jumped up in fright when she heard Rainbow yell to her. When she saw Rainbow, she calmed down.
"O-Oh, H-Hi, Rainbow," She replied shyly.
"Hey, Fluttershy. Sorry about that. But, I have somepony I would like to introduce you to," Rainbow replied before looking at Me.
"His name's Thunder."
I can't believe it. A few hours ago, she was only a fictional character, and here she was. In the living flesh. In front of me. Fluttershy...uh...Fluttershy...do they even have last names?
"Nice to meet you, Fluttershy," I finally said after a few moments of silence as I smiled and held my hoof out to her. Fluttershy sort of jumped back a tiny bit, before shaking my hoof.
"H-Hi, Thunder," Fluttershy replied shyly. Her shyness is what makes her so cute.
"Thunder just arrived here. I decided to show him around." Rainbow added.
She then looked to me. "Would you like to see the rest of Ponyville?"
"Sure. I'd love to."
"Wait," Fluttershy spoke up. The two of us looked at her.
"Umm, Is it okay if I come with you two? I mean, If that's okay with you..."
"Sure." Rainbow replied before smiling at her shy friend.
We left the market, and Rainbow began to show me the rest of Ponyville.
At around 2:25 p.m., Fluttershy, Rainbow, and I had explored every area of Ponyville. Eventually, we had gone to Fluttershy's cottage. There, a small area full of animal critters was discovered. Even the little area where Fluttershy cares for her animals looks a lot bigger than what the show ever portrayed.
Fluttershy had tended to some baby bunnies. It made her smile the way they bundled up into little balls as they slept.
Rainbow inspected many of the birds Fluttershy also cared for. The sizes ranged from big to small. She then headed over to the sheep. As she patted one on its back, it began to run around in circles, causing Rainbow to giggle.
I was at the chicken pens, holding a chicken up to me.
"I've never seen a chicken up close, let alone, held one," I said to myself as I held the chicken. Suddenly, it began to peck me in the nose, causing me to drop it. It clucked and ran away. Little bastard.
Fluttershy saw what happened and flew over to me.
"Oh my! Are you okay?"
"Y-Yeah, I'm fine. Don't worry." I gently touched my nose, and instantly felt a stinging sensation.
"O-Ow! Still stings..."
Note-to-self: Never hold a chicken near your face.
Suddenly, Fluttershy gently placed her lips on my nose, which somehow eased the pain.
"Is that better?" Fluttershy asked, smiling at me.
I blushed and nodded dumbly, smiling as well. I was just kissed...by Fluttershy!
"Aw, Horseapples!" we suddenly both heard Rainbow yell.
"What's wrong?" I asked her.
"I promised Applejack I'd help her around the farm. Gotta go!"
"Okay. Well...bye. Oh! And thanks for showing me around."
"No problem!" Rainbow then flew into the air and headed for Sweet Apple Acres.
"Uhh...s-so...what do you want to do now?" Fluttershy asked shyly.
I just shrugged. Wasn't really much to do. We've discovered every part of Ponyville. And, judging the way the sky looks, it's probably not a good idea to go anywhere right now.
Suddenly, I felt a drop of water hit my still stinging nose. I held my nose, then looked up. I could see that dark clouds had covered the skies. Rain began to fall.
"Actually, why don't we go inside?"
Fluttershy nodded, then quickly headed to the house. I then began to follow her as well. Rain already came pouring down and soaked me before I even reached the door step.
Fluttershy had gone inside and kept the door opened for me. I was utterly drenched. Fluttershy then closed the door once I stepped inside and quickly headed to a closet to grab a towel.
Once she came back with one, she gently placed it over me. I accepted it with happiness and warmth.
"Thank you," I happily thanked her.
"You're welcome." She smiled nervously, and blushed.
I looked around. This was it. Fluttershy's house. I can't believe I'm actually looking at it, in front of me, with my own eyes. It's amazing.
"So, this is your house?"
"Yes."
I saw that there were also animals inside the house, too.
"Isn't this a little too...crowded?"
"Not really. Sometimes, before I leave, I let the animals have some time from their cages."
"Oh."
I then walked to one of the windows. When I saw outside, I saw some sort of forest, awfully close to the house. Watching the show, I remembered this was called the Everfree Forest.
"Isn't it a little...you know...dangerous to be close to the Everfree Forest?"
"Oh, don't worry. Nothing really leaves the forest. It's only dangerous to go in there alone. I never go alone."
I smile a little.
Eventually, Fluttershy begins to give me a tour of the house. Some parts of the house were never even seen on the show.
We soon reach her bedroom, which was seen a few times in some episodes, such as the one where Applejack sold Cider. Once Cider Season starts, I need to try some of that.
As I looked around, I could see Fluttershy begin to walk to her bedroom window. The storm was fierce outside. She saw a tree that was in front of her window. The leaves upon the tree were being blown away fiercely. Thank God and Celestia we came in when we did.
"Oh, my."
"Yeah. Good thing we came in when we did, huh?" I asked. She nodded and smiled.
Suddenly, a loud booming noise nearly deafened us.
"Ouch," Fluttershy said softly, rubbing her ears.
"What was that?" I asked.
I looked outside to see the tree in front of the window. It appears it's been struck by lightning. We see it begin to fall, but towards us. Wait...towards us?!
I only had seconds to react, so I grabbed Fluttershy, and quickly ran to the closet. When we landed, I struck my head hard against the wall, and I suddenly lost consciousness, but not before hearing a loud crashing noise.
***
"Thunder...Thunder..."
I slowly stirred in the dark.
"Wake up..."
Eventually, I slowly began to open my eyes. To my surprise, we were still in the closet. Something didn't feel right, though.
Wait...why is Fluttershy kissing my chest?
"Flutter-" I was cutoff when a hoof gently pressed against my mouth.
"Shh...you poor thing. Let me make it all better," Fluttershy said in a rather seducing tone. Did I just end up in one of the tumblr universes or something? Yes, I looked at this stuff before.
Fluttershy began to kiss my chest, lower and lower, until-Hah! Sweet Celestia! Is she...She is!
I looked to see Fluttershy...licking my manhood, or in pony cases, stallionhood.
"Flutter-"
"Shh..." She silenced me once again. I decided to keep quiet, but I found that rather difficult when I'm moaning and grunting. You can't blame me. This is too good.
"Y-you...dirty little f-filly..." I moaned. This is not like Fluttershy. At all. But...I'll just go with it...
Suddenly, I began to feel a tingling sensation in my loins.
"F...Fluttersh....shy...I'm gonna...gonna..." I didn't even have time to finish. With a powerful sensation, I felt my orgasm hit. I could feel strands upon strands of cum drip out of my stallionhood, and, to my surprise, Fluttershy was swallowing every drop.
I would usually assume that she probably would spit it out, also assuming that she might not know what cum is, but instead, she swallowed all of it.
After my orgasm died down, I took a few moments to get some air. Coming can take a lot of energy out of you.
I closed my eyes for a few seconds, feeling tired. Quickly, I opened them back up, and...u-uh...Fluttershy was...well...presenting herself to me. Her tail was raised into the air, and I could see everything she had. If I had wings, they'd be as stiff as a dead body with Rigor Mortis.
Forget I said that.
I could hear Fluttershy giggle before speaking up.
"Come get it, bad boy."
Okay, what the hell is going on? First, Fluttershy gives me a BJ, now she wants me to eat her out? What happened to the shy Fluttershy that I knew a couple of minutes ago? In fact, how long have I been out?
***
Suddenly, I jerked forward. After that, I looked around. I was still in the closet, but things looked...different. Again. This time, it was cool in the closet, and I didn't feel tired anymore. Wait a minute, where's Fluttershy?
I looked around the small closet, but it only took me a few seconds to realize that Fluttershy was sleeping. On my chest.
D'awwwww. She looks so adorable. I'd really hate to wake her up. It's surprising that when I jerked forward, she didn't wake up.
I smiled at her sleeping form. She was smiling, and snuggled up close to me.
I then realized something was different. I listened for sounds outside, but heard nothing. Looks like the storm stopped. Just as I was about to get up, Fluttershy, in her sleep, kept me held down.
I D'awwwwed even more. I didn't want to leave this spot, but I had to see the damage done to her room.
Gently, I picked her up, and set her into a warm set of fluffy pillows. I saw her gripping them, smiling.
I then got up, and headed to the door of the closet. I began to turn the knob, and pushed forward. Unfortunately, the door wouldn't budge. I pushed harder on the door, but it wouldn't move. The damn tree must be blocking it.
I sighed. I then looked around the closet to see if there was any way out. Surprisingly, I found a tiny window. It was so small, that only a head could fit through there. I quietly walked towards it, and opened it up, being careful to make sure it doesn't squeak. I'm not going to risk making that adorable, fluffy, yellow mare wake up.
After opening it, I put my head through the window, and looked around. I was looking at the front of the house. On my left, I could see the tree that had fallen. It had broken part of the roof, and completely shattered the window. I couldn't see much of the interior, but I can tell it was really damaged.
I then closed the window, and headed back over to Fluttershy. To my sadness, she was frowning, and for some reason, a tear fell down her eye. I wonder what she was dreaming about?
Slowly, I began to lay down. I looked over to Fluttershy, held a hoof out, and gently wiped away the tear. I then gently picked her up, and placed her onto my chest again. Happily, she held it tightly. Her frown then turned into a smile, which made me smile.
I reached my head to her forehead, and gently kissed it.
"Good night, Fluttershy." After that, I closed my eyes, getting ready for a peaceful sleep.
I couldn't remember the exact time, but I figured it was sometime around 10:00 am when I awoke from my sleep. I looked to my chest and sadly, Fluttershy was no longer holding it like she had been last night. Instead, I looked to my left to see her gripping a pillow, smiling and snuggling it.
It still made me D'aww inside. I couldn't resist looking at Fluttershy. She was absolutely adorable, especially when sleeping. But right now, I realized I had no time to D'aww at the moment. I had to find a way out of here. Or at least get someone to help us. If I was a unicorn, I could just lift the tree away. It still surprises me how a bunch of leaves and branches manage to trap me in a closet. Either I'm much weaker here, or the trees are much stronger.
Slowly, I got up and tiptoed...tiphoofed...um...
...I slowly snuck my way towards the small window, and looked out. The sun wasn't that far from the horizon. Ever since I was young, I literally studied the sun's position over the years to the point where I knew the time just by looking at the sun. With sunglasses, that is. Would hate to learn all of that skill and end up blind.
"Oh mah stars..." I heard a voice say.
The voice. It sounded awfully familiar. It took me only a few seconds to recognize it. Quickly, I looked to the source of the voice to see the orange southern mare, with the same stetson sitting on her head. I called out her name.
"Hey, Applejack!" I called.
She quickly looked to where I was. When she finally located me, she stepped back a bit and looked in confusion.
"Lightnin'? What in tarnation happened?"
"That storm last night was...well," I pointed to the tree, "pretty strong."
"Is Fluttershy okay?" I could obviously tell she was worried for Fluttershy.
"Yeah, she's fine. We're both stuck in her closet, and - pardon my language - this damn tree's blocking the door, so we can't get out. Can you go get the others so they can get us outta here?"
Applejack nodded. "Just stay there. I'll be back."
"Uhh, of course I'm staying here. We're stuck, remember?"
"Oh, right," Applejack said, facepalming- I mean, facehoofing herself, before running off to get the others.
After she left, I closed the window, and put my back to the wall. I slowly sank to the floor. It was nothing but pure silence for at least half a minute before an adorable sounding yawn rang in my ears. I looked to see Fluttershy waking up. Her ear twitched, and she yawned in a way that made me d'awww inside. The word d'aww was a common word many bronies had used to express the cuteness of the characters. Many of you already know that, I bet.
"Morning, sleepy head," I sang to her, causing her to giggle adorably. Even her giggles made me d'aww.
"Good morning," she said tiredly. She then looked around.
"Oh my. We're still in here?"
"Not for long. Applejack was just here. I told her to get the others to get the tree out of the way."
"H-How?" Wait, has she never noticed this door?
"There's a mini door here," I replied, walking to the door and opening it up. "See?"
Fluttershy slowly walked towards me, then passed me, and looked out the mini door. She found herself looking at the front of her house. She slowly moved her gaze to the left.
I could see her eyes widen and water a little. I even heard a few whimpers come from her mouth.
"Fluttershy?" I asked, worriedly, "Are you okay?"
Suddenly, Fluttershy suddenly started to fall to the floor, but just before she hit the floor, I caught her safely. I could see she didn't move. She was completely limp. Before you ask, NO, she's not dead. She's just out cold. Slowly, I carried her back to the pillows and gently laid her down on them. I then gently kissed her on the cheek. I then sat down next to her and gently began to brush her mane with my hoof, trying to smooth it out, mostly because it had frizzled overnight. It made me look like a creep, but you don't know how much I wanted to do this, to be able to brush Fluttershy's mane. It's much softer than I thought it'd be, and I love it.
Time was slow. Minutes felt like hours as I waited for them to come back. As the minutes passed, I continued to brush Fluttershy's mane. This does sound a bit creepy, but trust me, if you were in Fluttershy's closet with her, and she was unconscious, wouldn't you the same thing?
After a few minutes, I heard the sound of hooves on the ground. I then heard my new name being called out. I gently got up, placing Fluttershy back onto the pillows, then headed to the mini door. I opened it up to see the others standing there, Rarity observing the damage. I heard a faint "Oh, my" coming from behind her hoof as she covered her mouth.
"Are you two okay?" Twilight Sparkle asked.
"Yeah, we're fine."
"Don't worry. We'll get you out."
Twilight's horn then started to glow purple. Once it did, the tree blocking our freedom started to glow purple, as well. Slowly, it moved from its resting place. She moved it close to 20 feet away from the house before setting it back down. Once she did, her horn stopped glowing, and she began to pant a bit, exhausted from doing the action.
Once the tree was out of the way, I headed to the door and tried to turn the knob. Successfully, it turned all the way. I then pushed the door open. I was greeted by a completely wrecked room. The bed was completely smashed, the dresser was smashed, most of the wall was broken up. Most of the decor of the room was also ruined. Many of the paintings on the wall had cracked and fallen off. Some trophies were broken in half. Some birdhouses that were hanging from the tree were broken into pieces on the ground, with bird seeds scattered everywhere.
"Holy shit," I said to myself, observing the utter destruction.
Once Fluttershy had awoken and observed the sheer detail of her destroyed bedroom, she cried for well over a minute. The five other girls sat down with her just in front of the house, comforting her while I looked through the wreckage to check if any animals were hurt or worse. Luckily, none were dead, and only a bird had bent its wing slightly, and I cringed at the sight when first seeing it.
After making sure the animals had been carefully taken out of the house, I flew back down to the girls. Fluttershy had calmed down by then, but she still sniffled with a few tears going down her face.
"You alright now, Sugarcube?" asked Applejack while petting Fluttershy's mane.
Fluttershy sniffled, "It's ruined. My house is ruined."
"Hey, look on the bright side," Rainbow jumped in with a tone of hope, "At least it's not the entire house, right?"
That gave Fluttershy a thought, then a sign of hope. Rainbow was right. It wasn't completely destroyed, therefore, she didn't lose it.
"I...I guess that's good-"
Suddenly, as if on cue, the sheer irony struck as a creaking sound, followed by the sound of falling debris was heard behind us. We turned and watched as what was once the second floor of Fluttershy's home cave in, decimating the first floor of the house. A plume of dust engulfed us, and when it disappeared, the seven of us gasped in horror as we observed what was once Fluttershy's home.
A whimper came from Fluttershy's throat just before she fainted, Twilight and Applejack quickly catching her in the process.
It was now almost 2:00 in the afternoon. The seven of us were down in Sugarcube Corner eating a late lunch. What I hadn't noticed or seen in the show was the back room of the shop where Pinkie had explained that the girls had eaten here sometimes during lunch or dinner. It was cool observing what the town had because I didn't expect it to look like this from my viewpoint.
While the other girls ate, Fluttershy barely touched her daffodil sandwich, which, by the way, was good, No, I didn't eat her sandwich. I had my own. Eating a daffodil as a human was disgusting, but here, it was one of the most delicious foods I had eaten. I indicated that my transformation also changed my taste buds, changing what I did and didn't like eating. It's a good thing it didn't change my taste-buds for sweets.
In the middle of eating, I had begun to blank out from the rest of the world, concentrating on what had happened last night, with the dream. Yes, I should be thinking about Fluttershy's now destroyed home, and shame on me for not doing so, but still, I just met Fluttershy. It doesn't matter if I know her character and what she's like, I shouldn't already be having wet dreams about her, regardless of how...hot...it is.
Eventually, my daydreaming had been cut short as Twilight called my name.
"Lightning?" she asked.
Looking around for a moment, I eventually found her and the others, except Fluttershy, looking towards me in a curious manner.
"Are you alright, darling?" Rarity asked me.
With a slight nod, I replied, "Yeah, I'm fine. Just...thinking---about things."
While Rarity did seem a tad bit worried, she didn't respond any further, but continued to eat her sandwich. I kept myself focused on reality so I didn't worry them any further from my dozing off.
But the silence of the group only seemed to last for a short few moments before Rainbow spoke up.
"Sooo," she began, "Why were you and Fluttershy in the---y'know, closet in the first place?"
"We weren't," i remarked, "We were checking out the bedroom when everything happened. Instincts kicked in, and we---we hid in the closet."
While I expected the conversation to end there, Rainbow saw it as an opportunity to get smart.
Typical.
"Really?" she asked with a smirk, "Nothing at all?"
I had to admit, I blushed a bit. It didn't make her think anything had been going on, but it did make her think she made an accomplishment. Even Fluttershy seemed to be a bit embarrassed, despite her head being down.
"Rainbow!" Applejack recalled, looking towards the cyan mare in a fit of frustration.
"Ah, c'mon, I was just joking."
"Joke or not," Rarity added, "This isn't the time to be doing so. There are more important matters to attend to."
Rainbow rolled her eyes in slight annoyance, let out a slight groan, crossed her eyes, and sat back in her chair.
"Oh, alright---Well, if we're talking about where Fluttershy's staying, she could stay at my place if she wants."
Fluttershy lifted her head in rejection.
"Oh, um...I don't want to be a burden to you and Tank at all."
"Don't worry about it," Rainbow remarked with a grin, "Tank's more dying to see you than he is scared!"
Fluttershy seemed to let out a faint smile---a cute one, if I say so---and blushed from the compliment. But regardless of the mark, she still rejected.
"Um...I-If it's okay with you guys---I think I'm just gonna stay at Lightning's house."
As she pointed to me, I backed my head up a bit, somewhat in disbelief.
"Why me?" I asked in my surprise.
"Uh...Well---I mean, you...you did save me."
As much as I had wanted why that would make her want to stay at my place, I didn't protest.
After all, it WAS Fluttershy.
...
But---I don't even...
"As much as I'd like that," I added, "I...don't have house."
"What?" Twilight asked, looking at me with a hint of concern and confusion.
"I just moved here, remember?"
"Oh," Twilight shrunk back in a sheepish manner, "Right."
"Well, Ah could help you get one," Applejack said.
Turning towards her, I asked how she could do that. She mentioned that, with the money she was making from the apple sales, she had enough money to purchase essentially any house in town. She said she was willing to buy any house I thought seemed nice.
I did say she didn't need to do that, but she said that she didn't want me to be exhausted from just being here one day.
As much as I wanted to refuse her offer, I didn't want to seem rude to her.
Accepting, her and I agreed to find a house to my liking and sell it to me later.
Later soon enough came, and after a few observations, I picked a good enough house and immediately moved in. While nothing from Earth ever made it here with me, it wasn't all that much of a loss. Despite the fact that I'll never see Xbox's or DVD players ever again, at least there's still some kickass music to listen to.
Once I got myself acquainted into the little house, Applejack left for a bit, wanting to give me time to myself. Between the hour of time that I had to myself, nothing interesting really happened, other than me getting used to the house.
And...thinking...thinking a lot.
When the hour passed, Applejack returned, along with the others. They noticed me sitting on my couch, still thinking about---things.
Rainbow asked me if I was okay. While I did say that I was, it was more of a lie.
And I still kept thinking, more and more---
Until I finally couldn't take it anymore.
I blurted out and told them everything about me. My real name, where I lived, what I'm really like, and much more.
When I finished, I panted to regain my breath.
Their reactions were---somewhat very out of character. You'd think they'd think I was crazy or they'd be scared of me.
But they seemed more interested in it than scared.
So they wanted to know more.
And with every question they asked, I answered, prompting more questions.
But there was one question that struck me.
"What happened to your parents?"
They quickly noticed the discomfort on my face when they asked that question, but before they could say anything---
Thunder, And the girls were sitting in Thunder's new living room. Rarity had a few bags of the Blue rubies with her. She walked into the room, And saw them all sitting down. She asked, "Uhh...Did I miss something?"
Twilight said, "No. Thunder was telling us a story about his life. Sit down." Rarity said, "Well, Alright." She sat down next to the girls.
Thunder asked Rarity, "Had fun in that cave?" He chuckled. She replied, "It is amazing down there. Simply amazing. Would you please continue the story you were telling?"
Thunder replied, "As you wish. It's a sad story about my life. I will continue where I left off."
"The date was September 11, 2001. My parents and I had reached Manhattan, And decided to have a tour around the city. During the Tour, We decided to visit the location that made New York City the most memorable city on Earth...The World Trade Center. We visted every part of both Towers, We visited the Stores, Restaurants, Etc. It was great. We then visited one of the towers: The South Tower. By the Time we reached the 90th floor of the South Tower, The time was 8:43 a.m."
He closed his eyes, And could see himself once again as a 8 year old Human. He could see himself looking out the window of the 90th floor.
He could see his parents next to him, Taking pictures of the city from up high. Then...That's when he saw it...One of the vehicles that caused the death of his parents...Flight 11.
He opened his eyes, And continued the story.
"My parents were taking pictures of the city. Then...I saw a plane. You guys know what planes are, Right?" The girls nodded, "No."
He explained quickly, "They are like Cars, But they can fly, And they are larger."
He was quiet for a few seconds, And continued.
"The plane I was talking about...At first, I thought it was just a regular plane, Just flying from an airport to another destination. Then, I saw it get closer and closer to me. I then knew what was happening...The plane was heading towards the Towers."
The girls gasped, And Fluttershy said, "Oh, No..." Thunder said, "I said to my Mother and father..."
He closed his eyes again. He could see himself yelling to his mother and father that a plane was heading towards the towers, But he didn't know which one. Their question was then answered. The plane had not crashed into the South Tower. It crashed into the North Tower.
He opened his eyes again. He said, "The plane then hit the North Tower. The explosion was devastating. It frightened me and it still does 18,000 years after it."
Fluttershy asked, "What happened next?" Thunder was still in deep thought. He slowly responded, "We started heading down the stairwell."
In Thunder's mind, He could see him and his parents walking down the stairwell of the South Tower. He was on the 90th floor when the 1st plane hit. 17 minutes later, They reached the 75th floor. They were walking down, Thinking their building was going to be off limits.
Thunder and his parents reached the 75th floor just 17 minutes after the 1st impact. By the time they reached the 74th floor just half a minute later, They were rocked off of their feet. A second plane had hit just above their location. The explosion sent fire, Debris, And other dangerous objects around them. Debris had sheilded Thunder from the fire, But not his parents.
The fire instantly burned his parents alive. Thunder could hear their screams. He banged on the debris, Which technically built a "Bubble" around him, And screamed, "MOM! DAD!" The remaining explosion from the plane shook Thunder, Dropping him on his head, And knocked him unconsious.
Thunder said to the girls, "...Another plane hit just above where me and my parents were. I was sheilded by debris. It created a "Bubble" around me. My parents were scorched by the intense heat. No heat or fire could get through. The plane explosion kept shaking the building. I fell down, Hit my head, And was knocked out."
He could hear his parent's screams in his head.
He could now see himself regaining consiousness after a minute. He could manage to push off the debris that sheilded him. He looked for his mother and father. He found them, Badly and fatally burned. He heard himself say to them, "Mom...? Dad...?"
He could see his father's eyes slowly open. He heard his father say to him, "S-S-Son...Run...Get out of the building, Son...S-Save...Your...Self..." His father's eyes close, And saw his body go limp.
Thunder could see himself ready to cry, But he knew that there was no time for crying. He needed to get out of there. So, He hugged his parents who were already deceased, And ran as quickly as he could to the stairwell.
He saw himself reaching the 40th floor by 9:30 a.m. He knew he would not let his parents down.
He said to the girls after a few moments without speaking, "...I ran down the stairwell. By 9:30 a.m. I had reached the 40th floor. At 9:50 a.m. 20 minutes later...I reached floor 19."
The time was now 9:57 a.m. Thunder, In his mind, Had reached the lobby. He said in relief, "The lobby." He walked to the exit, And a fire-fighter asked him, "Hey, Kid! Where's your parents?"
He responded, "They...They died." The fire-fighter replied, "You're...All alone?" Thunder nodded. The man replied, "Alright, C'mon kid. Let's get you out of here. Follow me."
Thunder had followed the man, And got a safe distance from the building. The time was 9:59 a.m. And Thunder saw the saddest sight. The South Tower began to collapse. Thunder couldn't hold back his tears anymore. He fell to his knees, And began to cry.
He soon saw the Second tower come down, 29 minutes later.
He then saw himself back in his home, The girls still hearing his story. His face was blank. Tears started coming from his eyes... He said, "...Mom...Dad...Why?" Thunder then started bursting into tears, Covering his face with his hooves.
Fluttershy and Twilight walked over to comfort him. Fluttershy started hugging him. About a minute later, He said to them, "I'm sorry...It was just terrible..." Another minute later, He continued the story.
"Days after the attack, I returned to Florida, And I saw my girlfriend again. I gave her the biggest hug and kiss she ever had. It's sad how something so tragic could happen to a 8 year old kid. When I was 8, At the time..."
Later, About 15 minutes later, Thunder then talked about His girlfriend and him breaking up.
"It was a few days ago. She said I wasn't there for her much, And I try to. I just lose track of time. She broke up with me, Then I tell myself there are other girls in Manhattan. I went home, Had something to eat, Went to bed, Then I woke up in the middle of the night, And I saw this glowing light. I went into my Living room, And saw a portal. I looked through it, And saw Ponyville. I was sucked into the portal, And lost consiousness along the way. Now, Here I am."
Rainbow, had said, "Uhh...Thunder...What was it like inside the portal?" Thunder had responded, "Well...It was showing my house and all of Manhattan, Changing over the years. The buildings growing, Falling, Grass taking over, etc. About 1000 years passed when I was inside the portal. That's when I passed out."
Rainbow asked, "Was it...Sickening?" He replied to her, "Yeah. I saw all of these colors, The whole portal was spinning around very fast...That's why I passed out."
All of a sudden, Thunder started to feel dizzy. Fluttershy asked him, "Are...You alright?" Thunder said, Stuttering, "Y-Yeah...I-I'm F-Fine...D-Don't...Worr..." Then, Thunder fell to the floor, Out cold.
Twilight had yelled, "Thunder!" And the girls ran to his side. Fluttershy asked, "Is he okay?" Twilight checked Thunder's pulse. He was okay. She replied, "Yeah. He's okay. He might've been thinking about that dizzying portal, And the dizzyness might've got to him."
They could hear him quietly snoring. Twilight said, "Come on. Let's get him to his bed. We'll check on him later." The time was 4:55 p.m. Twilight, Fluttershy, And Applejack carefully picked him up and brought him to his bed.
They set him on his bed, And covered him with the blanket. They looked at him snoring. His breathing was okay. His pulse was normal. Nothing was wrong.
Twilight said, "We better go. We should go look for Spike. Where has he been?" Rainbow said, "He's probably still at your Library." All of the girls started heading towards the door, Except Fluttershy.
The girls turned around to see Fluttershy standing next to the bed. Twilight asked Fluttershy, "Fluttershy? Are you coming?" Fluttershy said, "Oh. Yeah. Just one more minute." Twilight replied, "Okay." The girls "trotted" out of the room (Because they're ponies).
Fluttershy stood next to the bed, Looking at Thunder. She saw him breathing normally, Snoring quietly.
She then said to him, "Please be okay while we're gone. I don't want to lose you, My friend." She did know that he couldn't hear her.
She then looked back at the door. The girls were already downstairs. She looked down at the floor and could see them, But they couldn't see what she was going to do.
She slowly leaned over to Thunder, Slowly lifted his head, And...placed her soft lips on his. She was kissing him. She held her lips with his in a passionate way for about 10-12 seconds. Then, She removed her lips slowly, And carefully placed his head back on the pillow.
She smiled again at him sleeping. Rainbow Dash downstairs said, "Fluttershy?" Fluttershy quietly yelled loud enough for them to hear, "Coming!" She tried her best not to wake Thunder. Luckily, Thunder didn't hear, and still slept. She walked downstairs to the other girls, And they left his home.
Thunder, Who was still sleeping, Had slowly...Put a smile...On his sleeping face.
Awww, Now wasn't that just cute? :D Wait for next chapter! :D Spike will finally meet Thunder. I bet you were all wondering where Spike was, Huh? Well! He was...At Twilight's Library...Napping. Goodbye.
Okay, I decided to change my formatting, How I type this story. So, If you like it, Good for you. If you don't like it...Haters gonna hate. :P Enjoy. Also, I'm going to replace "Walking" and "Running" with "Trotted" And "Bolted." It would make more sense, Considering They are all ponies. enjoy, btw.
It was the next day, And Thunder had woken from his slumber. He had slept for about 18 hours straight, From 4:55 p.m. yesterday, To 12:29 p.m. Today. He looked around and noticed he was laying in his bed.
"Oh...What in God's name happened?" He said to himself. He then remembered that he got dizzy from the portal memory, And he passed out.
"Oh, That's right," He added. He knew that the girls had brought him to his bed. "Well, I better go find the girls," He also added. He then got out of bed and headed out of his cave home, And trotted to Ponyville.
After searching for about 15 Minutes, He found them at an Air Balloon show.
"Ha. I love Air balloons," He said to himself. He trotted over to the girls. "Hey, You Guys," He said to them.
"Thunder! You're here!" Fluttershy yelled. It was the first time Thunder heard her yell since he first met her. She hugged him tightly.
"Hey, Shy," He said to her. She released her grip on him.
"Glad to see you're better, Thunder." Twilight had said to him. "Yeah. The memory WAS too much." He said.
"Uhh, Twilight? Who is this?" Spike said to Twilight. Spike was here, As well. "Spike, This is Thunder Ice. He is a Human from the past." She responded.
Spike was confused. "He doesn't look like a human," He said. "Well, That's actually because I was sent here by a portal. It somehow altered my DNA, Now I'm a pony," Thunder replied.
He put his hoof up. "Nice to meet you, Spike," He added. Spike shook Thunder's hoof, And smiled. "Nice to meet you Too, Thunder," Spike had replied.
Then, They heard a loud voice. It was the mayor of Ponyville. "Settle down, Now. Everypony, Welcome to the 3rd Annual Air Balloon Race!" The mayor had said.
The large crowd of ponies had cheered, As the Air Balloons flew through the air around this huge circled field. The race had begun.
There were 7 Air Balloons. One Air Balloon had 3 Fans of their favorite ponies in each one. There was an orange one: Created to dedicate Applejack for her large supply of apples. The Second was Pink, To dedicate Pinkie Pie for Her delicious Desserts and treats. The Third was White: Dedicating Rarity for her Amazing talent with clothing.
The Fourth was Purple: Dedicating Twilight Sparkle for her Amazing Geniousness. The Fifth was Yellow: Dedicating Fluttershy for her Talent with Animals. The Sixth was All rainbow colored: Dedicating Rainbow Dash For her Being the fastest in all of Equestria.
Thunder was Amazed at the Seventh Air balloon. He didn't believe people would do it so quickly. The Seventh was Dark Blue: Dedicating Thunder Ice for his amazing Talent with Construction.
About 3 minutes later, During the 6th lap, Something happened in Air Balloon #5 (Fluttershy Balloon). The Balloon was slowly enlarging. The 3 People inside didn't know what was happening, Or Why, For instance.
The fire creating the air in the balloon got larger, And the Balloon Grew until the pressure was too much. The Balloon exploded, And quickly burst into flames. The Explosion sent tons of debris to the ground. Everypony had screamed at the explosion, Sheltering themselves from the Debris storm.
The Air Balloon started Descending slowly, then quickly. It was falling in the direction of the pilots' favorite pony, Fluttershy.
Thunder saw it fall towards her. "FLUTTERSHYYY!" He yelled at the top of his lungs. She looked up, And couldn't move. She was scared to move. Thunder Bolted towards her at a fast pace, And pushed her out of the way. She instantly opened her wings the second he pushed her, And flew out of the path of the oncoming Air Balloon Bridge.
Inside the Bridge, The Three ponies got out of the side, And flew away. Thunder, After he pushed Fluttershy to safety, Couldn't get out of the way in time. The Un-Ponied Air Balloon bridge collided into him, Creating a devastating explosion that would kill anypony instantly.
A second or two before the explosion, Fluttershy landed with her friends. She looked back at Thunder and saw the Un-Ponied Air Balloon bridge collide into him. "THHUUNDERRRRR!" She screeched at the top of her lungs, Knowing her friend could've been killed. She instantly bolted to the wreckage site, Digging through the Rubble trying to find her friend.
She managed to reach the spot where he was, But saw a Relieving sight: Thunder had managed to create an electric field around him, Protecting him from the blast. Thunder, On one hand, Was confused. How could he do this? He looked down at his Thunder Cutie Mark. "Oh, That's right," He thought to himself.
Fluttershy quickly cleared the debris above the electric field, Allowing Thunder to shut off the electric field. He does it, But Fluttershy, Who was on top of it, Falls.
She screamed, But Thunder quickly caught her in his arms. "Are you okay? I didn't hurt you, Did I?" He asked her, Worried he pushed her too hard out of the way, Hurting her.
"No, I'm Okay now," She said. "I'm glad you are safe," He said to her.
"I'm glad you are, Because..." She said, Trying to admit it. "Because..." She said again.
She finally said it.
"...I love you."
Thunder started to blush, And his eyes slowly widened. "Uhh...What?" He asked.
"I love you, Thunder Ice. I always have, Ever since we got trapped in the closet." She said.
Applejack began to laugh after she heard that. "AHAHAHAHAHA! Hahaha...Eheheh..Eh...Gosh Darnit," She said, Knowing nopony got the joke.
Fluttershy was staring into Thunder's eyes now. He stared back. Slowly, They got closer to each other, And finally, After dreaming of this for so long, Their lips finally met. They kissed in a passionate romantic way.
"AAAAWWWWW!" All of the ponies had said, Watching The cute couple kissing. About a few seconds later, Their lips parted, And their Snouts, Or noses, Touched. Fluttershy and Thunder were happy.
Fluttershy, Was happy, Now that her...And Thunder...Were Coltfriend and Marefriend.
Well, Wasn't that cute? Romance Blooms! :D Quick typist, I am. See ya in next chapter! :D
After 3 days of doin' what I wanna do, I return with the next chapter. Enjoy. I'm sorta running out of Ideas, But what the hell. I'll need some help, If anyone can. :D This chapter may be a little stupid, Again, Because I'm running out of Ideas. So, Yep.
It has happened. It finally came true for Fluttershy. Her and Thunder were finally dating. Ever since They got stuck in the closet, Fluttershy's feelings for him were starting to come out. Well, Not her closet. She actually started to feel feelings for him when they talked in Pinkie's closet.
But, That didn't matter to her. All that mattered is that her and Thunder were finally together.
Fluttershy was heading to Thunder's house at Reservoir Canyon. He asked her if she wanted to head to the beach. She said Yes. Now, She's heading there to see if he's ready.
"I hope I'm not asking him too early," She said. She felt like she was being obsessed with time. She tried to stay calm.
She finally reached the Canyon, Then his house. She knocked on the door.
"Thunder? ...Are you there?" She asked. The door just Backed open, And slid into the cave again. She slowly trotted into the cave.
She then reached the door leading to his living room. She opened the door, And saw a confusing, And worrying sight.
Thunder was sitting in the corner, Covering his hind legs with his forelegs, Rocking back and forth.
"Thunder?" She asked. Thunder slowly looked up. "Fluttershy...?" He asked.
He slowly got up, And looked at her. She slowly trotted towards him.
"Are you okay?" She added. Thunder then grabbed her and hugged her. "Oh, Thank god!" He said, Crying while holding her.
"What happened?" She added again. "I had a horrible dream. That I lost you..." He continued hugging her.
He then put her down. "What was it about? You can tell me," She said quietly.
He sat down on his couch, Her still standing on her four Hooves.
"The dream...Was that I woke up...And visited Ponyville. I was visiting your house, And was expecting happy animals all around Ponyville, And happy ponies. But, All I saw was Crying animals, Ponies wearing black, And the sky was dark, Like It was going to rain."
"I then saw the girls walking with the crowd of other ponies. I noticed that you weren't with them. I asked Rainbow Dash what was going on and why you weren't with them. She said...She said that Somepony had...Had..." Tears started going down his face.
"...Raped you and killed you While in Canterlot," He finished.
Fluttershy's eyes slowly widened in sadness. Raped? Killed?
"I followed the girls, And soon reached the Ponyville Cemetary...And saw your coffin. I looked in it...And saw you. You looked so...Peaceful...Like you were sleeping. I just wanted to wake you up and hug you one more time, But..." He couldn't finish.
He then broke into tears, And covered his eyes with his hooves. Fluttershy trotted towards him, And hugged him. "Hush now...It's okay," She whispered to him.
He hugged her back, Tightly. "After seeing you in that coffin," He said, "I knew that...Without you...My life would have no meaning."
"Mine would have no meaning. Without you, I would die," She said.
He looked into her eyes again. "I love you, Fluttershy," He said.
"I love you, Too," She said. He gently pulled her towards him, And kissed her. She kissed back. She started to feel warm as he gently held her. Her eyes and his eyes were closed as they shared the passionate moment.
Their lips parted, And she looked at him. He was more calm, And more romantic. She blushed, And he smiled.
"Uhh...Do you want to go to the beach?" She asked, Trying not to be rude. She got nervous for a second.
"The beach? Oh, Right. Yeah, I'm ready. Ready to be there with you."
She blushed and smiled. They both walked out side by side, Smiling the whole time.
Within about 5 minutes, They reached Congo Beach. They saw the other Mares, And spike there. Rainbow Dash was chillin' in a warm, Soft cloud, Spike was in the water with Rarity splashing each other. She managed to deal with getting wet. After all, It is the beach.
Applejack was chillin' under a tree, Her hat covering her face, Pinkie Pie was also in the water, Swimming. Twilight was sitting under an Umbrella, Reading a book, as usual.
Twilight first saw the couple trotting towards them.
"Hey, You guys! You made it!" She said to them.
"Hey, Twilight," Thunder had replied. "Sorry we're a little late."
Twilight continued to smile. "That's alright! There's still a lot of time to have fun!"
"Yep. Hehe..." Thunder had said. He then thought again about the nightmare with Fluttershy. He then noticed it was only a dream. He was in a thinking trance for a second.
Twilight got confused. "Thunder? Are you alright?"
After hearing her talk, His trance instantly broke. "Huh? ...Oh, Yeah, I'm fine. Just thinkin' about somethin' for a second."
"Well, Okay, Then."
He smiled at his Purple friend. Thunder and Fluttershy walked towards the water. Twilight laid back down and continued reading.
About an hour later, Fluttershy was sitting down next to twilight, And was watching Thunder in the water with Spike, Rarity, And Pinkie Pie.
She saw Twilight next to her, Still reading the book.
"Hey Twilight?"
"Yeah?"
"Can I tell you something?"
"Sure. What is it?"
Fluttershy tried to clear her mind for a second.
"Umm...Thunder had this nightmare about me."
"Nightmare? About you?"
"Well...Yeah...He told me...And...Well...He said I was..."
She tried to get the words. She started to get nervous again. She finished.
"...He said I was raped and...Murdered in his nightmare...In Canterlot."
Twilight was just as Shocked as Fluttershy was back at Thunder's home.
"What?" Twilight tried to get what she had heard through her mind. Thunder had a dream about Fluttershy being raped and murdered?
"Do...Do you think we should talk to him about it?" Twilight asked.
"No. If other Colts hear about it, He won't ever hear the end of it."
"Why would he never hear the end of it? He saved you from getting killed yesterday."
"They would think he isn't Coltly enough to deal with my death."
"Fluttershy, Nopony would be Coltly or Marely enough to deal with your death, Even Thunder. We should tell him, And let him know that it's okay."
Fluttershy thought for a second. She accepted.
"Okay."
Another hour later, Thunder, Spike, and the girls, All got their stuff and left the beach. They headed to Sugarcube Corner to have some treats. Pinkie Pie headed into the Kitchen of the shop and started baking secret treats.
Thunder was sitting down in a seat, With his head down on the table. He sighed.
The girls decided to go over to him to talk about the dream.
Twilight was the first to say something.
"Thunder?"
Thunder slowly lifted his head off of the table.
"Yeah?"
"Are you sure you're okay?"
"Yeah. I'm fine. Just a little tired."
Rainbow Dash answered next.
"You know, Thunder, You don't have to make excuses."
"What do you..."
He then knew that they were talking about his nightmare last night.
"Oh...That."
Twilight began talking again. "Why were you afraid to tell us?"
"Because..." He tried to get his words in order.
"...Because I thought that if you were to tell anypony else, Then they would tell all of the colts, And everyone would think I'm just some loser who wouldn't handle Fluttershy's death. I don't know, That's what I keep on thinking."
Rarity spoke up.
"Darling, Nopony will think you're a loser. Nopony would be able to handle Fluttershy's death."
"I guess you're right, Rarity."
Then, Somepony spoke up.
"Aww, Did Wittle Thunder have a bad dweam Last Night?"
The girls, Spike, And Thunder turned around. It was Dumb-Bell.
Twilight started getting agitated. Dumbell was the most annoying pony next to Ditzy/Derpy. "Go away, Dumb-Bell."
"Why? I'm just here to make wittle Thunder all bettewr!"
Thunder started to feel annoyed. "Leave me alone."
Thunder started getting angry. "I said Leave me alone!"
Dumb-Bell kept laughing. Thunder kept filling with anger. His voice got a little deep for a second. "I'm warning you...Cut it out..."
Thunder closed his eyes as he remembered the nightmare, Then the memory of the 9/11 attack. A tear came down his face. He kept getting furious from Dumb-Bell laughing.
"C'mon, Thunder Wuss! CRY!"
Thunder then lost it. His eyes opened, But they glowed dark red, Like an evil red. His voice was deeper than ever.
"I warned you..."
Dumb-Bell saw how Thunder looked. "Uh-Oh." Was the only thing Dumb-Bell said.
Thunder quickly raised his Arms at Dumb-Bell, And in a flash, Dumb-Bell was sent flying out the Door of Sugarcube Corner by a powerful gust of wind. he landed on his back, With a minor fracture to his back.
Thunder slowly trotted to the doorway. Dumb-Bell looked up at Thunder. Thunder began speaking in an evil, Deep, Dark voice.
"NOW, YOU CAN RUN AWAY NOW, BECAUSE THE NEXT TIME I SEE YOU, BLOOD WILL BE SHED."
Thunder made an evil grin. Instantly, Dumb-Bell ran away, Screaming and crying. Thunder kept watching him as he ran cowardly. His eyes were still red.
"Thunder?"
He heard a voice. It was Fluttershy. His eyes instantly turned back to their normal blue color. Thunder started to feel weak, And fell to his knees. Fluttershy trotted towards him quickly.
"Are you okay?" Thunder felt very weak. The anger had taken a lot of his energy.
"Uhh...Yeah. I'm okay."
Twilight was very confused. She had never seen Thunder so evil before.
"Thunder, What happened back there?"
He had a hard time speaking.
"I...I don't know..."
He managed to get up, And trotted towards the closest seat. He sat down, Holding his head in dizzyness. Rainbow Dash was amazed and afraid at the same time.
"That was cool!"
Thunder was confused. "What's so cool about me Scarin' somepony to death? Now everypony will think I'm some sort of Demon."
Twilight felt bad for him. "Thunder...You didn't just scare anypony off. You scared Dumb-Bell."
Thunder started to chuckle a little. "What kind of name is Dumb-Bell anyway?"
"It's the name of the meanie you scared off!" Pinkie yelled.
Thunder smiled at the thought of scaring Dumb-Bell off. "Yeah...It felt good when I did it."
Then he thought of what Dumb-Bell said before...Cluttzershy.
He looked up at Fluttershy, Who was looking worried at him.
"Fluttershy...Why did he call you..."Cluttzershy?"
Fluttershy was sad at the sound of that name.
"He calls me that because...I'm always a Clutz. I mess everything up sometimes."
Thunder had NEVER seen her mess up on anything, Or crash into anything.
"Shy...You're not a Clutz. Why would you think that?"
Pinkie Aww'd when Thunder said "Shy."
"AWWW, He called you Shy! That's so sweet!"
Thunder ignored her and continued.
"Shy...I don't think you're a Clutz because you aren't one. You are a sweet, Gentle, And Beautiful mare. And, I would do anything for you."
Fluttershy started to blush again. She then smiled at him, Her eyes gleaming.
Thunder once again said the three meaningfull words of love to her.
"I love you, Fluttershy."
He slowly, And gently pulled her toward him and Placed his lips onto hers. Her eyes closed in this romantic kiss, And so did Thunder's.
The girls and Spike Aww'd at the couple.
"Awwwww...!"
Meanwhile, In a bush, Dumb-Bell was looking at the Sugarcube Corner entrance, And could see Thunder and Fluttershy kissing passionately.
"Ho...ly...Shit." Was the only words that came out of Dumb Bell's mouth.
He hated Fluttershy, And hated Thunder even more, Even though It's been about 4 Days since Thunder arrived in Ponyville. The one thing that he hated the most about them, Was that they were Dating!
Suddenly, An evil thought began to fly into Dumb-Bell's head.
"Yeah...Yeah, That's good."
He had a plan...A plan to break the relationship between Thunder and Fluttershy, By Telling Fluttershy lies about how much of a Cheater Thunder really is.
"Hahahaha...AHAHAHAHAHA!"
He covered his mouth instantly, Hoping nopony could hear. He looked back at the Couple, Who were touching Snouts.
"Mark my words, Thunder Ice...I'll make Sure 'Cluttzershy' Never speaks to you for as long as you live!" He ran out of the bush and ran back home.
It was about 5:00 In Ponyville. The sun was still in the sky, The sky was partially orange, And a certain Grey Pony was strolling around the town, Thinking of a way to break Thunder's relationship with the Shy, Yellow mare, Fluttershy.
Dumb-Bell was thinking of many ways to break their bond.
"Should I tell her he slept with Rainbow Dash? That he raped her? What?"
Suddenly, He heard a voice in the alleyway of a Building. He looked. It was Thunder sitting alone.
"Aw, what's that loser doin' here?"
He could see Thunder talking to himself. He listened closely. Information words were heard.
"What do I do? That dream I had in the closet is still bugging me. I mean, I'm a pervert, For God's sake!"
Dumb-Bell was confused.
"What's a God?"
He continued to listen.
"I'm a sick pony. I had a dream where Fluttershy was sucking me dry, Me Coming in her face, And me licking her pleasure spot. If anypony found out about this, Even her, Or worse...Dumb-Bell, Everypony would think I'm a pervert."
Dumb-Bell hatched an evil idea.
"Hehehe...I'll make sure everyone knows your dirty little secret, You Dark blue asshole. Hahaha..."
Dumb-Bell walked away from the Alleyway.
"Oh, This is gold. I can finally break their relationship. And, I can even add some other lustful things in there. Hehe..."
(Wow, Dumb-Bell sure is an ass.)
He started heading towards Fluttershy's home. He reached it about a few minutes later.
"Alright, Time to do this."
He knocked on the door twice. He heard a faint voice.
"Coming!"
The door opened, And Fluttershy stood there. She saw Dumb-Bell.
"What do you want?"
Dumb-Bell tried his best to smile.
"Hello. I just wanted to apologize about what I did. I didn't mean it. I was just being jerkish."
"Wow...You've never been nice before to anypony, Or me."
"Is it okay if I come in?"
Fluttershy thought for a second. "Oh, Okay. Come in."
She walked towards the sofa in her living room. Dumb-Bell walked into her home.
About 3 minutes later, Dumb-Bell and Fluttershy were sitting on opposite sofas.
Dumb-Bell tried to sound as nice as possible, To try not to bring up any suspicion.
"So, Fluttershy...Tell me about...Thunder Ice."
"Well...Thunder is a nice, loving, And caring pony. He takes good care of animals, And he's really smart. He never tells lies, And he would also never do anything to hurt my feelings."
Dumb-Bell noticed that this was his time to tell her Thunder's story, And add some lies. He got ready.
"Yeah...Fluttershy. Well...There's something I need to tell you about Thunder."
Soon, Thunder Ice decided to pop over to Fluttershy's house to talk to her. Then, Give her a kiss goodbye.
"I Wish I could tell her, But If I did, I'd be dead to her. A Dead pervert."
He walked up to the door and knocked on it. The door opened, But instead of seeing a happy, Smiling Fluttershy, He saw an Angry, Tearful one.
"Fluttershy? What's wrong?"
"How Dare you..."
"What?"
She grabbed him, And yelled into his face.
"How dare You!"
She threw him at the wall, And he fell to the floor. "Fluttershy, What's wrong? Are you okay? What did I do?"
"Why...Why didn't you tell me?"
"Tell you what?"
"Don't you lie. You had a sick, Sexual dream about me, Then went off having sex with Rainbow Dash after you and I started going out, Just so you could get it out of your mind!"
"What? ...Look, I tried to tell you about the dream, But I knew this would happen! I didn't want you to know!"
Thunder and Fluttershy were silent for a few seconds. Thunder looked down. Fluttershy managed to say three words.
"You're a pervert..."
He looked up at her. "Wh..What?"
"You're a sick pervert!"
"Fluttershy, You gotta understand! I never did Anything with Rai..." He was cut off by a kick to the barrel. He yelled in pain.
He sat on the floor, Holding his Barrel in pain.
"Get out."
Thunder looked back up at her. "What?"
"Get out of my home, And Get out of my life. I don't need you."
"But...But..."
She had a face of anger, With tears still coming down her face.
"Okay."
He slowly got up, And walked out of the door. She slammed the door behind him. He started walking away back to his Canyon, To his home. Before he left, He looked back at the house, And whispered...
"I still love you, Fluttershy. Nothing will change that."
Tears started coming down his face. He continued to walk home.
About 10 minutes later, He reached his home. He put in the code, And the door opened. He walked into his Living room, And sat down on the couch. He could hear the stillness and quietness around him.
It was as if time had frozen.
He looked next to him on a stand. It was a picture of him and Fluttershy together. They were both smiling in the picture. He started smiling.
Then, Slowly, Tears started coming down his face. He then gripped the picture and hugged it in his arms, And began to cry.
It had been 17 hours since Thunder left Fluttershy's house. It was 10:00 a.m. Thunder had slept on his sofa.
He slowly woke up, Looking around. He sighed to himself, Knowing the mare he loved so much no longer loved him.
But, A few questions ran through his mind...
"How did she know? Did someone tell her? Was she sneaking on me? Why does she think I...With Rainbow Dash?"
These questions were never going to be answered once Fluttershy told everyone. No one would answer him. It was only a matter of time.
He didn't want to live anymore. He didn't want to live with this horrible thing going around Equestria.
He was in deep thought for a few moments. He was thinking to himself.
"...It's the only way...When I'm gone...She'll be happy."
He had decided what he was going to do. He was going to end all of the pain and embarassment that was about to come. He...Was going to kill himself.
He looked at the picture of him and Fluttershy. Then, He looked at another picture with just Fluttershy on it. He held it in his hand. He then slowly put it towards his face, And kissed the picture.
A tear started coming down his face.
"Don't worry, Shy...You won't have to deal with me anymore...Goodbye."
He placed the picture on the desk next to the sofa. He slowly got up, And started walking towards the door. He looked back at the picture one last time, Before turning away to the exit.
He walked out, Pressed a few buttons on the control panel, And the door slid shut.
He looked around to find a spot where nopony would see him, Not that they were ever going to.
He then saw one cliff that pointed near the ocean. He saw in the Equestrian Archives that it was called "Fate's Edge." Legend has it that ponies who went there never returned.
"Perfect. That's the place..."
He started trotting slowly towards the distant cliff.
Within a few minutes, He reached Fate's Edge. It was standing over 200 feet above the ocean. He slowly trotted towards the edge and looked over. He could see rocks at the bottom, With water all around them.
"If Fluttershy wants me dead...I'll answer her wish...
He stood on his hind legs, Basically, like a human. He then raised his Forelegs to the side, Feeling the cool air blowing against him.
He was almost ready to leap over the edge, But then...A faint, and familiar voice stopped him.
"NOOOOOOO!"
"Huh?"
Before Thunder could look back and see who it was, He was lifted off his feet, And sent about 20 feet from the edge. He hit the back of his head really hard, Which cracked his skull open, And sent blood soaking through his head. The pain was endless. Then, Soon, It all went black...
Soon, Thunder opened his eyes, And could only see whiteness around him.
He looked around, And could see nothing. Then, Out of nowhere, A man with a white robe appeared. The man chuckled.
"Hehehe...Sorry if I startled you, My son."
"Oh...It's alright."
Thunder looked at himself. He was in human form. He then took time to inspect the man.
"Are you...God?"
"Hahaha...No, My son. I am a friend of him, Though. You might not recognize me."
"No...I'm afraid I don't."
"I assumed you wouldn't. It's been so Long since we've last met."
Thunder was still baffled.
"How long?"
"Well...In my mind...It's been about...10 years..."
Thunder thought for a second. 10 years ago was the 9/11 attack. World Trade Center, Mom and Dad...Wait...He recognized the man now.
"...Dad?"
"...Yes. It's me, Son."
Thunder ran towards him as fast as he could, And hugged his father as tightly as he could. He started crying.
"Oh, God...I missed you so much..."
"I have Too, John."
"It's been so long since I've heard that name. Maybe 3 days."
"Yes. I've seen you in the land. How is it there?"
He let go of his father.
"Well...It was good...Everypony there is happy."
"I know. I've seen your journeys. I saw your kindness. I even saw you save that Yellow mare at that Air balloon show The other day."
John was glad his father was still watching over him.
"Where's Mom?"
"Well...She's at Poker."
John chuckled a bit. "Poker?"
"Uh huh."
John continued to chuckle, "Poker's her life...Even before 9/11."
"Anyway...I even saw your...Dream...That you had about that mare."
John instantly filled with humiliation. "Yeah...About that..."
"Son...You don't need to be ashamed. It's perfectly normal."
"Well, I guess...But...She doesn't think it's normal. She was right, Though. I am a sick freak. I was going to end it all, To make her happy again, Until somepony stopped me. Their voice sounded familiar...I can't remember."
John's father was trying to convince John that he had much to live for.
"Son...Don't you see? This is your chance to start over. This is your chance to do what you've always wanted to do. Live happily."
"But, Fluttershy was the one who was keeping me happy. Without her, I'm nothing."
"Son, There is more love out there in Equestria. If you search enough, You'll find another lucky mare. Love won't end after the first love. But, If she is who you truly desire, You can try to win her back."
"...Thank you, Dad."
"You still have many years ahead of you to find love, Son. Live every day to the fullest."
"I will."
He smiled at his father, Then he smiled back. Then, John had a question to ask.
"Dad...You said I'm not dead, Right?"
"Well, You are. But, God allowed me to bring you back to Equestria again."
"Oh. That's a relief. Oh, Before I go...Tell Mom I said "Hello."
"I will."
John's father raised his hands at John, And zapped electricity into him. Everything went black once more.
As he began to slowly regain consiousness, He could see that It was dark. It must've been about 12 hours since he "Died." He looked at himself. He was once again a pony.
He looked around to see if he could see the Mare who stopped him from jumping. As he looked around, He could see a light about 20 feet from where he was.
Next to the fire, He could see a pony laying down. He didn't know who it was, But he could hear that it was a mare, Because she was...Crying.
He slowly got up and quietly trotted over to the fire to see who the mare was that was crying.
As he got closer, He could hear some words.
"Thunder...Why...It's my fault..."
The voice sounded familiar. He got a little bit closer, And saw that the mare was purple, And had a horn. He knew who it was. He whispered her name.
"Twilight?"
The crying purple mare slowly turned her head towards him. He definately knew it was her.
"T-Thunder?"
She instantly got up and started hugging him tightly. "I Thought you died! I Thought I'd never see you again!" She continued crying into his chest.
"It's okay, Twilight. Don't cry."
"Why? I killed you!" She continued crying.
"But I'm alive, Right?"
"But, How?"
"I met my father. We talked, And he brought me back with the power he borrowed from God."
Twilight was confused. "What's God?"
"God is the spirit everyone believes in. Why? Do you believe in another spirit?"
"I'm afraid not..."
"Oh."
"But, Do you know of Princess Celestia?"
"Princess...Celestia?"
Twilight continued.
"She's the one who brings up the sun in the day, And her sister, Princess Luna, Brings up the moon at night. I'm her favorite student in magic. I'm her star pupil."
Thunder grinned. "No wonder you're so famous and smart."
Twilight started to giggle and laugh. She smiled at him. she looked at his injuries. There were none.
"Listen, Twilight...There's somethin' I gotta tell you..."
"I know."
"Huh?"
He then started to panic in his mind. He was just going to face it anyway.
"Fluttershy told me. About you, And...Rainbow Dash."
"Look, Twilight, Nothing happened between me and Dash, Alright? I don't even know how she found out about my dream in the first place!"
"Well...I found out who."
"Who?"
"Dumb-Bell."
Thunder felt anger when she said that. Dumb-Bell, The biggest asshole in Ponyville told Fluttershy Thunder's dream, And even added lies?
"That bastard. I'm going to kill him."
Then, All of a sudden, Twilight grabbed him, And...Started kissing him.
Thunder's eyes widened in shock.
He carefully pushed her gently off him.
"Twilight! What're you doing?"
"Thunder...I have something to say."
"First, Tell me why you kissed me."
"That's what I'm going to tell you."
Thunder was embarassed for a second. "Oh."
She started to tell him what she was going to say.
"A few hours ago, I was looking at you when you were dead. You looked so peaceful, And handsome. I...I started to fall in love with you. I wanted you so badly, But...I realized...You had left this world..."
A tear came down her face. Thunder was looking at her.
"Then...An idea appeared in my head. It was vile, It was a gross thing to do, But...I looked around...I said to my self, "Nopony would find out, Ever..." So I started to stroke your...Member."
Thunder was shocked. His eyes widened. He had never known Twilight would be like this!
"You were still warm, And some blood was somehow still circulating. I don't know how. But...Your member then got hard. I...I started sucking it. Sucking it hard and dry. I knew what I was doing was wrong. I felt like such a Necroslut. But, I wanted to get the fantasy out of my head."
Thunder just was quiet. Still shocked.
"Soon, After sucking you for about a minute, Your body managed to release cum. It felt warm on my face. Then...I had another sick fantasy. I...I wanted to...ride you."
Thunder was still shocked. His eyes were very wide.
"I then held your member with my hoof. I then slowly got on top of your dead body. It was so wrong of me...I then was on top of you, Taking breaths. Then...I slid it in...But in my...plot."
She blushed. She continued.
"The pleasure. It was so exciting, But it was also so...Dead...I kept riding you hard...Trying to ride you to orgasm. I kept riding you faster and harder. Soon, After a few minutes, I came hard. I screamed at the top of my lungs. I could also feel your lifeless body releasing your cum into me... I took a minute to breathe."
Thunder was still being silent.
"After half a minute of breathing, I pulled myself out of you. It started to get dark, So I set up a fire. I then started to lay down, Not looking at your corpse."
Tears started coming down Twilight's face. She hugged him tightly.
"Oh, Thunder! I feel like such a Necrophiliac and a Slut! I'm sorry!" She cried into his chest.
he slowly lifted her head up with his hooves. He began talking very nicely.
"Twilight, It's okay. You don't need to be ashamed."
"Yes, I do! I lost my Virginity to a Corpse!" She continued to cry.
"Uhh, This may sound very stupid, But I thought you only lose your virginity if you put it in your...V-Card." He said it Embarassed.
She looked up at him. "So...I didn't lose my Virginity?"
"I don't think so. I still don't know much about losing your virginity, So I guess yes. You're still a virgin."
She was relieved. "Okay."
"Wait...Don't you have books on this stuff?"
"Yes, But I've never read them! I've been busy studying."
"I see. Hehe...I didn't think you cared this much about me."
"I've wanted you so badly."
"Well...You did have me before."
"But...You were dead. It's sick and disgusting doing it with the dead."
"Well, That's because they start decomposing. I hate to say this, But you were lucky when you did it."
"Why?"
"Well, During decomposition, Flies lay eggs in a decomposing body. If you found me dead about a month from now, And did it, You would probably end up getting larvae eggs inside of you."
"Eww..." Twilight started feeling sick.
Thunder probably shouldn't have told her that. "Are you okay?"
She felt a little better. "Yeah. I'm okay..."
She started looking into his eyes. They were glowing blue. He looked into her eyes. They glowed Purple, Just like her.
She then slowly moved towards him, And placed her lips on his. Thunder was a little shocked at first, But then he accepted the kiss. Their eyes both closed in a passionate kiss. Twilight began to moan.
Soon, They broke the kiss, And tried to get some air. Then, Twilight pushed Thunder to the ground. "Whoa!"
"Sorry," Twilight said. Thunder chuckled.
"Don't worry."
Twilight also fell to the ground slowly, Making her way towards Thunder's erection.
She then grabbed it, And placed it into her mouth. Thunder grunted for a second. He moaned when the head of his length made contact with the back of her throat.
Thunder soon felt his orgasm coming. "Ugh...Twilight...I'm gonna...I'm..." He couldn't hold it back anymore. He then released his warm cum into Twilight's mouth. Her eyes had widened, But then they closed halfway, And she moaned as the cum went into her throat.
She pulled his length out of her mouth, And swallowed all the cum that she could swallow. She tried to breathe. Thunder could see her coughing.
"Are you...Okay?"
She had trouble responding.
"Yeah...I'm...Okay."
She then got down on her stomach, With her hooves facing outward. She lifted her tail up to reveal her femslit. "Please...Put it in here."
He saw that she was desperate for this. "Okay, Twilight. Wait...What about pregnancy?"
She smiled. "Don't worry...I'm not in Season yet."
He smiled back. "Okay. I'll be gentle. I promise."
"I trust you, Thunder."
He continued to smile at her. Then, Slowly, He slid his still hard member inside her femslit, Receiving a small scream from Twilight. "Are you okay?"
"Yeah..." She was trying to breathe. He sure was big.
"Lemme...Just...Get used to...It." About a few seconds later, She felt comfortable.
"Okay. You can continue."
Slowly, Thunder started to thrust in and out of her. He received loud moans from her, Knowing she wanted more. "Please...More..."
He started to thrust faster into her. She started moaning loudly now, Almost screaming. She tried to silence her screams, But the pleasure was too good. Then, Her pillow that she brought with her. She grabbed it, And dug her face into it, Blocking her screams from being heard.
Thunder was grunting loudly, Thrusting fast into her. He could hear Twilight moaning his name. "Thunder...Thunder..!"
He got faster when he heard her. He felt his orgasm not too far. He felt a knot forming. This was going to be a big orgasm. He knew Twilight was reaching orgasm as well. Her screams were turned into screeches.
"Twi...I'm almost at the...point..."
Twilight had trouble of speaking.
"P-Please...C-Cum into M-Me..."
She continued to screech in pleasure.
"I..Want to feel..It inside me..."
Thunder was breathing heavily.
"Hang on...I've got...Another trick...For you..."
He had reached a free hoof down to her femslit as he kept thrusting, And had started to rub the bump on Twilight's femslit. He already knew what this was: He was rubbing her Clitoris. He saw her body jerking. "Oh, Thunder! That's...Ooh...!" She couldn't finish. The pleasure was too much for her to finish her sentence.
Twilight had always dreamed about doing this with Thunder. She pleasured herself many times in the past, But the Clitoris was the only place she never had touched, And There was Thunder, Thrusting into her, playing with it.
"It's...Too good, Thunder! TOO GOOD! I'm Gonna...I'm gonna-"
Twilight instantly felt pleasure as she orgasmed. She screamed as loud as she could.
"AAAAAHH!!"
She continued to scream and climax in ecstasy. Soon, After the orgasms ended, Twilight was panting heavily. Thunder was also.
"You...Can pull out...Now."
Thunder slowly pulled out his erection. He did it slowly to avoid hurting her. Soon, Thunder had pulled Twilight close to him gently, And wrapped his legs and arms around her.
Twilight smiled at him. "I love you, Thunder."
"I love you, Too, Twilight."
They pulled each other into another passionate kiss. They felt the inside of each other's mouths. Soon, Their lips parted. Thunder gently rubbed her shoulder, Which made her moan.
Twilight was getting tired and decided to get some rest. But...Before she fell asleep, She felt something enter her Femslit deeply. She gasped and moaned loudly. It was Thunder. She noticed he was getting another erection, And that he entered her by accident.
She looked at him. He looked back at her. "Uhh...Sorry." He reached down to grab his length to pull out, But then he felt Twilight's hoof hold his. She stared at him with romantic eyes.
"No...Please...Leave it in for the night. I want to sleep with you inside of me."
Thunder couldn't really believe what he was hearing, But he loved the feeling of her walls around him. He smiled. He then placed his hooves and legs around her, And got closer to her, So he would be deeper inside of her. He had never seen Twilight like this before, But he loved it.
Before Twilight went to sleep, Thunder whispered a question to her.
"Hey, Twi?"
"Yeah?"
"What about...Fluttershy? Won't she be furious at you and me?"
She kissed him again.
"Don't worry. She'll be okay. Trust me."
"Okay...Sweet Dreams, Twilight...I love you."
"I love you, Too, Thunder."
They kissed each other again, but longer this time. After their lips parted, Thunder kept his arms and legs around her to keep her warm during the night, And Twilight laid as close as possible to him. She smiled as he held her.
They then drifted off to sleep, With him still inside her. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, It isn't very Thunder and Fluttershy-ish right now, But It might. Will Thunder get her back? Will he leave Twilight? Will he stay with Twilight? Why the hell am I asking you these questions?
Thunder and Twilight had slept together the whole night. Thunder was sleeping behind her, Twilight was in front, And Thunder was still inside her. Christ...
The fire had gone out long ago during the night. It was 11:34 a.m. when Twilight awoke. She awoke feeling pleasure, Considering Thunder was still deep inside her.
Her eyes were a little bit open because of the light that was shining down on the couple. She looked behind her to see Thunder still sleeping. She spoke quietly not to annoy him. "Thunder...Wake up..."
Thunder slowly woke up to the sound of her voice. "Hey, Twi. Had a good sleep?"
She smiled at him. "Uh huh. I had great time last night."
He leaned to her and kissed her. Her eyes closed and she moaned. After the kiss, Thunder slowly pulled out of her.
She opened her eyes, And could see all around her now. What she saw was the most embarassing thing to happen. "Uh...Oh..."
Thunder couldn't see well from the light. "What?"
Then he could see clearly. He looked around. He had the same reaction. "Oh, shit..."
The embarassing sight was...The other girls, And Spike were here, And they were watching them. Twilight's face reddened with humiliation. Thunder chuckled nervously.
"Hehe...Hey, girls. Hey, Spike." Thunder could only say that to them.
Rainbow Dash had a disappointed and angry look. "Thunder...Are you the one spreading lies?"
"Wait, What?"
"Are you the one who said that I had sex with you?"
"What? NO! It was Dumb-Bell!"
Rarity spoke up. "Oh, Really? I thought an Earth Pony like you would be more loyal."
"Hey, I am loyal! And, I'm not lying! Dumb-Bell told Fluttershy that I had sex with Dash! And that got out to the public!"
Rainbow Dash was angry now. "Yeah, And we also know that you had a dream about Eating out Fluttershy, And her sucking you, You perverted freak."
"You see? I knew, That if Fluttershy found out about the dream, This would be the result! It would continue and go on and on and on, Until everyone found out!"
Fluttershy knew That Dumb-Bell had told other colts about the dream and lies. So did the other girls, Including Spike, But except for Twilight.
Thunder began walking to the cliff. "Why can't ponies just fucking forget about it, And STAY OUT OF WHAT HAPPENS IN MY LIFE!"
The girls jumped back a little as he yelled. Thunder looked down at the ground. He sighed. "What am I doing...? This is nothing like my father said to me."
Rainbow Dash was confused for a second. "Your...Father?"
"Yes, My father. I spoke to him yesterday."
"How?" Pinkie was confused the most.
Thunder was silent for a few moments. He then spoke up.
"I died last night."
Rainbow started laughing. "Oh, Haha, Very funny, Thunder."
Twilight decided to speak up. "He's not kidding."
"In the morning, Yesterday, After knowing that Fluttershy hated my guts after finding out, I decided that if I were to end my pain, She would be happy."
Rarity spoke up. "You were...Going to kill yourself?"
He looked up at Rarity. "Yes...To me, It would be the only way of making her happy."
He looked back at the cliff and closed his eyes, Remembering yesterday.
"I left my home, And headed here to the cliff. I was ready to jump. I was thinking that nopony would ever miss me. I spread my arms out, Then all of a sudden, I heard Twilight behind me. She used her magic and threw me back from the cliff. I fractured my skull, Which sent blood leaking out. I died within a minute."
Thunder tried to retrack everything that happened yesterday.
"I woke up in heaven, And met my father for the first time in 10 years. It was the happiest moment of my "Afterlife." You know, Because I was dead. He told me that love doesn't end after the first female, Or mare. He also said that if I wanted to win Fluttershy's heart again, I could."
Thunder smiled. "He zapped me with a bolt of light, And I woke up about 12 hours later. I saw Twilight crying near a fire. I checked if she was okay. I received the biggest hug of all. She then told me that she also was in love with me, And that she did some...Forgive me Twilight..."
"You can tell them."
Rainbow Dash turned to Thunder. "Tell us what?"
Thunder looked at the other girls. "Twilight did some...Necrosexual things with me when I was dead."
Applejack was a little disgusted. "Well, That ain' right."
Twilight bowed her head in shame. "I know. I felt like such a Necroslut when doing it."
Thunder didn't want her to feel bad. "You're not a Necroslut."
Applejack said, "Whoa, Whoa, Whoa, Wait just a darn secon' here. We're completely off topic here! Thunder, Don't you love Fluttergal? Or Twilight?"
Fluttershy looked at him with a funny looking grin. "Yeah, Thunder. Don't you love me?"
Twilight looked at him. "Thunder?"
Thunder was in deep thought. Did he love Twilight or Fluttershy? If he loved Twilight, Fluttershy would still hate him and start telling other ponies about his dream. If he Loved Fluttershy, Twilight would be heartbroken, And might not talk to him anymore.
Think, Thunder, Think! He thought to himself.
Finally, He got an answer.
Applejack got impatient. "Well?"
He replied to her. "I love Both."
Rainbow Dash looked at him funny. "Oh, Really?"
Thunder continued. "Yes. Fluttershy was the first girl, Or mare in this case, That I helped with her shyness. Twilight, She's loved me for so long, And I gave her the love that she wanted. Wait...Lemme rephrase that."
Rainbow Dash just kept looking at him. "Don't. Well, If you really love both, Then kiss Fluttershy, And then kiss Twilight."
"Okay, Then."
He started trotting towards Fluttershy. He was about to place his lips on hers, When she got mad. "Get away from me!"
She kicked him hard, Which sent him flying a few feet. He slid on the ground, And ended up on the edge of the cliff.
Thunder groaned in pain, And then heard a cracking sound, He looked up, And saw that the ground around him was cracking. "Shit!"
Twilight couldn't hear the sounds. "What's wrong?" She started trotting towards him.
"Step back! This thing's about to break. Rainbow, Help me."
Rainbow thought he was kidding. "why?"
Thunder looked at her seriously. "If I even move one inch, This thing will fall."
Rainbow still thought he was joking around. She flew down to the ground. "No."
Thunder moved a hoof. "Rainbow Dash, Plea..." His hoof touching the ground was enough to send the chunk of rock where Thunder was standing breaking up, And falling off of the side of the cliff, Down to the ocean.
Thunder fell and started sliding towards the edge of the slope where the rock he stood on stood seconds ago. Twilight was in complete fear. Actually, All of the girls were. "THUNDER!" Was all Twilight yelled. She bolted towards the cliff edge.
Before he fell entirely off the cliff, He managed to grab onto the edge. He grunted trying to hold himself up. Twilight managed to reach him.
"Thunder! Grab my hoof!"
Thunder managed to lift his right hoof up to her. He grabbed it.
Fluttershy also reached him. "Thunder! Take my hoof, Too!"
He reached his left Hoof to her. Twilight was holding his right hoof, And Fluttershy was holding his left hoof.
Twilight was struggling to hold him. "Don't worry, Thunder! We got you!"
Fluttershy yelled to the other girls.
"Girls, Help us!" Fluttershy's eyes were filled with fear. The other girls headed to the edge, And supported Twilight And Fluttershy.
Soon, The Two girls started to feel their hoofs slip from Thunder's.
Thunder was struggling to hold on with them. "I...I can't hold on much longer!"
Fluttershy was now scared. "We're not going to let you go!"
Thunder tried as hard as he could to hold on. He grunted and struggled. "I...I'm slipping!"
Then, Instantly, Thunder's grip on the other girls was broken. Thunder began to feel himself fall.
Twilight and Fluttershy screamed. "NOOOO! THUNDERRR!"
Thunder could hear their voices echo. He could then see someone jump over the edge. No...Fly over the edge. Then he saw someone else. It was Rainbow Dash, And Fluttershy.
They started flying as fast as they could towards him, But the weird thing: Thunder was falling faster than they were flying.
Rainbow and Fluttershy tried to pick up speed, But they were so tired from floating before, That they couldn't go any faster.
Soon, Thunder felt a painful thud. Then...It was silent. Thunder had hit the cold ground above the water.
Fluttershy yelled at the top of her lungs.
"THUNDERRRRRRRRRR!" She flew faster than Rainbow Dash and reached him in about a second or two. She looked upon Thunder's body, Broken and bloody. She was too late. He was gone. She failed to save the Colt who brought joy to her life during the past 3 days of living in Equestria.
She closed her eyes and began to cry. She was too late...Or so she thought.
She started to hear breathing sounds. She looked at Thunder. He was still breathing. Her eyes widened.
She saw his eyes slowly open. She spoke to him. "Thunder?"
Thunder couldn't speak well. He was in too much pain. All he could say was...
"Hospital."
Then, Thunder went unconscious. Rainbow managed to reach Fluttershy. She looked at her.
"Fluttershy?"
Fluttershy looked back at Rainbow. "He's still alive."
"What?"
"We need to get him to the hospital now!"
They carefully picked him up, And flew back up. They started flying back to Ponyville, To save him before it was too late.
Oh, No. Thunder's been hurt, And Fluttershy cares now? Kewl. Next chapter will be up soon. Later. Oh, Also, When I was making the part where Rainbow and Fluttershy were flying towards Thunder, I accidentally replaced Rainbow's name with Twilight. hehehe...bye.
Okay, I was gonna post this on Monday, January 9th, 2012, But, Some things involving me moving into a new room in my home sort of cut me off from this for a while. So, Yeah. I'm only a teen. :p Enjoy.
It had been 2 Hours since Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy had brought Thunder to the Ponyville Medical Center. The other girls and Spike had arrived about an hour after they brought him to the Medical Center.
Rainbow Dash was sitting down, Anxious, Hoping her friend was okay. She just kept thinking about him, When he told her to grab him. "Why didn't I just grab him when he said it...?"
Twilight was sitting in a seat, Also Anxious, Hoping Thunder was okay. "Please, Thunder...Please don't die..."
Fluttershy, Who basically ignored Thunder a whole day, Was the most worried out of all of them there. "It's my fault...Because I didn't believe him...He could be dead..."
Twilight could see her sitting down, Tears coming down her face. She trotted over to her. She sat down next to Fluttershy, And hugged her.
"Don't worry, Fluttershy...He'll be okay..."
Fluttershy was too scared and couldn't calm herself.
"No...No he won't...He'll die because of me. It's all my fault..." Tears kept coming down her face.
Twilight couldn't stand hearing her friend saying this. "Fluttershy...It's not your fault...It was the pressure."
Rainbow heard them. "What do you mean?"
"I'm saying, He told me that Fluttershy would tell everyone about his dream. He was worried we might kick him out of Ponyville, Or that Princess Celestia would banish him."
Rainbow was a little confused. "I don't get what you mean."
Twilight said it shorter. "He was thinking too much that it drove him to the point of almost suicide. All of us there was about to bring him to the point of suicide...I could see it in his eyes..."
Rainbow was still confused. "Still doesn't make any sense."
Twilight decided not to repeat. "He almost died because of US."
Rainbow looked at her with a saddening face. She knew it was mostly her fault. If she just listened to Thunder...
Then, A Doctor came out of Thunder's Medical room. Twilight saw her first.
"Doctor...Is...He going to be okay?"
The doctor faced Twilight and the other girls. He sighed.
"I'm afraid not...The injuries are too fatal. He is in extremely critical condition. Many of his major organs were damaged from the impact. Suprisingly, The top part of him, From his Arms to his Head, Are unbroken."
The doctor was silent for a second. He continued.
"But...By the looks of him...He could be gone by Sundown...I'm sorry."
Fluttershy immediately broke into tears. She fell to her knees and began to cry.
"Thunder's...Going to die...?"
The doctor had something else to say.
"But...He's awake right now. He wants to see all of you. He said it's his wish to see you guys one last time, Before..."
Twilight was also in tears. Her voice was cracked.
"Thank you, Doctor."
All of the girls and Spike began walking into the room where Thunder was in. When they saw him, He looked horrible. His broken part of his body was under a blanket. The doctors wanted to make him comfortable for his last few hours on Earth.
As soon as they were all in the room, The Doctor began to close the door.
"I'll give you some time alone."
He shut the door. The girls and Spike all looked at him. He had his eyes close, But when the doctor spoke, He opened them. He could see them all standing there.
Thunder's voice was quiet, And it sounded painful when he spoke.
"Hey...Guys."
Fluttershy was the most upset. "Hi...Thunder..."
She slowly trotted up to him. She slowly and carefully hugged him, Hoping not to hurt him. She began to cry again. Thunder tried to calm her down.
"Shh...Shh...It's okay..."
Rainbow just looked at Thunder. "Uhh...I'm sorry...Thunder."
Thunder didn't hear, As he tried to keep Fluttershy calm. "Huh..?"
She repeated what she said. "I'm sorry for not listening to you at the cliff...I should've helped you...And because I didn't..." Dash started to tear up just thinking about it.
Fluttershy was calm now. She slowly got off of Thunder and stood to the side. Dash just cried. Thunder tried to calm Dash as well.
"Don't cry...Dash..."
Dash began to calm as well. She slowly wiped the tears off of her face.
Applejack spoke up, And tried to make him feel better, Even though he wasn't.
"Hope ya feel bett'r soon, Thunder."
"Thank you...Applejack."
Twilight wanted to say some private things to Thunder, And She wanted Fluttershy to, As well.
"Girls...? Do you mind if Fluttershy and I have a few minutes alone...With Thunder?"
The girls nodded and smiled. They walked out. It was only Twilight, Thunder, And Fluttershy left in the room.
Twilight looked at Thunder, With tears in her eyes. "Thunder..."
Thunder managed to speak up. "Don't be sorry, Twi. I forgive you."
Twilight was confused. Her voice was still a little cracky. "What?"
"You don't need to be sorry. And you don't need to be sorry either, Shy."
They were still confused. "...Why?"
He managed to whisper again. "Come here."
They trotted towards him. "What?"
"Closer."
They got closer. He then slowly and gently held Fluttershy's head.
"This is why."
He then placed his lips slowly on Fluttershy's lips. She smiled in the kiss and closed her eyes in romance.
Twilight, Who was watching them kiss, Was heartbroken. He had loved her again. She thought he had forgotten about her. But...She thought wrong.
"Hey, Twi..."
Twilight looked back at him. He gently held her head and placed his lips on Twilight's lips, As well. She was confused. Why did he kiss Fluttershy, And her?
He then slowly removed his lips from hers. "Wh-Why did you..."
He smiled at her. "Like I said at the cliff, I love you both."
Twilight then smiled at him. Fluttershy smiled as well.
He grinned at both of them. "Come here."
They both trotted towards him, And he hugged them tightly, With whatever strength he had in him.
Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie, Rarity, And Spike were looking through the window of the door. They all smiled at the three.
Thunder looked at the door. "You guys can come in now."
They all walked back in the room. Dash smiled. "It's good to see you and Thunder are friends again, Fluttershy."
Fluttershy smiled back at Dash.
Thunder then looked at the clock next to his bed. It was 3:35 p.m.
The doctor trotted in. "I'm sorry, Ladies, But You have to leave right now. Thunder needs his rest. You can come back later."
Thunder looked at the Doctor. "I am feeling a bit tired..." He looked back at the girls. "I'll see you guys later...Okay?"
Twilight smiled back at him. "Okay. Bye, Thunder."
She gave him a small kiss on the cheek. Fluttershy gave him another kiss on the other cheek. Thunder blushed again. All of the pain in the lower part of his body was completely gone.
The girls all trotted out of the room. They then left the Medical Center.
Twilight and Fluttershy were the most happiest...Because they could keep their relationship with Thunder. But...They had completely forgotten about what the doctor had said before. They would soon remember...
The time was now 7:35 p.m. Twilight was laying in her bed, Studying as usual. Then, She heard hoofsteps. A few seconds later, Fluttershy opened Twilight's door, With tears in her eyes.
"Fluttershy? What's wrong?"
Fluttershy struggled to get the words out of her mouth.
"Thunder...He's..."
Twilight knew what she was saying.
"No..."
About 10 minutes later, Twilight and Fluttershy reached the Medical Center. They opened the door to Thunder's medical room. The girls, Spike, And the Doctor were all in there, Including the lifeless body of Thunder.
Twilight felt tears coming down her face. "...Thunder?"
She trotted towards him. She saw his face. His eyes were closed, And there were no sounds of breathing.
The Doctor slowly looked at her. "I'm sorry...He's gone."
Twilight couldn't believe what she was seeing and hearing. Thunder was...Dead?
"No...It can't be..."
She continued to stare at Thunder's lifeless body. She started to smile. "M-Maybe his father...can bring him back. Maybe he can zap magic into him like he did before...He can bring him back. I know he will."
The doctor started at her. "I'm afraid not. Before he died, Thunder told me that he could hear his father saying that he could only do it once. There are no more chances. Thunder...Will never come back, Miss Twilight."
Tears started coming down Twilight's face. Fluttershy burst into tears once more.
Twilight began to cry. "He...He can't be...!"
She bolted to Thunder's side, And shook him, Trying to wake his lifeless body.
"THUNDER! THUNDER, PLEASE WAKE UP! PLEASE!"
Fluttershy managaged to speak through her crying voice. "Thunder...PLEASE...!"
Twilight continued to shake his body. "THUNDER! FLUTTERSHY NEEDS YOU!" She continued to cry as he shook him.
"I NEED YOU...!"
The doctor had managed to grab Twilight, And placed a needle into her arm. She started to feel woozy. "NO! NO...P-...Please..." She passed out before she hit the floor.
She woke up the next morning, In her bed. The time was 9:30 a.m. She knew the doctor gave her a sleeping sedative. She closed her eyes and hit the bed sheets with her hooves.
She then covered her face with her hooves and began crying again. "Thunder...Why...Why..."
She knew that Thunder was once again dead, But this time, He wasn't coming back. He was never coming back.
Well, That's a sad thing to happen. The chapter is kinda stupid because I'm that "Lose ideas, Gain ideas" kinda guy, So this chapter kinda is a little "Cheesy" I guess you could say. But, The epilogue might be better, So be prepared.
Epilogue Part 1 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It had been a whole 20 hours since Thunder had died. Things were quiet today in Ponyville. Very quiet.
Twilight was sitting in her room, Still crying over Thunder's death. "Why...Why did you leave us..." She couldn't help herself. The Colt she had loved since they met was gone forever. Fluttershy was the most emotional. She cried for hours. She didn't even sleep at all last night.
Rainbow Dash was gloomy. Applejack decided not to pick apples today. Rarity decided not to design anything. Spike was too tired. Pinkie Pie didn't want to make any treats at all.
Fluttershy did not want to do anything with the animals today now that Thunder was gone.
And for Twilight...She didn't study at all. She didn't care about studying. All she wanted back was Thunder. Fluttershy wanted him back the most. She didn't care if he had a peverted dream about her. She wanted him back.
Twilight was just sitting on her bed, Her hooves covering her face. Suddenly, She heard a voice. "Why are you so sad?" Twilight slowly removed her hooves from her face.
She looked up and saw a white Alicorn with a rainbow tail. Twilight sniffled in sadness as she spoke. "Princess Celestia?"
Celestia had arrived in Twilight's room to see how she was doing. Turns out, Not so well. "Why are you crying, My little student?"
Twilight was confused in her sadness. Had Princess Celestia never met Thunder yet? "Princess...Do you know...Thunder Ice?" Princess Celestia had seen him sometimes as he was trotting around Ponyville.
"Why, Yes I have. Did he get lost?" Twilight tried to explain as much as she could to Celestia. "No...He fell off a cliff Yesterday." Celestia was shocked. "Oh, No."
"We managed to bring him to the Hospital. We talked to him for a few minutes, Then we came back at about sundown. He was...Was..." Twilight couldn't finish the sentence. She broke into tears.
Celestia knew what she was talking about. "I'm sorry, My student." Twilight managed to speak again. "Fluttershy and I can't handle it...Without him..."
Celestia couldn't stand seeing her faithful student crying like this. "Where is he?"
Twilight kept sniffling. "At the Ponyville Morgue." After hearing that, Twilight was engulfed in a white flame, And they appeared from her home to the Ponyville Morgue. Actually, She managed to teleport the others, As well.
Pinkie was instantly confused. "Huh? Where are we? *Sniff* Eww. What's that...AAAH!" She could see Thunder's corpse sitting on a table next to her. She screamed. Applejack placed her hoof on Pinkie's mouth to quiet her down.
All of them had smelled the stench. It was coming from Thunder. It appeared that Flies had laid eggs on some parts of Thunder's body, And they were already making good food out of him. Some patches of hair were already gone, Some skin was eaten by Flies.
And, Flies were flying all around his lifeless corpse. Twilight was grossed out. She thought she was going to pass out any second from the smell. She looked back up at Princess Celestia.
"Princess...Why did you bring us here?"
Celestia pointed to Thunder's quickly rotting corpse. "You love him, Don't you?" Twilight nodded. She then looked at Fluttershy. "You love him, Too, Don't you?" Fluttershy also nodded.
She then looked at the lifeless body. "Step back." Twilight, Fluttershy, And the other girls stepped backward. They didn't know what Celestia was going to do.
They saw her horn start to glow, Then all of a sudden, A stream of magic was shooting into Thunder's body. What was she doing?
Then, The girls knew what she was doing, As they saw The lost patches of skin grow back, The hair grew back, And the eggs, Larvae, and flies around him all disappeared. His broken bones were mended back together.
About half a minute later, Celestia had stopped using her magic on Thunder's body. When she was finished, Thunder no longer looked like a rotting corpse. It really looked like he was sleeping.
And when Twilight trotted slowly towards Thunder, It was obvious that...He was. She could hear him breathing...Twilight couldn't believe it...Princess Celestia had brought back Thunder with her magic.
Fluttershy also trotted to him. She whispered to him.
"Thunder...?"
Thunder kept breathing, Then slowly opened his eyes. "F-F..Fluttershy?" He looked next to her to see Twilight.
"Twilight?"
He looked around him to see where he was. "Okay, I'm confused..."
Suddenly, He was cut off by a big hug from two mares. He looked to see that it was Fluttershy and Twilight.
He could then feel tears on his shoulders. He noticed that Twilight and Fluttershy were crying into his shoulders. He could now remember why he was in this place.
Fluttershy managed to speak through her tears.
"I missed you so much!"
Thunder smiled at her. "I missed you, Too."
He then hugged them both back. Smiling and also starting to cry as well. Although he could remember why he was there, He needed to know about what happened before he ended up here. He couldn't really remember much before he entered the Medical Center.
Later, After everyone hugged him and thanked Celestia that he was alive again, They all headed to Twilight's house, And had drinks of water. Thunder was told everything by the girls.
"So, Basically, I fell off the cliff, And pretty much broke much of my body...Right?" The girls all nodded.
"Huh...I couldn't really feel it..." He took a sip from his cup of water. He looked up at Celestia. "Thank you, Princess."
"You're quite welcome, Thunder." She smiled at him.
Twilight and Fluttershy were resting their heads on Thunder's shoulders. He didn't mind one bit. He smiled at them.
Then, Pinkie pie got up and started yelling a simple idea.
"Hey! You know what this calls for?" She shot a confetti cannon, and Confetti flew everywhere. She finished her sentence. "A PARTY!"
Twilight then spoke up. "Uhh...Actually, Guys, Thunder, Fluttershy, And I are gonna keep talking in private at Thunder's home. Just in case he can't remember anything else. You guys can stay here for a while if you want."
Dash replied, "Well, Okay. See you guys later, I guess." Thunder, Fluttershy, And Twilight got up and teleported them to Thunder's home.
When they arrived, Twilight smirked at Fluttershy. Thunder felt confusion for only a moment.
"So...Are there any other memories I should know about?" Fluttershy walked up to him. "What about..." She slowly grabbed his head. "...This one...?" She then started kissing Thunder. Thunder instantly blushed and Fluttershy moaned.
Half a minute later, Their lips parted. Twilight began speaking to him. "Please, Thunder...Sit in that seat."
He decided to sit down in the seat. He sat down, And asked them a question.
"Uhh...What are you girls doing?"
Fluttershy spoke calmly and sexily. "Shh...Just relax and let us do the work."
Twilight trotted up to him and kisses him. After the kiss, Thunder was still confused.
"Work? What are you girls talking about?"
Fluttershy trotted up to him slowly. She had a sexy smile on her face. "Just..."
She put her face up to his face and closed her eyes. "Relax..."
She placed her lips on Thunder's lips, Getting him ready for the Big Suprise.
Well, It was tough sort of doing this chapter, Because my Cat died a few hours before I posted this. She had a seizure. I thought she would've lived for another few years. To me, 9 years is way too young to die. Also, I have another cat. She has no idea what is going on. But...Enjoy, I guess.
After Fluttershy and Thunder broke their lips from each other, Fluttershy had slowly got on her hind legs. She was level with Thunder's 1 1/2 foot erection.
"My...It's so big..." She blushed at the sight.
Thunder chuckled at the comment.
"Haven't heard that in a while."
Twilight came over to Thunder again, And placed her lips on his to keep him quiet while they do their work on him.
Fluttershy placed her hoof on Thunder's erection, And began stroking it. Thunder moaned into Twilight's mouth.
Twilight began to pleasure herself by hoofing her femslit. She moaned into Thunder's mouth, Too.
Fluttershy stroked Thunder's length faster. Then, She slowly placed her mouth on his erection, And began teasing Thunder's length with her tongue.
She started to move her head up and down on Thunder's length, Sucking it dry. Fluttershy only received Grunts and moans from Thunder. The moans and grunts were partially blocked from Twilight kissing him.
Soon, After a few minutes of Fluttershy sucking him, Thunder was getting ready to give it his all.
"S-Shy...I'm...I'm gonna cum...!" He couldn't hold it anymore. He then released his sticky substance into Fluttershy's mouth. His warm cum flowed through her mouth. She moaned as a response.
After he came, She released her mouth from his length, And swallowed every drop of cum she could.
Soon after, Twilight orgasmed as she pleasured her clitoris. Her juices came out as squirts. Soon, Twilight felt tired. She fell to the floor and was instantly asleep.
Fluttershy looked at Thunder. "Now that she's asleep, Why don't you and me...Finish this up?" Thunder was suprised. But, He answered her.
"Alright." He grinned at her.
She then rubbed his length again, And was once again erect. She smiled at him. She then got up on her four hooves, Trotted to him, And stood on her back hooves, And got on top of him. Her femslit was right above his hardened member.
She took a breath. Then, Slowly, She slid his member into her. Then, Thunder placed a kiss on her lips, And kissed her deeply.
Thunder felt himself reach her hymen. He slowly and gently tore through it, Causing Fluttershy to wince in pain. Soon, Thunder was fully inside of her. He gave her some time to adjust to the new foreign object inside of her.
After a while, She managed to speak. "You...Can continue...Now..."
He smiled. "I'll go easy. I promise..."
She planted a kiss on his lips. "I trust you, Thunder." She had a blush on her face. It was pretty much because his entire length was in her.
He then slowly started to thrust into her. He started in a slow pace, As he went in and out of her. He got loud moans from her. "Thunder...Ooh...Thunder..."
His thrusts slowly got faster and harder. She moaned louder. "I...I love you...Oohhh..." Thunder wanted to give her the most pleasurable and incredible orgasm he could give her. And he knew what button to push.
He held her tightly, Then slowly moved his right hoof down to her clitoris. He smiled. He began to rub it gently. Fluttershy shrieked. "OOH!"
He received louder moans from her. Then, As he continued to thrust into her, He rubbed her clitoris faster and faster, Making her moan louder.
Soon, Thunder was starting to feel his orgasm coming. "S-Shy...I'm gonna..." Fluttershy couldn't control her breathing. The pleasure from Thunder touching her clit was bringing her to orgasm as well. "P-P-Plea-ea-ease! cu-u-um into Me-e-e-e!"
Thunder knew Fluttershy was enjoying every second of this. So, He rubbed her clit to a great speed. Fluttershy was now screaming in pleasure. Her walls tightened around Thunder, And then the two couldn't hold it back anymore.
"Sh-Sh-Shy...I'm cumming!"
"Th-Th-Thunder! I'm gonna...I'm gonna-"
Thunder then held Fluttershy tightly by her flanks, And placed one final thrust into her and released his warm cum into her Tight pussy.
She screamed at the top of her lungs as she reached orgasm by an unimaginable level of pleasure.
They both groaned and moaned as their love Juices mixed. They yelled each other's name in ecstasy. Fluttershy's eyes were wide open, Her mouth was agape, And she pressed her body up against Thunder, Gripping him tightly as he released his seed into her.
During their orgasm, Their Juices were starting to leak onto the chair that Thunder was sitting on. Thunder's eyes were closed, And he grunted as loud as he released his warm cum into her.
After the orgasm, The two panted heavily as they tried to regain their breath.
Soon, Fluttershy could speak up.
"I...I love you...Thunder..."
Thunder smiled back at her. "I love you, Too...Fluttershy."
Their lips once again connected in the passionate moment. Slowly, Fluttershy pulled Thunder out of her.
Thunder then carefully picked her up, And slowly brought her and him to an extra bed for guests.
He then gently placed Fluttershy on one side of the bed, And then he laid down on the other side. He looked at Fluttershy as she looked at him.
"Wh-Who do you love the most? M-Me...Or Twilight?" He smiled at her.
"I love both of you. You're both cute and pretty."
She smiled back.
"I love you, Thunder Ice."
"...And I love you, Too, Fluttershy."
Their lips once again connected, But this time, Longer. Then, Thunder suprisingly placed a hoof on her clitoris once again, under the bedsheet. She didn't mind at all. She continued to moan as he pleased her again.
Soon, She squealed into Thunder's mouth as she orgasmed under the bedsheet. A few seconds later, Fluttershy removed her lips, And fell asleep instantly.
Thunder smiled as he saw both Twilight and Fluttershy sleeping peacefully. He looked at both. "Goodnight, You two."
He looked back at Fluttershy.
"Goodnight...My sweet mare."
He planted another kiss on her lips, And then went off to sleep.
After what seemed like years, John Daniels found love in the small land of Equestria on a planet called Terra in 2011, In just 1 week. He went by the name of Thunder Ice, With a body of a Dark Blue Pegasus, With brown hair, Two cutie marks, And a way for words.
Life in Equestria was once again normal, Especially for Thunder Ice, Fluttershy, And Twilight Sparkle. Hate came and gone, Love blossomed, And two young mares shared their first love, With their first Stallion. The name that would always be remembered as Thunder Ice.
But, Also...Twilight and Fluttershy knew that Thunder would be known to them as...The Human of a Pony.
Well...? What did you think about this chapter? Ending is good? Ending is bad?
Meh.
Well, Hope you loved the story! It took some time to get this story done, Considering 1 of my 2 cats died today. You may have seen this in the beginning, As I said.
AN: 4/3/12: Well, Since I posted this on this site Now, In April, It's now been 3 months since my cat died. She died Jan.13, 2012. And it was a Friday. AND she was a black cat. Coincidence?!
Once again, Hope you loved the story, and This Clop Chapter! :3 Thunder Ice Out!
