Sees description...thinks this is interesting See sex and gore tags...oh god please don't let it be one of THOSE fics Sees thumbs up...im giving this the benefit of the doubt, will read later
Thanks for the benefit of the doubt. I just put everything to be safe. Yes. There will be gore. Probably some messed up kind of gore. Not cupcakes level, mind you, but at least torture level. And there will be sex.
Lets face it, a young, virile, fresh male in a town full of sexually repressed mares and dragonnesses? And one dealing with hormones? Psh, I couldn't help myself.
Indeed he probly would of; I am kinda supprised by his reaction to rarity though i mean hes been aiming for this for years (and so has she apparently) if this is to fast for him i hate to imagine what slow is. Although i suppose i can see his intrest in having a real date first as well but still i swear he was fantasizing about this earlier.
OMG When i checked for updates in school and saw this i gave of a little girl scream. IDK way but im a little happy that i did.
Anyways how big is Spike? Whenever i read a story it plays out like a movie in my head but i cant really make out Spikes hight. I mean for Rarity to be able to put her hooves behind on his neck she would have to stand that would make her like 5 feet and Spike was still taller then her Dudes growing fast.
Dude IDK what to say to Spike being all ninja like in the fight so just have this it explans better then words.
I could proofread. I'm currently free but I did work on the PonyFall fics, every... single... one of them
Anyway I am a decent proofreader/editor and I can see a few things that could be better grammatically in this fic of yours. I'd hate to see such a good idea muddied by a few grammatical errors.
“C’mon. You were talking all that good shit a second ago. Then I slammed you into the ground! What’s wrong? Get up! Call your boys on me. Hit me! Fight me!”
Sees description...thinks this is interesting
See sex and gore tags...oh god please don't let it be one of THOSE fics
Sees thumbs up...im giving this the benefit of the doubt, will read later
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Thanks for the benefit of the doubt. I just put everything to be safe. Yes. There will be gore. Probably some messed up kind of gore. Not cupcakes level, mind you, but at least torture level. And there will be sex.
Lets face it, a young, virile, fresh male in a town full of sexually repressed mares and dragonnesses? And one dealing with hormones? Psh, I couldn't help myself.
And in no way are the two going to intersect.
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Glad I gave it a chance it's pretty good.
Faved
And douche Dragon Garble is fucked
I see what ya did their making me think i still had a bit to wait
You did not dissapoint totaly worth the wait martial arts and sparity good god fuck 20% this a good 200% cooler and more awsome now
And that cliff hanger ugh knowing i have to wait again is gona kill me but getting it is gona be so fucking sweet
P.S. "even the young dragon knowing what fear felt like" should be knew its past tence
P.S.S I wonder what Spike would have said, had that not all happened, about Raritys little.... nuke of information their
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I aim to please! Hopefully, it will only take me a week or so this time instead of about a month.
P.S. Thanks for that. I could always use a proofreader since I pick weird times to write and they are usually error-filled.
P.P.S. Spike would have probably fainted from brain overload and blood loss.
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492505 That would be pretty awsome
Indeed he probly would of; I am kinda supprised by his reaction to rarity though i mean hes been aiming for this for years (and so has she apparently) if this is to fast for him i hate to imagine what slow is. Although i suppose i can see his intrest in having a real date first as well but still i swear he was fantasizing about this earlier.
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Hormones are a helluva thing. But, considering Spike was raised by someone who banked everything on logic, its not surprising.
492746 Twilight why you gotta ruin all the fun!
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That's kinda her thing.
That, and Spaz dancing.
And being Adorkable.
492772 and no one could fault your logic.
"I am not a party-pooper" lies
Tracking this to read later, seems like a good idea!
OMG When i checked for updates in school and saw this i gave of a little girl scream. IDK way but im a little happy that i did.
Anyways how big is Spike?
Whenever i read a story it plays out like a movie in my head but i cant really make out Spikes hight. I mean for Rarity to be able to put her hooves behind on his neck she would have to stand that would make her like 5 feet and Spike was still taller then her Dudes growing fast.
Dude IDK what to say to Spike being all ninja like in the fight so just have this it explans better then words.
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I could proofread. I'm currently free but I did work on the PonyFall fics, every... single... one of them
Anyway I am a decent proofreader/editor and I can see a few things that could be better grammatically in this fic of yours. I'd hate to see such a good idea muddied by a few grammatical errors.
PM me if you are interested in my help.
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Spike is about 7 ft high. I had him kneel down just for Rarity.
And then, shit's gonna go down. I'm jus' saiyan.
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Sorry i had too.
haha, dat boondocks reference
oh shit is going down
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Yup. Shit is gonna get real whenever I decide to get off my lazy ass and work on the chapter more.
All right people, don't panic. But I may or may not only be halfway done with the 4th Chapter. And it may or may not have gore in it
Chapter 4 My body is ready xD
The fic should be up tomorrow. For sure this time. Just gotta do some proof-reading.
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THINK YOU HAD ENOUGH POP CULTURE REFERECES IN THIS ONE LOL?
Evil spike yay now show them what a real dragon can do....shit this is mlp damn....
I know that line!
DON'T SAY THAT!