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Sounds like a good idea. In the middle of another fic right, so I will track for later. :twilightsmile:

It's great to see a story focusing on Spike. Tracking, well done! Keep 'em coming!

Well, you've got me interested. Definitely want to see what is going on here. Tracking.

Intriguing, very intriguing. TRACKING!

DUDE! Solid as hell i could invission it all as if it was happening in front of me the darkness, the shifts in reality, and the final outlit of rage in refusing to let it take everything from him. Just the fact that instead of doing what most writers do and just having him wake up or giving a fast and undetailed desciption; you show this amazing internal conflict and battle if the rest is anything like this it's gona fucking rock!

This is coming along nicely. :moustache:

So update inbound per chance cause my arms are getting tired from hanging from this cliff :twilightsheepish:

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Its coming. Soonish

490241 Fantastic i sha'll force myself to hold on :moustache:

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Use the steadfast will of 1000 Spikes chasing after 1000 wet-maned Rarities!

490276 Such untaped power of will it sha'll be done!

Sees description...thinks this is interesting
See sex and gore tags...oh god please don't let it be one of THOSE fics
Sees thumbs up...im giving this the benefit of the doubt, will read later

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Thanks for the benefit of the doubt. I just put everything to be safe. Yes. There will be gore. Probably some messed up kind of gore. Not cupcakes level, mind you, but at least torture level. And there will be sex.

Lets face it, a young, virile, fresh male in a town full of sexually repressed mares and dragonnesses? And one dealing with hormones? Psh, I couldn't help myself.

And in no way are the two going to intersect.

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Glad I gave it a chance it's pretty good.
Faved

And douche Dragon Garble is fucked

I see what ya did their making me think i still had a bit to wait :raritywink:

You did not dissapoint totaly worth the wait martial arts and sparity good god fuck 20% this a good 200% cooler and more awsome now :rainbowkiss:

And that cliff hanger ugh knowing i have to wait again is gona kill me but getting it is gona be so fucking sweet

P.S. "even the young dragon knowing what fear felt like" should be knew its past tence

P.S.S I wonder what Spike would have said, had that not all happened, about Raritys little.... nuke of information their

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I aim to please! Hopefully, it will only take me a week or so this time instead of about a month.

P.S. Thanks for that. I could always use a proofreader since I pick weird times to write and they are usually error-filled.

P.P.S. Spike would have probably fainted from brain overload and blood loss.

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492505 That would be pretty awsome

Indeed he probly would of; I am kinda supprised by his reaction to rarity though i mean hes been aiming for this for years (and so has she apparently) if this is to fast for him i hate to imagine what slow is. Although i suppose i can see his intrest in having a real date first as well but still i swear he was fantasizing about this earlier.

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Hormones are a helluva thing. But, considering Spike was raised by someone who banked everything on logic, its not surprising.

492746 Twilight why you gotta ruin all the fun!

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That's kinda her thing.

That, and Spaz dancing.

And being Adorkable.

492772 and no one could fault your logic.

"I am not a party-pooper" lies

Tracking this to read later, seems like a good idea! :duck:

OMG When i checked for updates in school and saw this i gave of a little girl scream. IDK way but im a little happy that i did.

Anyways how big is Spike?
Whenever i read a story it plays out like a movie in my head but i cant really make out Spikes hight. I mean for Rarity to be able to put her hooves behind on his neck she would have to stand that would make her like 5 feet and Spike was still taller then her Dudes growing fast.

Dude IDK what to say to Spike being all ninja like in the fight so just have this it explans better then words.

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I could proofread. I'm currently free but I did work on the PonyFall fics, every... single... one of them :pinkiecrazy:

Anyway I am a decent proofreader/editor and I can see a few things that could be better grammatically in this fic of yours. I'd hate to see such a good idea muddied by a few grammatical errors.

PM me if you are interested in my help.

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Spike is about 7 ft high. I had him kneel down just for Rarity.

And then, shit's gonna go down. I'm jus' saiyan.

haha, dat boondocks reference :eeyup:

Thank you Pinkie Pie!

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Yup. Shit is gonna get real whenever I decide to get off my lazy ass and work on the chapter more.

All right people, don't panic. But I may or may not only be halfway done with the 4th Chapter. And it may or may not have gore in it

Chapter 4 :moustache: My body is ready xD

The fic should be up tomorrow. For sure this time. Just gotta do some proof-reading.

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i know its childish, but i just coulden let up the chance:pinkiehappy:
happy to se it updated:scootangel:

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(by the way when that dragoness lifted garble in her arm i was thinking of this guy over there
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Holy shit Spike round two. Dont worry you keep f**king Rarity and then you can come join me in kicking some dragon ass.

We go super saiyan and we will kill, expect yours is evil but same thing.

should not have listened to that. You need a He here mate.

He felt the magic bonds loosen and the dragons holding him down retreat, both of them having a blush on his face. This sounds awkward at the end. I believe you were going for both of them having a blush on their faces.

this was the first time he had EVER since Princess Celestia. Should be seen not since.

Great fighting and medical scenes, accurate to. Lots of fantastic violence, and strong emotions. Diffidently worth the wait. Now what we need to see is a harem with Rarity and the dragonesses and everything can be perfect, until it's not.

Side Note to Self: Rarity in clothes as a pony for sex scene, my feeling that I need to do this in one of my stories has been strengthened!

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I apologize for all these errors. It's not wise to do most of my writing at 2-6 am in the morning, even if that's when i'm the most productive. And thanks ^^ Hopefully the next chapter won't take too long.

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I honestly got his 'rage mode' from a mixture of Dragon ball Z, Sonic X, and Tenjho Tenge. And I am happy to announce that the next chapter will have sex. Maybe even two scenes.

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Don't make me go Lolligator in here >.>

779743 Oh, I assure ya, I'm just as bad. Worse probably.

Sex yay!

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TO THINK A LOWLY HUMAN/BRONY WOULD BE ABLE TO SCARE ME, HA YOU AMUSE SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE UPDATES:pinkiecrazy:

kids that is why you do not fuck with spike

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Within the next 7 days, you'll expect the fic. Hopefully

Yup :<
Family stuff and comp problems.
And also me being sick. Multiple times.

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Display Driver keeps messing up.

Let the darkness win!!!!

"He just shrugged a bit, repeating his mantra of ‘crazy females’"

Spike is finally wise!!!!


Soooo... I am trying to word this correctly...Why did you create a separation between dragons that seem pretty big? I'm taking it that Wyrmhaven is small kingdom of dragons compared to the dragon race as a whole. That's what it sounds like based on the explanation given to spike, hell doesn't even seem like they know Wyrmhaven existed.

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THINK YOU HAD ENOUGH POP CULTURE REFERECES IN THIS ONE LOL?

Evil spike yay now show them what a real dragon can do....shit this is mlp damn....

have your fun with rarity, that all that matters!!!!

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