Waking up
Did you like the ending of the last one, my little human? No, I didn't die, I wouldn't be here to tell you this story if I had, right? Anyway.
I opened my eyes and blinked, seeing yellow. I blinked again and sat up slowly, wincing as a sharp pain shit up my side and back. I whimpered and pushed myself up. Where was I? I heard a small 'err' and looked over to see Buster staring at me. I smiled and gave him a small pat, wincing yet again. I bit my lip and slowly moved to the side, looking down at my cutie mark. There was a bandage over the wound, but as far as I could tell, my cutie mark was okay. I sighed in relief before remembering my wing. I blinked and looked behind me quickly, nearly snapping my neck as I did. My wing was bandaged up. I frowned and looked around. Was I in a room? I looked down. I was in a bed. In a house. Bandaged up. I tilted my head and slowly slipped off the bed, falling down when my hooves touched the ground. I groaned and pushed my self up, my legs wobbling. Buster whined and leaned against me, like he was trying to help keep me up. I giggled and took a step, catching myself as I fell. "It's okay..." I whispered, "We can do this." I took another step, making my way towards the door, slowly. I finally made it and opened the door, seeing a little white bunny waiting. His arms were crossed and he was tapping his foot. I blinked and took a step back. The bunny huffed and grabbed my mane, tugging me along. "Ow! Hey!" I huffed and pulled my mane back. The bunny tried to grab it again, but Buster snarled and chased him off. I smirked and looked around, realizing where I was. "No..." I muttered, "She couldn't have..." I tilted my head and started to walk around Fluttershys' cottage. Did she really bring me here? I finally stopped and sat down. Why? I kill two of her friends, try to kill her, and she brings my to her house and patches me up? I shook my head. Where was she then? I frowned and got up again. I hadn't seen her when I walked around, maybe she went back to the hospital? I shrugged and started looking around, maybe she left a note?
After a little while of searching, I finally managed to find I note.
I'm sorry for leaving to here, but I didn't want you to get hurt. You're not a monster, Doodle Bug, you just need help...And yes, I do have reasons to hate you, but I try my hardest not to, you're just broken, that's all. You're like Pinkie
The note cut off for a few lines, all of which had tears on them
you just need help, just a little help.
-Fluttershy
I frowned and grabbed a pen, flipping the paper over. My handwriting was a bit shaky, but I wrote as still as I could.
I'm so sorry, Fluttershy. Forgive me.
I dropped the pen and grabbed Buster, walking out slowly. I would need a little while...I was too badly injured to do what I needed to. I limped off to my little cave. Hopefully, Fluttershy would forgive me.
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Grey Steam blinked and looked at the door. Somepony else was coming in. Probably to ask him questions. He glared at the pony as they came in, turning over so he wouldn't have to look at them. "Look, I know you've answered a lot of questions, but-"
"Go away." Grey snorted
"Come on, just a few, then I'll leave you alone!"
"Go away."
"Please?"
"...You'll go away?"
"Yes sir..." Grey huffed and turned around again. "Fine."
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It had been about a week. I had gone to Zecoras' hut, and finally found a potion that would help. My injures were already healed. I got up, "Buster, where's my list?" I looked down at the dragon, and he ran off quickly and came back with my saddle bags. I hummed and dug through them, pulling out my list. I crossed Fluttershy off, there was no way I would kill her. I blinked. Wait, why wouldn't I kill her? I shook my head, no time to think about it now. I looked down the list, searching for one of the elements that would be easy to kill. I smirked as my eyes rested upon a certain name. "Ooo...Busterrr!" I cackled, "Get my knife."
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.............. this story is stupid by sheer factor of your oc being glorified over the actual chracters..............
twilight has foguht fallen gods and chaos demons and survived an army of bug fiends. what chance dose a stupid insane pohny have?
not to mention pinkie pie would sense her coming..........................
this story is stupid. it neeeds to make character who found changelings and dirscord incompetent to function.
Are you really referencing cupcakes and i think rarity's next
3872125 go read something else and get a life while your at it dont you have something better to do than post hate comments on a well written story
3872182 its not a well written story. events go too fast to begin with. not to mention this character is somehow murdering beings that battled supernatural monsters and beat them.
in other words it supposes that this oc is better than the likes of discord and chrysalis.
Rarity
3872125 Yea, I knew some negative comments were bound to happen, anywhom, I respect your opinion and will try to improve my writing skills, this is the first dark story I've ever written ^.^
3872164 Yea, I'm referencing Cupcakes
3872653 a dark story does not need characters to die believe it not. especially not the mane six; especially miss manhandle a fucking elephant sied bear for fun.
it is the threat and tone that creates a dark story, not peple dying.
3844274 man we like the same type of fanfics dont we and im serious i didnt delete your comment and if i did it was an accident
3872655 how mane stream can ya get
3872734 Very
3872705 Okay, like I said, first attempt at a dark story, calm down.
3872230 Discord would absolutely DESTROY Doodle Bug, you can't beat the god of Chaos. You just can't.
3873632 well she killed two of the beings who defeated him, so she must be.
see the problem. one could argue they are taken off guard and such. but pinkie pie can't be taken off guard, and tiwlight is so powerful that she could probably wrench a knife out of anyome's hoof with a thought.
3873779 Pinkie Pie had just watched the Cakes be murdered, I think she was a little busy trying to not, ya know, have a mental breakdown, but I get where you're coming from, and I'm sorry my story didn't meet your standards, but I'm proud of it, and I respect your opinions on it. I will try to do better next time.
I personally love this story still. After all it's way better then the Cupcakes story. Anyone has a problem with me saying that that's your problem.....oh who am I kidding acting like I wouldn't fight any hater I see. I'd kill the haters. Luckily I can tell the difference from hate and appropriate info. Saying this story is stupid....
I'll turn you into pastries for such hateful comments that don't help approve things. Seriously. My story needed more info so my next story will have alot of info and detail. This story gets called stupid....that does not help the writer approve at all! 
3874104 I seriously had to sit there for a second when I got the negative comment and just go, 'I should totally end this right here with an epic burn.' But then I got thinking and just went, 'No, I should be mature about this. Kill 'em with kindness!' And then I started thinking about all the epic burns I could have used .-.
3874155 Yeah well I kinda get violent when I see haters. I used to try to ignore them or hope being nice is enough but now....I figure if you actually scare the person....well it works like when Arnold acted crazy right in front of the bully in "Hey Arnold!". They can wind up too afraid to attack again if they think you're crazy. It helps that I actually am crazy though.
No wonder Pinkies my 2nd favorite pony. I can understand her. 
3874203 Pinkie is my 2nd favorite 2 x3 Luna, Derpy, and Rainbow tie for first .-.
3874212 For me Fluttershy is first Pinkie 2nd Twi 3rd Dashie 4th Derpy 5th Luna 6th. With how many ponies there are Luna has a good ranking. The only ponies I hate are Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Rarity
There are so many stories that need proofreaders, but this is just too good to get rid of!