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He sucked hi lips in
requested that I return at least on of his weapons
Spell check, time! These were the ones I caught.
D'aww... Mr Steiner has a fan! Love the sock detail by the way.
Good job yo
Might wanna carefully read over this for spelling errors. I noticed that in several places you forgot one or two letters in a word.
"The princess ordered us to return at least on of his weapons to him" for example.
Overall, though, this is pretty good, and the spelling complaints are minor and easily fixable.
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Thanks! Y'all rock! Those are the hardest errors to pick up for me. I miss a few even after all the proofreads I give it before I publish it! Y'all are massive help
And thanks for reading!
No she does not want you to study him Twi. Lose that train of thought before you become a nuisance.
Yeah I have a few problems with Twilights thought process and state of mind at times. Mostly stemming from the Lesson Zero incident.
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