Size Really DOES Matter
written by Pizzema Forte
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honstly the dew thing had a oppiset affect next time go for venturing victor
Paragraphs need spacing.
That aside I'm liking this.
hmmm...
You might want to add Elusive's name when he enters (it is a little confusing right now) and near the end of the chapter Elusive suddenly refers to Celestia instead of Solaris.
Um... It's Solaris, not Saloris...
Should have made him Daring Dude. Also, you wrote "you around her" instead of "here"
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Oooh, I like that one.
And yes, Solaris, not Saloris. ^^()