A man attempts to kill himself, but ends up in Equestria instead. Can he find a way to put his past behind him?
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A few chapters in, and I'm rather conflicted. On the one hand, you've got a terrible case of telling, not showing, when it comes to the introductory scenes. A lot has been vaguely glazed over for the sake of expedience, which I'll assume is a conscious decision of yours. On the other, it's a welcome change, since I'm sure we've all read the "human is introduced to ponies" scenario more than a dozen times. I'll just hope that this is remedied in later chapters, once we get to the meat of the story.
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A divide with a warning would've been nice since I could've just skipped to the end of it since I don't like clop
Awesome liked a faved, even read all 16 chapters in one night.
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I really like the Chapter, maybe you should really name it if there is some clop, like some people would like it better.
I am normally one of the people who does not like it very much, i mean clop fic, well it dependence of the one who is writing it and you make it ok for me.
I hope you write more of this, maybe in an alternative sequel or something like that you could let them adopted a child. I donĀ“t know if they would be able to get a filly in your fanfic, but i would like them to get a filly wich can be a Cutiemark Crussaider
In the last time i like adopted storys or kind of this really much, maybe it could be even an somehow disabled filly, blind or something like it.
they have only been together for such a short time. . . this would be fine if they waited more, but hey, in this fanfic, relationships probably move much faster for them.
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