A man attempts to kill himself, but ends up in Equestria instead. Can he find a way to put his past behind him?
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God damn it bulging biceps!!!! I need moar!!!
Yeah, a punctured lung tends to ruin a typical date. I gather this stallion was Roid Rage-- which explains the violent beating. I wonder how many other ponies have xenophobia over the human? Well, assuming he hasn't drowned in his own blood, a clot formed in the blood vessels of a lung (which is fatal in a few minutes), or he proves resistant to healing magic, Fluttershy and Twilight can easily find him in the hospital for the next month or two while he recovers.
The only thing I found a bit awkward however was his special time described in detail in the shower. Eh, could have glossed over that part really and not missed it. I'm also finding it a little weird how quickly Fluttershy's attracted to him. Still, she is a bit of a shut-in, of her own violation, so perhaps when an agreeable romantic interest shows up in her life, she pretty much pounces on it... or him, as demonstrated.
Looking on the bright side; Fluttershy can play nurse with him (wink wink) once he's out of ICU and assigned a normal room.
4054125 For one thing, Fluttershy has had a thing for him since "Inner Demons and Outer Angels", she just had no way of expressing it properly until now.
Yeah, you're probably right about the masturbation scene. But I wanted the mutual sexual attraction to be blatantly obvious before the date.
It seems SOMEPONY is jelly
Come to think of it, bulging biceps probably couldn't get a date anyways!
4057208 Normally i would agree, but this time i think it was totally o kwith the masturbation scene. I think i understand what you did there and well he doesn´t get any thing of that since he got there i believe and probably not befor either.
Well it was ok and i don´t mind more or even a little scene with Fluttershy if it don´t happen to often.
If every Chapter is that good i would start to ask for a sequel.