Interesting idea, though I've got to agree with Chmilewsky, an editor would do you a world of good given the amount of misspelt words, missing spaces and such. I'll keep an eye on this for now.
Really? I would have simply drawn my side arm and blown her brains out.
I will not let their propaganda poison your mind, you must see them for the genocidal monsters they really are.
Oh, I cannot wait for the bugs to show you just why the Federation purges them. Self-righteous bitch doesn't know anything. She is simply taking the losing side because she assumes the loser must be the victim. By that logic we could butcher all the ponies and say "but the changelings lost to you, so you must be evil, genocidal (xenocidal) monsters!"
her calm demeanor gone and replaced with panic as she desperately tried the reach Twilight.
Celestia will, of course, assume SICON has kidnapped Twilight, completely ignoring the fact she was A) behind her so-called captor and B) was moving under her own power. Celestia in the TV show has shown a very strong pattern of seeing only what she wants to or expects to in contradiction to all evidence provided to her.
Screaming in frustration I released my grasp and collapsed on the very small coach behind me feeling a trickle of blood going down my noise and a killer headache coming on which were both symptoms of me using my gift. They were also reasons why I tried my best not to use them often.
Isn't it nose?
Odd Twilight chose a former enemy over her beloved mentor.
I'm too tired right now to give this a read but once I do I'll see if I know anyone who'd be a good editor for you and not busy with other projects.
OK... That was an excellent story... I will be keeping a long tab on this... You have my undivided attention, for now! :D
Interesting idea, though I've got to agree with Chmilewsky, an editor would do you a world of good given the amount of misspelt words, missing spaces and such. I'll keep an eye on this for now.
3751346 I may do some editing for you in a bit. I'll send you a PM later on.
And so they escaped. Honestly man, can you add anything? Nope, BECAUSE THIS IS SO AWSOME!
Really? I would have simply drawn my side arm and blown her brains out.
Oh, I cannot wait for the bugs to show you just why the Federation purges them. Self-righteous bitch doesn't know anything. She is simply taking the losing side because she assumes the loser must be the victim. By that logic we could butcher all the ponies and say "but the changelings lost to you, so you must be evil, genocidal (xenocidal) monsters!"
Celestia will, of course, assume SICON has kidnapped Twilight, completely ignoring the fact she was A) behind her so-called captor and B) was moving under her own power. Celestia in the TV show has shown a very strong pattern of seeing only what she wants to or expects to in contradiction to all evidence provided to her.
Isn't it nose?
Odd Twilight chose a former enemy over her beloved mentor.