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You definitely need an editor, but I give you props (and an upvote) for actually making a Roughnecks crossover.

3751087 thanks, I intend this to be a non-official continuation of the roughnecks set after the three episodes that were meant to end the series and I may include the roughnecks themselves in later chapters. Also if you know anyone who might be interested in editing this I would be most grateful.

I'm too tired right now to give this a read but once I do I'll see if I know anyone who'd be a good editor for you and not busy with other projects.

OK... That was an excellent story... I will be keeping a long tab on this... You have my undivided attention, for now! :D

Interesting idea, though I've got to agree with Chmilewsky, an editor would do you a world of good given the amount of misspelt words, missing spaces and such. I'll keep an eye on this for now.

3751346 I may do some editing for you in a bit. I'll send you a PM later on.

Hm, thought almost no one heard of Starship Troopers: The Roughneck Chronicles. Glad to see someone with some class.

I loved the chapter man! I have been a fan of this series for years and years, and I would say you've done a fairly good job of moving it over to mlp! Please continue this story, I just can't wit for the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

I think this is the only Roughnecks/ Starship troopers crossover in all of FIMfic.
And as a bonus its rather good.

Congratulations sir, you are a trailblazer.

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Comment posted by Sneaky Breeze deleted Feb 26th, 2014

*Cocks Halo AR* Is it just me or are we going to be fighting for Equestria, and facing the devil?

No thanks necessary citizen. Im doing my part. :coolphoto:

What about you other fans? Are you?

Great! Dude, this is so EXCITING! OVER 9,000!!!!!/10!

And so they escaped. Honestly man, can you add anything? Nope, BECAUSE THIS IS SO AWSOME!

oh SHIT! ZERG RUSH PEOPLE! DUCK AND COVER AND BLOW THEM TO BITS! It's almost over, right? Also, if Sunset Shimmer dies I'll rape you.

Welp, Lt's dead. :applecry: Shimmer's alive, and Celestia is here. Great so far, also, considering the General is probly here, as a Bug commander. *off in the distance* FUCK YOU, SHAME ON YOU AS WELL GENERAL! *Normal* Allow my OC to be a captain in there and have him strangle the general and Sunset kill the general in the end.

why didnt twilight just shield or telepot instead of brain melting the bugs

3969344 Well it takes a few seconds to charge a spell like that, that and I needed some way for Celestia to find out Twilight was a Psychic other then "I can read your mind"

3969366 HONEYDEW!! YOU BEAUTIFUL MAN! IF YOU KILL HONEYDEW, YOU WILL GET KILLED!! I just really like honeydew! Especially if he has the power suit mod on. Then you know what true fear is. Especially with explosives. :pinkiecrazy:

Others of the stranded troopers were cleaning their gear or talking about something or other, but despite whatever they were doing they all turned to face us as we boarded the ship. I could see a large hole in the floor as I walked through the ship with Celestia, to which I guessed was Honeydews doing.

Rule No.1 of Zebra Squad: Never trust the dwarf of a man with explosives of any kind. He had found a love of explosions at a young age and that had only increased as he joined the Mobile Infantry and got to blow up bugs on a daily basis. Although his love of explosives could be sometimes worrying, his little digging song was nice though. ‘I am a Dwarf and I'm digging a hole, Diggy Diggy hole I'm diggin a hole!’

You referenced Simmon from Yogcast. :rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

While Celestia said this, Bernstein attached the bars to my arm, each one shining in the bright li- hey wait! Bright light? I turned to see the light was so bright in my eyes and I realized it wasn’t the sunlight.

Ooohhhhh Shit.

“Take, cover!” Bernstein yelled as he grabbed both celestia and I. He threw us to the ground and then himself on top of us, trying to shield us with his body right before the cockpit shook with an explosion and I felt my eardrums cry out in pain from the blastwave.

FUCKING SHIT!

*cocks shotgun and prepares to kick bug ass*

*flips down visor on MI helmet*

Comment posted by Sneaky Breeze deleted Jun 1st, 2014

my god...

well this is interesting...

why does the princess hold so much hate for humanity?

Because she's jealous. A thousand years of the same tech level (approximately Industrial Revolution, if we ignore Pinkie's sporadic acquiring of advanced technology, because Pinkie) and still they have not advanced in the slightest. So, she's jealous and spiteful at how superior humans are to ponies. Didn't you read your Uplifting Primer? ....*BLAM!*

perhaps a simple warning was not enough for these barbarians.

You're the barbarians and we could wipe the floor with you. Got magic powers that can vaporize armies? Scatter the army and simply sneak a scorpion (small ancient Roman support weapon) near your location while you rest and *zip, thunk, schlerk!*, problem solved! Luna takes exception to it? Too bad, we can shelter where she cant see us and simply fill her with arrows from longbows when she is forced to get close for her attack (otherwise she would have no effect, judging by spell distances in the show when fighting Celestia pre-banishment).

which I sadly had no other choice but to do.

Really? I would have simply drawn my side arm and blown her brains out.

I will not let their propaganda poison your mind, you must see them for the genocidal monsters they really are.

Oh, I cannot wait for the bugs to show you just why the Federation purges them. Self-righteous bitch doesn't know anything. She is simply taking the losing side because she assumes the loser must be the victim. By that logic we could butcher all the ponies and say "but the changelings lost to you, so you must be evil, genocidal (xenocidal) monsters!"

her calm demeanor gone and replaced with panic as she desperately tried the reach Twilight.

Celestia will, of course, assume SICON has kidnapped Twilight, completely ignoring the fact she was A) behind her so-called captor and B) was moving under her own power. Celestia in the TV show has shown a very strong pattern of seeing only what she wants to or expects to in contradiction to all evidence provided to her.

So the Humans can try to kill me like they kill everything else?

Try? What do you mean try? If we want you dead, you wouldn't know what hit you. You'd just fall over and die with foam coming out of your mouth or a golf ball sized hole through your heart.

I will not be a merciful.

It's so funny that it goes all the away full circle from full-blown laugh to a shake of my head with a smile at how tiny her power truly is. She has no idea how fucked she would be if the Federation decided to come. She wouldn't be able to scratch a single trooper. Hell, the Federation wouldn't even bother risking anyone. They'd just nuke the hell out of Equestria and then ignore it in favor of the the rest of the world.

Didn't know there'd even been any Starship Troopers stuff other then the original book (which I actually just finished rereading yesterday).

Well, and the movies. But the less said about those the better!

4945650 Yes, the Roughneck chronicles went on for a few a while but was cancelled near the last fee episodes, there are also the comics that are a fusion of both Roughnecks and the movies.

WHAT WAS DONE TO HER!?

5256248 Ahhh, All will become clear in chapter 15, but I will say this.... it's a doozy.

is this story just oc's and shimmer or are there gonna be characters from the mlp show?

5317683 Yes,Twilight and the Princesses are to play a big role in what is to come along with a certain Pontville resident, as for who well... That'd be telling.

5318275 you cheeky bastard :P

... wow... starship troopers fic crossed with ponies... as some one who wrights SST fics over on space battle and fan fiction i commend you for a nice first chapter.


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there a 4th movie now but it not in the same continuity with the rest of the films, it has power armor though so that a plus. there was also a mini game like warhammer 40k, a comic books series and a RPG book by mongooses publishing that combined the movies the CGI series and the book. what was the result. lots of bugs, a flushing out of the skinnies , and light infantry. power suits. exo suits , (the books armor) a few new variants on Marauder (by the way nice variant ShadowLeomus) and neo dog troopers (mobile infantry recon teams) and pathfinders (special ops). there was also two new spices in the woks before it died 60s sci fi chicks with mental powers and Roswell grays with snakes tails for legs and a fetish for warmechs.


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you have no idea 0_0

hoping to find something else to convince the Queen of his continued value and that of all Humans.

They're not tool-users, so I doubt they care.

If I didn't need you I would slay you where you lay

Awwww, she thinks she's dangerous. How ~cuuute.

Is this story dead?

6368587 No, I've just not had time to work on it.

6369154 Awesome this story is great so far.

Here comes the confusion:ajbemused:

I'm sure I can keep her in line.

Oh, little pony, you know not of what you speak. It would be adorable if it didn't make me want to strangle you.

for a demi-goddess

Why do writers keeping calling them goddesses or demi-goddesses? They're just powerful mages.

once the M.I troopers had allowed the Ponies to study their gear and data on the ships, they were able to replicate them on a massive scale

Despite an early chapter stating that pony weapons technology were spears, swords, and crossbows. Pretty dang sure they couldn't simply skip the industrial revolution.

i knew that it would be worth the wait

Didn't this story used to be longer? Also, I wasn't aware that Starship Troopers was more than just one movie.

7230487 Well wait no longer, as of next chapter, stuff really starts hitting the fan

7230520 I don't believe it was longer, I mean the latest chapter was shorter then earlier ones by half... I have to take another look later.
And yea, it had an animated series when I was younger, not to mention the comics, miniatures game and video games, and all were adaptations of the book starship troopers by robert a heinlein.

Honeydew, Xephos

Yogscast? Nice.

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