it looks good so far as long as I consider it to be pure comedy

Ding dong Molly's dead!

awesome

another very good story i see. i can't wait to read more of it.

I just came here for dat ass. But it looks good.

I wonder if the human who was Luna found a similar temple?

funny as hell

I find this story very well written. I hope you will continue writing this story, it has a lot of potential.

There is something wrong here, and I don't know what...

more

This story is crazy funny

I kinda wanna hear the Jackel story...

Okay I'm unsure what to take in from when he talks, he seems to be both fully aware and fully oblivious of MLP, he has had a previous experience with magic, but remains fully convinced his previous magical transformation was both magical and totally happened but without magic existing. He also is apparently the wealthiest most influential man on earth but with nothing but free time to chase mad fairy tales and takes a few grand to be a big deal. I think this is the story of a mentally unbalanced middle class man who caught a terrible fever in the jungle and the ate all the berries he saw.

Oh Luna, that banana joke...

"So... Tell me Molly. Do you like. ...Mmmmmmmmmmmmm Bananas?"

This moment is brought to in part by
*poof*
Another Blonde moment

God Damn it!

Can you imagine Twilight meeting this version of Celestia? She have a complete mental break down

Hmm... this story has an interesting basis so far, but the writing of it, with a lot of small mistakes such as missing commas and typos, make it difficult for me to truly get in to it.

And I personally think it is trying a little too hard to be funny in a sexual way, to a point where I'm wondering what the fuck I'm reading. With a little bit of cleaning up, this'd be a great story, in my opinion.

'Murica!'

FUCK YEAH!

"Alright times up lets do this..."

LEEEEEEEEEROOOYY! JJEEEENKINS!

I really want to know of this story is crazy.

It is....

...and I love it!

Molly...... You know what you did.

To pay our respect to my now dead wife I screwed the tranny over her corpse. We fucked and sucked for six hours straight, my dead wife was drenched in cum of mine and the tranny we brought home when it all ended.

And a human fucking an alicorn is what freaked you out?