I really loved the chapter, but I thought I would nitpick a little just to be a tease. Anywho, whenever Rainbow was saying, "Who's the queen?" Technically that is a negative term in Equestria. There is a reason that Celestia and Luna are Princesses and not Queens. Lauran Faust originally wanted them to be queens, but thanks to Disney, kids nowadays think that queens are evil, and Princesses are good. For example, Queen Chrysilis, King Sombra, etc etc... while the good ponies are Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, etc etc... Hence is why queen is a negative term, unless Dash meant that she was a 'bad ass' and being Queen would mean she's bad.
Anywho, like I said, I really love this story, and I can't wait for more!
What can I say. Your story was very good and I can see you have improved your dialog. Growing by leaps and bounds. At one point I thought your story was going to have a gender changing spell, glad you didn't. Now I have to wait for Chapter 4. Well I hoping for nothing... so surprise me.
3827765 Hmm, good point. Although I think for a slim majority of the (first) movie, Scar was king. Further thinking on it, Sarabi and Nala were not evil queens, although I'm not sure if they were ever explicitly stated to be queens or if it was just implied.
3827774 yeah, but I think Disney has confused a lot of people, or so says the hub network. For one, I wasn't ever confused about it, I knew king and queens were just the leaders and their children was princesses and princes until crowned. So I was just like wtf when they said that.
3827778 Knowledge is different from word association. The association is there, at least for many people, even though they know after thinking for even half a second that being a queen is far from the same as being evil. It is a learned bias, and is similar to some of the reasons why racism and sexism are so hard to get rid of, even in people who know better.
AH! Jesus, what the hell?! That was NOT the end of the chapter! I had the entire rest of the damn thing typed and saved before I published it, but now it's gone?! WHAT IS THAT?
i love it and i hope Rainbow and Applejack truly have a baby of both of theirs because that would be totally cute if they did
Anywho, like I said, I really love this story, and I can't wait for more!
What can I say. Your story was very good and I can see you have improved your dialog. Growing by leaps and bounds. At one point I thought your story was going to have a gender changing spell, glad you didn't.
Now I have to wait for Chapter 4.
Well I hoping for nothing... so surprise me.![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
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Queens are generally evil, but kings aren't. First example in Disney I can think of: King Triton. He is a stern father figure, but not evil.
3817003 or simba and mufasa XD
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Hmm, good point. Although I think for a slim majority of the (first) movie, Scar was king.
Further thinking on it, Sarabi and Nala were not evil queens, although I'm not sure if they were ever explicitly stated to be queens or if it was just implied.
3827774 yeah, but I think Disney has confused a lot of people, or so says the hub network. For one, I wasn't ever confused about it, I knew king and queens were just the leaders and their children was princesses and princes until crowned. So I was just like wtf when they said that.
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Knowledge is different from word association. The association is there, at least for many people, even though they know after thinking for even half a second that being a queen is far from the same as being evil.
It is a learned bias, and is similar to some of the reasons why racism and sexism are so hard to get rid of, even in people who know better.
3827798 good point![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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Oooh, dark child-making magic and a romance scene? One of the best chapters I've read yet! Can't wait to read more!
"Just sayin' Dash, you're talkin' about the captain of the thunderbolts."
I was 2 seconds from making a comment about this line. Then I read the next sentence. XD very funny!