Funny thing about chaos, it's unrefined but found everywhere. You can't tie down chaos, it's impossible. Discord is not pure chaos, he wouldn't have a physical form if he was. To obtain what he achieved, he would need a little bit of order to hold him together. Get rid of that order, and you get rid of Discord. Or kill him too, if you can get past his magic since he is now flesh and blood. Getting infected by the Ravage proves that
seriously, this had me close to tears and I was shivering from...I'm not sure, but It made me feel vulnerable, I found myself reaching subconsciously for the combat knife by my bed. Your an incredible writer, especially if you can do that to me. And the story is impeccable. Keep it up
This story... Just make sure that this story doesn't die. Some thing this great is not allowed to vanish
I'm sure there'll be enough people telling you how awesome you are, so I decided to tell you something that I didn't like about the story Luckily there isn't much of that. To be honest, there is really only one thing that I don't like about this story, and that is you stretching it. As good a thing it is, making the story longer, it can be less entertaining this way. There are some parts that I felt were just made longer than needed, and that makes it harder for me to stay focused on the storyline. Nothing else I can think about that you would have done wrong. Even ^^this wasn't really too big of a problem. Also I really need a feel to congratulate you on "Tieing up all the loose ends". That can be hard sometimes but you are managing to do it perfectly. Keep it up!
Catie! She's alright...I hope. When I read Catie was in the apple cellar with Big Mac and the other survivors, that just made my day.
I was wondering why Twilight wasn't using her Purge on Rarity, but Twilight reveal it would give away their position. Oh right; Rule #3: Don't use Magic or Fly
Let's see. Discord can detect incoming attacks easily so naturally getting a weapon near him to do horrible things to him would be very difficult. So the best way is to stage an attack and act as a defender so that you have a defined reason to be right next to him with a very sharp, long, weapon. While the shield is positioned to block an attack that would be nullified anyway, a spear or sword can be open for use. He believes you are simply intercepting an attack while you are really in perfect position to readjust slightly and stab it through his skull in less than a second, giving him almost no time to realize your entire purpose for being in that position has changed from protecting him to enacting the first strike in a successive barrage of attacks up until he is completely eliminated or until he fends you off and recognized you as a threat and thus, as someone to defend against. At that point, you're fucked unless you have uber god-killing powers. A nice distraction though and the right taunt could keep his attention away from an attack by the elements of harmony setting up. "I'll take those endless years of pain and torture now!" while grinning ear to ear.
No! Not Spike, too! Discor4d, wait right there while I load up my M&P 15.
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Funny thing about chaos, it's unrefined but found everywhere. You can't tie down chaos, it's impossible. Discord is not pure chaos, he wouldn't have a physical form if he was. To obtain what he achieved, he would need a little bit of order to hold him together. Get rid of that order, and you get rid of Discord. Or kill him too, if you can get past his magic since he is now flesh and blood. Getting infected by the Ravage proves that
seriously, this had me close to tears and I was shivering from...I'm not sure, but It made me feel vulnerable, I found myself reaching subconsciously for the combat knife by my bed. Your an incredible writer, especially if you can do that to me. And the story is impeccable. Keep it up
This story...
Just make sure that this story doesn't die. Some thing this great is not allowed to vanish
I'm sure there'll be enough people telling you how awesome you are, so I decided to tell you something that I didn't like about the story
Luckily there isn't much of that. To be honest, there is really only one thing that I don't like about this story, and that is you stretching it. As good a thing it is, making the story longer, it can be less entertaining this way. There are some parts that I felt were just made longer than needed, and that makes it harder for me to stay focused on the storyline.
Nothing else I can think about that you would have done wrong. Even ^^this wasn't really too big of a problem.
Also I really need a feel to congratulate you on "Tieing up all the loose ends". That can be hard sometimes but you are managing to do it perfectly.
Keep it up!
1645494 really... you're gonna need bigger equipment than that.
commence the slaughter once twi finds out what happened.
Catie! She's alright...I hope. When I read Catie was in the apple cellar with Big Mac and the other survivors, that just made my day.
I was wondering why Twilight wasn't using her Purge on Rarity, but Twilight reveal it would give away their position.
Oh right; Rule #3: Don't use Magic or Fly
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Well, if you think it'll help, I'll bring my Remmington 870 Tactical and my Springfield Arms XD .45 ACP.
Or, since I'm already breaking the fourth wall, I'll just bring the whole damn 3rd Armored Cavalry Regiment.
1646531 Damn straight now show em who's bossdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Amazing chapter as always Wolokai. I have a feeling Discord is gonna get it when Twi fins out about Spike
Spike is a carrier?
This pleases me.
oh what not just rarity but spike as well discord imma kill u
....
Nuke em.
Let's see.
Discord can detect incoming attacks easily so naturally getting a weapon near him to do horrible things to him would be very difficult. So the best way is to stage an attack and act as a defender so that you have a defined reason to be right next to him with a very sharp, long, weapon. While the shield is positioned to block an attack that would be nullified anyway, a spear or sword can be open for use. He believes you are simply intercepting an attack while you are really in perfect position to readjust slightly and stab it through his skull in less than a second, giving him almost no time to realize your entire purpose for being in that position has changed from protecting him to enacting the first strike in a successive barrage of attacks up until he is completely eliminated or until he fends you off and recognized you as a threat and thus, as someone to defend against. At that point, you're fucked unless you have uber god-killing powers. A nice distraction though and the right taunt could keep his attention away from an attack by the elements of harmony setting up. "I'll take those endless years of pain and torture now!" while grinning ear to ear.
this is intense. love it
wow took me 9 weeks to get around to reading this
i dont know why but i want discord to win
so does this follow don't go outside
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It follows don't go outside 2, I think.