A Jedi from after the fall of Abeloth finds himself using an old form of force transportaion, and by using it he ends up in equestria
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Nice story so far. But is Luna not going to be a part of this story? Considering that there is no Luna tag but only a Nightmare one.
3573292 maybe he forgot to add it
3573153 thank you.
3573292 she will be, 3573509 yes, I did, I will add it in a moment, I was just to caught up in writing last night to add everything in.
3573545 I forgot to put this in the story, the two Sith books that the character has are the original and a copy, they were being sent there so that they could be kept from the rest of the universe, the reason Ryan has a copy is so he could use it to his discretion... and seeing as he is now on a new world he may need to reference it so that he can pick up on other Dark Side manifestations... like Sombra.
And remember he was thrown out of the temple for causing mischief... so he is an unorthodox Jedi... and the fact that he used a few Dark Side techniques should tell you something... and the fact that he got the tar beat out of him... just to name a few points.
But also I agree, he does cuss to much right now, I will be cutting down on his swearing, it was mostly used to describe the terrible mood he was in after the fight.
I will never disregard good criticism, so thank you :D
I will enact it in the next chapter once i get some free time.
This is a VERY good story. I patiently await more.
3574629 Thank you, I will be updating soon, I just need to work on my other stories before i get back to this one, BUT it will get an update before the end of next week, i can almost guarantee that!
You're on an unknown world. Of course you don't recognize any stars! You are looking at them from a completely different point of view. It would require your nav computer to analyze the light, age, and composition of those stars to identify them. Even then, only when it knows how close you are to what side of the galaxy and it would have to check a lot of stars. This is all assuming your ship can even do that stuff.
It would be more likely that he would discover he is in a different galaxy once he tries to activate a hyperspace lane. Considering that their ships somehow can go to known locations in hyperspace from whatever position they are in, I think it is safe to assume that hyperspace lanes (especially since it is a different dimension) connect to numerous points in space and remain connect to those points regardless of the rotation of the galaxy or other factors. I guess so many lanes are known and logged that no matter where you are in the galaxy, at least one known lane will be connected to your point in space (which is probably a chunk of space, like the size of a solar system). So, if he has no access to any known hyperspace lanes, then he is either A) deep in the unknown regions, or B) in a different galaxy.