Chapter 1: The Arrival
Isaiah lay on the couch watching the newest episode of the Walking Dead, and wondering if perhaps the pizza guy had gotten lost again. He sighed as he continued to watch the show with little interest. Lately he felt as if he was in a rut that he couldn't escape from, he supposed that this sort of thing happened to even the best of people and he was hardly the best. As he sat there in a daze his phone suddenly started to vibrate. He paused the show and pulled out his phone. It was another call from Austin, he probably just wanted to chat like always. Isaiah decided to answer the call since there was not much else going on.
"Hello," he said.
"Hey Isaiah, what's up?" asked Austin.
"Not really anything, just watching the Walking Dead while I wait for my pizza to get here,"
"The Walking Dead huh? Is it the one where-"
"Shhhhh shut up! No spoilers I don't want you to ruin any more episodes you jerk," he shouted "I know you do it on purpose."
Austin laughed "Alright, alright I won't spoil anything for ya. What about My Little Pony? Can I talk about the season three finale, you've seen that haven't you?"
"Yeah I've seen it, what's there to talk about?" he asked.
"Well for starters we could talk about the fact that Twilight has wings now! That's pretty exciting," he said.
"If you say so," Isaiah said.
"What's the matter? Not a fan of Princess Twilight Sparkle?" he taunted.
"No, I'm fine with it now, when they first announced it I was pretty mad, but now I'm okay with it,"
"Yeah I understand, I was basically the same way," he said.
"So how are you doing Austin?" he asked.
"I'm fine, not really doing much right now. I'm still trying to find someone who will publish my damn book," he said angrily.
Austin had been trying to publish a fantasy novel for sometime now. Isaiah had read his friend's book and it was pretty good, but so far nobody was willing to give his book a chance.
"That sucks man, I'm sure you'll get it eventually," he said "You just need to keep trying."
"I don't know, lately things have just seemed... unbearable," he said "I just wish something would change around here,"
"What do you mean?," Isaiah asked.
"I don't know if it's this place or if it's just me, but everything just seems dull and unimportant. Maybe I need a change of scenery, or a girlfriend or something," he said.
"I know what you mean, I sort of feel the same way. I mean I have no job, no money, and almost no friends! I just feel like I don't have a purpose," Isaiah said.
"Amen to that brother. You know, we should really hang out more," Austin said.
Isaiah smiled, "Yeah we should."
Isaiah's conversation was interrupted by the ringing of his doorbell, "Oh, sounds like the pizza is here, I gotta go, I'll talk to you later."
"Alright, bye Isaiah."
"Bye Austin."
Isaiah hung up the phone and set it down on the table before getting up and walking to the door. He opened the door to find an awkward, gangly looking teenager holding his pizza.
"That'll be twelve dollars," he said handing Isaiah the pizza.
Isaiah reached into his pocket and gave him fifteen dollars.
"Keep the change."
The delivery boy said nothing and went back to his car and drove away unnecessarily fast.
"Jerk," Isaiah huffed angrily.
He went back into the living room and started up the show again. He opened the pizza box, grabbed a slice, and began to eat as he watched. After finishing the episode and his pizza, Isaiah crawled off of the couch and headed into the bedroom. It was a modest bedroom, but it was his bedroom. He lay down on his bed and opened up his laptop. His homepage was cluttered with more news stories about wars and kidnappings and other generally despicable things.
Isaiah opened up a new tab and went to Equestria Daily to see if there was any new information about season four. When he saw there wasn't any he closed the tab and visited his favorite pony tumblrs to see if anything worthwhile had been posted lately. There wasn't anything worthwhile, he hated this break between seasons, but at least it would be over in a few weeks. He sighed, and closed his laptop and placed it on his nightstand. He lay there on his bed thinking about life. What kind of life was this? He had a decent upbringing, parents that loved him, and had gone through college and earned a degree in business, and yet he had nothing to show for it. He had no money, no girlfriend, and even the house wasn't his, it was his parents rental property. Sometimes he wished he could just do it all over again.
At that moment he noticed a shooting star pass by his window. Without even realizing it he began to wish.
'I wish I could start a new life in a new place, a place far away from the problems of the world. It would be a shame to have to leave this neighborhood behind, I mean the only friends I have are neighbors of mine.' he thought.
"Ah, who am I kidding? I'll never move somewhere better, this is probably the best I can get anyway." he muttered to himself.
He laid his head down on his pillow and closed his eyes. He drifted off to sleep quickly, already forgetting the shooting star and the wish.
* * *
Isaiah awoke to the noonday sun rays shining in his eyes. He raised his arms up and stumbled out of bed trying to shield himself from the offensive light. He shut his blinds, finally blocking out the light. Isaiah sighed in relief.
'That's better, I'm glad I at least got to sleep in Usually I would have to be at work by- wait.'
Isaiah ran to his alarm clock only to find it out of power. Now beginning to panic Isaiah pulled out his phone to find that it was 12:45.
"OH GOD! I'm late! I'm late for work!" Isaiah yelled in alarm.
He rushed into the bathroom, quickly undressed, stepped into the shower, turned the faucet, and a small stream of cold water gushed out before the flow stopped.
"What the hell is this?" he said.
Isaiah didn't know what was going on. First his alarm clock doesn't go off and now his shower wouldn't work. He wondered if the power might be out, but even if it was he should still have water. He flicked the light switch on and off a few times. When no light came forth he huffed angrily and ran back into his room to get ready as best he could for work.
After dressing he made his way into the kitchen to grab a quick meal to eat. Seeing a cluster of still fresh bananas, Isaiah grabbed one and began to eat. While he ate his banana he thought about the apparent power outage.
'Guess I'm going to have to call someone about that and maybe a plumber as well,' he thought.
He grabbed his keys and ran outside to his car. The car started up just fine, so he pulled out of his driveway and headed down the street to work. As Isaiah drove he noticed that there was an unusually large amount of his neighbors milling about. Some where in groups talking together, others where wandering about almost as if in a daze. He saw others going from door to door and talking to the residents of each home.
'I wonder if power for the whole neighborhood is out?,' he thought.
By now Isaiah was becoming a little concerned with what was going on. Earlier it had just been an annoyance, but maybe something terrible had happened that he didn't know about. Isaiah tried to push those thoughts out of his mind while he drove. There was no sense in being paranoid. It worked for a while, until he reached the entrance to the neighborhood.
"Okay, what the fuck."
Just outside of his neighborhood, where the road should have been, were rolling hills with a huge forest to the left. Just outside of the entrance of the neighborhood was a small group of cars and people all milling about talking to each other. Some looked scared, others looked angry, but most just looked confused. Isaiah parked his car next to the others and stepped outside. He didn't notice it earlier but the air was... cleaner. Isaiah saw Austin in the crowd. He waved and Austin waved back with a slightly forced smile on his face. He walked over to Austin.
"Good morning Austin," he said.
"Good morning Isaiah," he replied.
"So, umm any idea what the hell is going on?" Isiah asked.
"No, no one really has any idea, everyone just woke up to find that there's no power, no running water, and no internet. And if that weren't enough, the whole neighborhood seems to have been... moved," he said.
"Yeah but moved where, and how?" he asked.
"Nobody knows, there's no GPS signal and nobody can contact anybody over the phone or the web. It's almost like all the satellites are just gone, as for how we got here, that is even less clear."
"Some people are saying that it must have been an EMP of some kind," he said.
"What does that stand for?" Isaiah asked.
"Don't know but I heard Barry explain it. He said that a nuclear explosion could generate this massive energy wave that would cause all the electronics to fail or something."
"Woah, are you saying we got nuked? Is America under attack," Isaiah Asked with panic beginning to seep into his voice.
"I, I really don't know well enough to say. If you want to know more you should ask Barry about. He's the skinny black guy with the blue cap," Austin said pointing at Barry.
Isaiah turned to look where Austin was pointing. Now that he saw Barry, he remembered seeing him before, probably just around the neighborhood, but Isaiah seemed to remember that he was nice and very smart.
"Oi! You two over there, come here."
Isaiah and Austin turned to see who had shouted at them. It was a tall man wearing jeans and a hunting jacket. Isaiah could see a hunting rifle slung across his back.
"Are you talking to us?" Austin asked.
"Yes I'm talking to you, get over here. We're having a discussion about what our next course of action should be," he said.
Austin looked at Isaiah and he just shrugged. He supposed that they might as well since they didn't have any idea what to do. Of those in the group, Isaiah recognized only two of them. The first was Barry, the second person he recognized as well. Her name was Jasmine and she lived right across the street from him and was infamously known for her massive parties that occasionally led to certain "incidents". The other two, including the man with rifle, were totally unknown to Isaiah. The other man was short and bald. He was wearing an expensive looking suit and sweating dearly for his choice of clothing. They walked over to the group of four and listened to what was being discussed.
"We need to try and find civilization. There is surely other people out there, we just have to find them," said Barry.
"What we need, is to find out what's going on," said Jasmine.
"How do you plan on doing that? We don't even know what's happened," said the neighbor that Isaiah didn't know.
"Maybe we could send some people out to look around?" Isaiah said somewhat shocked that he even said anything.
"Who are you?" asked the man in the suit.
"I'm Isaiah, I live here too," he replied.
"Well, what qualifies you to make those kinds of suggestions?" he asked
"What? Since when does somebody need to be qualified to make a suggestion?" Isaiah asked.
"You think you're cute? You think this is all some big joke?" he began advancing towards Isaiah with anger clearly displayed on his face.
Barry stopped him by placing his hand on the short man's chest. "You need to calm down, I know that everyone is a bit on edge, but this is not the time to start turning on each other," The man looked like he wanted to slug Barry in the face and probably would have to if not for the mountain of a man watching him with a hand near the rifle slung across his back.
"You better know what you're doing Barry, for your own sake and everyone else's, especially my family" The man walked back to his car and drove back into the neighborhood. The rest of the group split up and went back to their respective cars, except for Barry who stayed with Isaiah and Austin.
"Don't worry to be much about him, he's just confused and scared. Hell I certainly don't blame him." said Barry.
"Thanks for that, I'm Isaiah, I don't know if you know me," he said.
"I've seen you around before, but I've never personally met you, it's a pleasure," he reached out and grabbed Isaiah's hand and gave it a firm shake.
"Your idea is not a bad one, despite Mr. Cooper's response. If you can get some others to go along with it, I'll come with you," he said.
Now Isaiah was beginning to regret saying anything.
"Oh, I'm not really sure that I would be much help," Isaiah said
"Nonsense, you were the one who came up with best idea while everyone else just panicked. Wether you realize it or not you helped calm these people," said Barry.
Isaiah opened his mouth to say something, but closed it not really knowing how to respond to Barry's assertion that he was some sort of leader.
"Why don't you go talk to Forrest, I'm sure he'd be willing to take you and some others to scout around in his truck," said Barry.
"Who?"
"The Australian with the rifle, he's a nice guy just a little... eccentric at times," he said.
Isaiah looked at Forrest he was leaning up against his pickup truck talking with Jasmine.
"Can I come too?" asked Austin.
"Sure, but why do you want to come?" Isaiah asked.
"Are you kidding, this is the sort of adventure I've been looking for. I've been trying to find something fresh to write about and this seems like a good start to me!" he said enthusiastically.
Isaiah nodded and began walking over to Forrest with Austin and Barry in tow. When Forrest saw them approaching he stopped his conversation to address the group approaching him.
"Hello," said Isaiah friendly.
"What do you all want?" he asked.
"Well we were wondering if you would mind taking us in your truck to explore our surroundings in hopes of finding civilization," said Isaiah.
"Why don't you just take your own car?" he asked.
"Well, our cars aren't exactly built for off-road, and yours certainly is," Isaiah said fully appreciating the hulking beast of steel. It looked like it had been heavily modded and could probably drive through a small forest end come out unscathed.
"Please, you'd be helping everyone if we can find someone to help us," said Barry.
Forrest considered this before saying "Sure why not, I'll take you around if you think it will help, come on climb in,"
"I'm coming too!" said Jasmine.
Forrest looked at her strangely "You sure?"
She shrugged "It's better than staying here."
"Fine, everyone get in. Let's go!" Forrest shouted.
They all climbed into Forrest's truck as he started up the ignition. Isaiah looked out the window. He had never seen this area before, but it somehow looked familiar. He shrugged off the feeling as the truck started rolling and journeyed out into the unknown and away from their neighborhood.
* * *
Twilight was sleeping peacefully after a long night of studying up on here new duties as a princess. It had been exciting but utterly exhausting and she was content to sleep in just a little later than usual. She was a princess now, after all. That's why she didn't much appreciate being roused from her slumber by a magical tidal wave that crashed through the library. Her eyes shot open and her horn started to glow from the ridiculous amount of magic released by something. The magical wave was followed by a physical blast of energy that knocked over several stacks of books and sent Twilight tumbling to the floor.
"Oof! Ow, my wing!" Twilight cried out.
"Twilight! Are you all right? What was that?" Spike said helping her to her hooves.
"I have no idea, but I think it's going to be one of those days," sighed Twilight.
Suddenly a rainbow blur came crashing through Twilight's bedroom.
"Twilight! What was that, it knocked me off my cloud I was napping on!" said a disgruntled Rainbow Dash.
"You're not the only one, and I have no idea what caused it," said Twilight.
"So, you didn't have anything to do with it? You're not practicing any weird spells that can destroy Ponyville are you?" Rainbow asked bluntly.
"Rainbow Dash, have a little faith, I would only practice those sort of spells with the utmost regard for safety," Twilight said.
"That's... comforting, so if you didn't cause it then do you think it could have anything to do with the thing that appeared near the Everfree Forest?" Rainbow asked.
"The what?" asked Twilight.
"I don't know it was kind of hard to see what it was from wear I was flying, but it looked like a collection of houses or something," she said.
"Oh well maybe, that blast did sort of feel similar to an aftershock of a teleportation spell, but on a much larger scale, I don't know how that could happen though, nopony, besides maybe Celestia, could pull off a spell with that much energy involved. I don't know who or what is responsible, but we definitely need to find out. Dash can you go investigate these 'houses', when you do come back and tell me what you saw, just make sure you don't get to close." said Twilight.
"You got it!" Rainbow said taking off in a blur of color.
"Spike, take a note," Twilight said.
Spike grabbed a quill and parchment from the nightstand.
"Ready?" Twilight asked.
"Ready!"
Twilight cleared her throat "Dear Princess Celestia..."
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Just a heads-up, there's already a fic by this name.
3925553 Dang
Do you think I should change it? Are the stories similar?
3925557 Nah the other one is a completely different concept, so you should be fine plot-wise. :3 Up to you if you want to change the title, I just thought you should know.
I like this story a lot keep it up
3925704 Thanks! I will
Nice concept, just watch it with some things here and there. Keep it up
3926151 Could you be more specific about which things I should watch?
I would not be a happy camper if that happen to me in my neighborhood.... sorry but true I love my family to much to leave them forever like that so I would be a little angry. I do like the concept~!
The idea seems interesting, but the presentation detracts from it. The biggest problem is with punctuation, which is all over the place. I especially noticed the frequent comma splices, missing punctuation at the ends of sentences, and incorrect punctuation at the end of dialogue. You might want to have a look through the site's writing guide for some information on fixing those issues. It's also lacking in descriptive elements, making it difficult to visualize some scenes, and the formatting inconsistently jumps between having indentation and not having it.
I recommend finding an experienced editor to help you smooth out these issues. That can sometimes be the difference between a forgettable fic and a truly special one.
3926181
I think it's just me but I feel like he's taking this with no questions at all. Hell I'd be wondering why this happened or, if I was somehow responsible for these actions. But that may just be me
I'm liking this so far as well!
Upvote and a fave to you good sir!
Interesting so far but could use some fine tuning. I noticed a few issues with homophones and your dialogue needs some serious love. You don't need 'he/she said' after every sentence, especially if it's just two people talking. Also, I don't think I noticed a single action tag anywhere.
You sir, you get a like just for the concept.
And it was the wrong neighborhood, motherf*cker(not implied to be an offense to you, I'm talking generally)
OH MY GOSH..... BEST STORY IDEA EVEEEEERRRRRRRRRFR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
must have MOOOOOORE
3930996 it's austin that doesnt have a job
Somebody's been reading this series http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grantville_(1632_series) haven't they now?^_^