Children of Harmony

by Flora Spectrum

Chapter 4

A young ice blue colt jumped up and down while giggling with his mother. Occasionally his dark blue mane adorned with a single hot pink streak would fall and cover his golden eyes only to fly upwards as he jumped.

“We have to start planning next year’s reunion!” he cried with a foalish grin.

“Of course!” his pink mother cried while jumping up and down, “this year’s was super duper fantastulistic stupendously fun meaning we have to aim big if we want to make it even better!”

His mother pulled a marker board out of seemingly nowhere and began scribbling furiously. “Now, if we can measure the happiness levels in sweets, games, decorations and music-“

“Ooh! Don’t forget the ponies! They make it special after all!” Indigo Pop added in.

“Of course Indy! Give yourself a hoofive for that one!”

Indy obliged by throwing his right hoof off screen only to come back and give his left one a solid hoofive as his mother continued giving instructions, "Okay! Now, add up how many ponies we are inviting!”

“Okay let’s see, we have they grown ups, their spouses, the colts and fillies, adds up to thirty one, oh wait! Sweetie Belle should have her foal by then so make that thirty two!”

“Okay!” As his mother went back to scribbling her equation on the board, Indy found himself lost in thought. I can’t wait until the next reunion! It’s the only time I get to see some of my bestest friends! Emerald Shimmer lives so far away in the Crystal Empire and both Lustrous Armor and Harmony are gone a lot for all that important royal stuff. Ooh! Maybe if I plan my birthday early instead of waiting until the week before, they can have their schedules empty and can come! That would be the best birthday ever!

“Hey Indy!”

“Yeah mom?” he said with a smile as his mother’s voice snapped him out of his thoughts.

“We’ll plan your birthday party soon so everypony will be able to come, but let’s finish planning this one first!”

Indy giggled at his mother’s strange way at knowing what he was thinking. “Okay mom.” Indy’s left eye blinked twice and his right ear twitched once. As his mother gasped the same time he did, he knew she sensed it too.

“You know what this means?” Pinkie Pie cried.

“A family of four ponies with a dog expecting puppies any day now is here and they are out looking for a house to rent!” Indy responded with enthusiasm.

“Quick! We have to go find them!” Pinkie cried as she raced out the door.

“And plan their welcome party!” he yelled as he raced after her.

Author's Note:

Yes this chapter is short, but the next two shouldn't be!

Comments

[Flare]

Oh no, Pinkies son is like a copy of herself. Will this spell dome for Equestria??

Nah, hopefully Equestria can survive the apocalypse that is two Pies. Cute

[Pump It Up]

Indy obliged by throwing his right hoof off screen only to come back and give his left one a solid hoofive.

“Silly readers love it when we break the fourth wall!!” his mother said with a giggle.

“Silly readers, why do you find that so amusing?” Indy asked.

“Are you two breaking the fourth wall in there?” Indy’s father called from the living room adjacent to the kitchen.

“Yup!” Indy called back with a giggle, “And the fifth wall too!”

Pinkie doesn't know she breaks the fourth wall. That's just a gag in the show. Small things, like Pinkie pulling a marker out of seemingly nowhere, are fine, but not this. Trust me, people can get pretty irritated over this.

Other than that, again, great job! I do have to note that starting ALL of your chapters nearly the exact same way is a little odd and a bit irritating. While it's interesting, it only was so the first couple of chapters. Then it started feeling weird.

Lets see: Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Only two left!

[Flora Spectrum]

3507571 you make a good point. When I can get on my computer I may delete that part out...

[Flora Spectrum]

3507526 Equestria will survive, until Indy gets married has foals and there are three generations of fourth wall breaking, party planning, super hyper Pies!

[Flash Chaser]

Img pinkie pies filly omgomgomgomg so,funny please make moar than 6 chapters

[Flora Spectrum]

3508617 I'm glad you like! However, I still only plan on six total chapters and I'm going to have to take at least a two week break from writing.

[Flash Chaser]

Aww no problem but u culd make splinter stories of these ones bout tge foals and there lives to give a lil moar back story

[Flora Spectrum]

3508701 Hmm... I'll give it some thought but I'm already in the middle of writing two stories as well as working with a new idea that's been forming. Therefore, if I do decide to write more on this it will have to be on the back burner a little bit

[Flash Chaser]

Whats the second story ur working on

Also new ones send me a link

[Flora Spectrum]

3508787 I am still working on finishing Silent Song in Canterlot High as well as writing the sequel to Flora Spectrum.

[KibaWR]

oh boy.... and here I thought one pinkie was bad... but now theres two of them! TWO! Complete with forth wall breaking physics and Pinkie sense! okay, that's it. Equestria is doomed. No way ot's gonna survive two of that kind running around.

[keam]

3565689
OH. MY. GOD.
That was EXCACTLY what I was thinking! *Gasp* You got a Pinkie sense!

[Tiacorn25]

Please make more stories of the mane six’s kids!!!!