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One night, Celestia and Luna take a walk in the royal gardens only to find a small alicorn filly. She is solid white except for her cutie mark which consists of the color spectrum in the shape of a flower. Celestia recognizes who this filly is and her importance to the future of a certain kingdom.
Knowing that Canterlot isn't the best place to raise a filly, she entrusts Twilight and her friends to raise her in Ponyville, but keeps the truth about this filly a secret.
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1: Add an extra line between paragraphs.
2: Alicorn OCs are a serious target of hate on this site. Just a notification.
3: If this is another "Diamond Tiara is an awful jerk who has no emotions" story, I won't read any more. Quite a lot of us are DT fans.
Other than that, looks good.
1. I'll try to remember that for the next chapters
2. I've noticed the hate, but I've had the idea stuck in my head for months now so I decided to go ahead and write the story anyways
3. I don't plan on making Diamond Tiara looking like a robot with no other emotions except hate, but if in future chapters she comes off that way I apologize in advance. I will say I don't consider her to be the main villain, so I don't know if that's any consolidation...
Well, I'm glad you like it so far!
This reminds me of a story that I wrote not long ago, but you sure did a better job with the theme than I did! Seems interesting, and the filly is cute, so I can't wait to see more!
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1: You can click the button with the the speech bubble to quote me, and you can edit previous chapters.
2: I don't hate the Alicorn OCs, unless they are self-inserts.
3: Yeah!! I am a proud Diamond Cutter, so I support DT.
Also, if you'd like an editor, I'm up for it. You might have to remind me often, though.
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Actually, an editor probably wouldn't be a bad idea. I do edit my stories, but it gets to the point where I look over them so much that I can't find the mistakes anymore. If you're offering to be an editor, I'd be happy to email you each chapter before I post it, but I must warn you I update frequently, usually several times a week.
Quick question, forgive me if I sound incompetent or oblivious to obvious vocabulary, but what exactly are self interest?
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far and I hope to have the next chapter up soon!
3056894 I'll be taking classes, but when I have time I'll help. Don't email, private message me please.
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Will do, if you're up for it chapter three is typed and I can send it to you now. As for classes taking up time, trust me I completely understand.
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This story has potential...
Can't wait for the update! This is a great story! (I love how you ended the chapter.)
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Thanks, I'm really glad you think so!
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Thanks! I'm glad you're looking forward to it! I will say that chapter three is already written
Good so far, but I hope to see longer chapters soon
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I will admit, some of the upcoming chapters are rather short, but maybe I'll be able to post more often to make up for it. Also, thanks for the fav!
No prob.
One thing you can't forget is
Longer chapters= happier people! But other then that awesome story!
Wow....
this story is amazing 
its so cute 
and mystical 
GREAT JOB 
like, fave and follow
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I understand the chapters do seem short, especially since I've been reading a series on here with at least 6,000 words a chapter, but seeing as they are so short I am considering posting multiple chapters at the same time. For instance, I plan on posting two chapters tomorrow to make up for them being rather short.
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Oh
My 
Gosh 
So 
Many 
Ponies 
I'm glad you like it so far!
AMAZING
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Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Wow...
*See's new chapter*... *Fist Pumps*
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Wow? I hope that's a good wow
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You actually fist pumped over me adding a chapter? To that I respond yay!
3082684>>3082677 It was a good wow and yes I did fist pump!
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Well I'm glad that you find my story to be fist pump worthy
*Fist pumps... Again!*
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Yay! My story is still fist pump worthy! I guess while other stories are rated with stars or even staches, mine will be rated with fist pumps!
Hooray more chapters. You know what this calls for. A PARTY!!
I like how you are writing DT and SS plausibly but nicely.
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Thanks! You've given some great advice on how each character would act.
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Hi I'm Pinkie Pie and I aprove this comment
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Yay!
You have turned this from a cliche to a great story!
You already know what I'm going to do... Any way, good job! Have a mustache
and a fist pump. *Fistpump!*
3144484 Aw thanks!
3144488 Yeah! More fist pumps!
3145213 Remember that if all goes well, Flora should at least get the CMC and DT and SS to leave each other alone.
Honestly you are vary aware about what I plan on doing *fists pump*
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Yea more fist pumps!
You know the drill... *fists pump*
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Every time you say you fist pump, I automatically think of this song...
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Someone's got good TAAAAAASTE!
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Thanks! I'm pretty sure I like this song better than the original
Two problems I found with this one:
1: Twilight mentions the exact Dark Magic thing twice, not sure if that was intentional, but it was redundant.
2: At the end Twilight was "wandering" what important thing she was doing. Sort of a nitpick, but just saying.
Aside from that, nothing horrible from what I've seen, keep going!
You did exceptional on this story so far, great job. Favorited, liked, and looking forward to more
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Dang it! I thought I had put it twice but when I went back to look for it I couldn't find it! I am going to edit that out ASAP!