How horrible for Apple Bloom to be a witness to that. Despite the tragedy here, I still enjoyed reading it. You might want to slow down though, as I felt this was a little rushed. Doesn't hurt it and it was still worth reading.
Congratulations though are in order for making me want to read this before it completed. No other author is that awesome enough to get me that interested in a story. Just be sure to write that epilogue and I will read that when it comes. Might want to hold off on the 'complete' tag till then unless it is really close to being released.
Well that backfired horribly, let me do the favors.
.......actual ending would be rarity going
"Helloe sweetie bele, hwo....................... WHY DO YOU SMELL LIKE BLOOD???!!!"
ponies still have animal senses. the smell of blood owuld be like someone flashing warning lights.
How horrible for Apple Bloom to be a witness to that. Despite the tragedy here, I still enjoyed reading it. You might want to slow down though, as I felt this was a little rushed. Doesn't hurt it and it was still worth reading.
Congratulations though are in order for making me want to read this before it completed. No other author is that awesome enough to get me that interested in a story. Just be sure to write that epilogue and I will read that when it comes. Might want to hold off on the 'complete' tag till then unless it is really close to being released.
9/10 so far
3758189 Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed!