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*claps* it's better then how i would deal with it

excellent

Not sure...

Lovely.... Can't wait to see the next chapter for this great story.

This is THE BEST POSSIBLE THING EVER!!!!!!

3478823 Thank you!

3478176 I... I am scared of you.

3478488 About...?

3478904
What to think

3481527 Think, a beautiful "Cupcakes"...

3481533
I really can't see her doing it. I'll read the next, but I really can't see it

3481582 Well, she is extremely sensitive... and she is bullied constantly, and mental illness can happen to anyone *Hint Hint*

3481592
That's not something to joke about

3481962 Um... I wasn't joking? I just said "Hint Hint" as to what might happen to Sweetie.

3478904 i get that a lot

..... i hope sweetie has a good shower because blood gets everywhere

3481965
And I meant mental illness

3481965
And I meant mental illness

3482922 I would like to meet up with you sometime!

I promise I won't bring police officers with me!

3483416 Well, if I recall I believe I said and I quote,

Besides, mental illness can happen to anyone.

Please tell me where that has a joke, I believe what I said is true. It can happen to anyone, maybe I used it a bit more harshly than I intended but it wasn't a joke.

I am sorry if I have offended you, I did not intend to nor wish to.

3483621
gotcha

3483609 okay

the last time someone said they wouldn't bring any police it turned out the police were already there.

3483621
There are always gonna be overly sensitive people out there...

Sweetie there are rules for when you go out killing your victims... wait, maybe I can give you a few pointers. Celestia forbid you get caught

Step 1: Make sure there are no witnesses. You can't blindly announce your intent to kill and leading Silver Spoon with a big ass gem in your hooves. If you get caught and are left behind to suffer alone.

Step 2: Dispose of the body You had close and personal contact with your victim and if the ECSI (Equestrian Crime Scene Investigation) is as strict as we are, then you get caught and that isn't very good.

I haven't commited any murders, but this is what I noticed that you need to work on. Diamond is the ring leader and is going to be tougher then you can imagine. She may be a spoiled little bitch, but she might be able to fight back. Rid the world of these little monsters and make sure the Crusaders can be happy in a world without senseless bullying.

They should have stopped by now.. After this, they are in Sweetie's hooves. Good start and look forward to reading the next chapter

Please don't take anything I say seriously... just felt I slap this little disclaimer on here.

3483621

"I didn't want to hurt them, I only wanted to kill them."

Wow a lol right of the bat.

First of all, the gem trick and the yelling. You don't simply do something like that, must be more subtle. Goddamn it, I know someone already commented, but before you leave a crime scene, you fucking look for any evidence you left.

Number one rule, look for any obvious evidence linking you to the crime. Such as a hair, weapon, or other personal possessions with your hoof marks on it. It is also important to cover up your tracks, as to throw off any investigator. If you're doing this and intending to stay integrated into society without worry, you need to make sure you space out the kills. You also need to make sure no one has seen you draw someone into a back alley like that.

Second rule, blood cleaning. Although it may seem odd, you should be able to wash yourself off at the scene. This would mean, that you need to have an alleyway with a water tap. This can result in some hair falling onto the ground, so perhaps be careful when doing so.

Third rule, removing further evidence. Say, you should bury the body, or hide it in some way. This would mean that any investigators trying to find a lost foal wouldn't be able to find the body immediately, and give you more time to escape or plant false evidence.

I hope this guide on how Sweetie Belle could commit murder better does not help a real life killer.

DISCLAIMER: I TAKE NO RESPONSIBILITY FOR ANYONE WHO USES THIS TO COMMIT MURDER. MURDER IS A CRIME, AND SHOULD NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES BE DONE IN REAL LIFE.

I hate disclaimers, but fuck. I don't wanna be sued.