Pinkie visits Rainbow Dash, and finds her engrossed in a certain VR video game. So she decides to join in, and enters the world of... Corruption of Champions.
Writing stories about pony mares having a penis, yet not having the plot include romance or sex is something I enjoy greatly. So with that being said, I really wish I thought of "character having sapient penis and not getting along with it" first.
4411179 Well to be fair, I didn't think of it either. Pinkie did
I'm not sure what the copyright rights of a fictional character are, so quick, while the legal buffs are trying to figure it out you should totally steal that idea! Heck, I'd read it
Penis, you gotta get yourself under control. You're a liability! I regret nothing. Now keep staring at her tits. We can stare at her tits all we want once we win, okay? Well you're not gonna manage much talking to your penis, are you? And you say I'M the liability. Honestly, I'm gonna need to have a word with him once this is all over.
Ahhh, my penis sighs, I'm in heaven... The shark girl then kicks me right in the crotch. FUCK, HELL, I'M IN HELL! FUUUUUUU...
thanks to the chapters name i tried to make a dirty version of row row row your boat but i couldnt think of anything and in the end i found out theres a website with dirty nursery rhymes
4436924 Allow me to elaborate. They both play the game alone, however whatever happens to them is stuck with them in real life till they do something to reset their bodies... by multiplayer I mean they could... show off what they've learned in their new bodies not to mention how they've changed while they were both out of the game. (Insert and then sex happened image here.)
4436969 Though it would be interesting, and possibly make the story better, if what they did in their own files affected the entire game. For example, Rainbow Dash was grinding on imps and goblins, and Amily said.
Although, their numbers are starting to dwindle lately.
Which could mean that Rainbow was the cause of it. Another example, if Pinkie were to take out the factory in the mountains, they could be destroyed in Rainbow's game without her ever going there.
4464508 It could be a side effect of Pinkie using Rainbow's install drive to install the game. Like they're both playing in the same world just the likelihood of them meeting face to face is 0 to nill, like they will never meet in game but, they'll always be just minutes apart.
4464508 4464716 That's actually a pretty interesting idea, and not something I'd honestly considered. That Amily line was basically lifted straight from the game's dialogue, after all. It's certainly given me some food for thought, though I won't guarantee anything'll end up coming from it, since it does kinda clash with some of my future plans for the story.
With good ideas like these though, it'd be a waste for you guys not to join in the CoC writing contest we've got going on at the moment shameless plug shameless plug shameless plug
4485634 Huh... Pinkie's pen is sentient (see what I did there?) so... the fountain demon will either be best friends - or mortal enemies with it. Can't wait to see how it turns out!
This reminds me, I should continue my story, but I just have no time for it... :(
You need to make a story just like this, but with Flexible Survival instead of CoC, would be more interesting to see the negative effects of losing immediately after rape scene. Also, are you going to tie in this story and Rainbow Dash's side of the story into a third story and consider those two complete, or is this more of a sister story to the first Champions of Mareth and this story shouldn't really be called Champions of Mareth 2 since it's the same story as the first but told in the perspective of a different character during events that happen at the same exact time as events in the first story.
TL:DR version: pick an option 1. This story is in fact a genuine sequel to the first Champions of Mareth 2. This story is only a sister story to the first champions of Mareth
Depending on the option chosen, this should be done: 1. Switch the status of the first Champions of Mareth to complete. 2. Change the title of this story from Champions of Mareth 2 to something without the 2 so there is no confusion.
The first story was more interesting, I think. Well, it was at least more 'involved' in its transformation and ''love'' of the (bigger) changes.
This one, so far, as more interactions with interesting NPCs, but less (bigger) ''fun stuff''.
The strong point of Corruption of Champion always was how far and how big you could push your character, while still keeping his/her/(herm) personality (the one you had imagined for him/her/(herm), at least).
Row row row your butt,
Out across the lake.
Suddenly you're getting raped by a shark!
This was a huge mistake.
4410878 ROFL
Multiple personality disorder, and now talking with his/her own body parts... to say Pinkie is crazy would be a giant understatement
Sounds almost like teh title.
Writing stories about pony mares having a penis, yet not having the plot include romance or sex is something I enjoy greatly. So with that being said, I really wish I thought of "character having sapient penis and not getting along with it" first.
Two Pinkie chapters in a row with shark rape?
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Well to be fair, I didn't think of it either.
Pinkie did
I'm not sure what the copyright rights of a fictional character are, so quick, while the legal buffs are trying to figure it out you should totally steal that idea!
Heck, I'd read it
I like to clobber the shark girls, then do things my way. I don't like to dom, but I really don't like to be dommed. That may be why I like 'Shy...
4410878 is it wrong to think that's catchy
Now we need to think of a good voice for Penis. Right now I'm leaning towards the TF2 Scout.
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Nah, I'd say Arin's Bane impression...
I love what you have done here. Looking forward to the next hilarious chapter title.
Following. This story amuses me greatly. Love CoC.
Hahahahahah, priceless!
A personality for a penis... and it's not even the fountain demon!
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This. MAKE THIS HAPPEN! O_O
-Zeph
thanks to the chapters name i tried to make a dirty version of row row row your boat but i couldnt think of anything and in the end i found out theres a website with dirty nursery rhymes
Okay. That line is worthy of an award.
4436924 Allow me to elaborate. They both play the game alone, however whatever happens to them is stuck with them in real life till they do something to reset their bodies... by multiplayer I mean they could... show off what they've learned in their new bodies not to mention how they've changed while they were both out of the game.
(Insert and then sex happened image here.)
4436969
Though it would be interesting, and possibly make the story better, if what they did in their own files affected the entire game. For example, Rainbow Dash was grinding on imps and goblins, and Amily said.
Which could mean that Rainbow was the cause of it. Another example, if Pinkie were to take out the factory in the mountains, they could be destroyed in Rainbow's game without her ever going there.
4464508 It could be a side effect of Pinkie using Rainbow's install drive to install the game. Like they're both playing in the same world just the likelihood of them meeting face to face is 0 to nill, like they will never meet in game but, they'll always be just minutes apart.
4464508
4464716
That's actually a pretty interesting idea, and not something I'd honestly considered. That Amily line was basically lifted straight from the game's dialogue, after all.
It's certainly given me some food for thought, though I won't guarantee anything'll end up coming from it, since it does kinda clash with some of my future plans for the story.
With good ideas like these though, it'd be a waste for you guys not to join in the CoC writing contest we've got going on at the moment shameless plug shameless plug shameless plug
4465561 Sounds interesting... I may have to take a shot at this.
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yeah and wager the penis and the fountain demon gonna be best friends .....maybe
4485634
Huh... Pinkie's pen is sentient (see what I did there?) so... the fountain demon will either be best friends - or mortal enemies with it.
Can't wait to see how it turns out!
This reminds me, I should continue my story, but I just have no time for it... :(
-Zeph
4485875
awww
Rarity needs a go, and a good solid dragon-morphing, to show her to appreciate spike.
You need to make a story just like this, but with Flexible Survival instead of CoC, would be more interesting to see the negative effects of losing immediately after rape scene. Also, are you going to tie in this story and Rainbow Dash's side of the story into a third story and consider those two complete, or is this more of a sister story to the first Champions of Mareth and this story shouldn't really be called Champions of Mareth 2 since it's the same story as the first but told in the perspective of a different character during events that happen at the same exact time as events in the first story.
TL:DR version: pick an option
1. This story is in fact a genuine sequel to the first Champions of Mareth
2. This story is only a sister story to the first champions of Mareth
Depending on the option chosen, this should be done:
1. Switch the status of the first Champions of Mareth to complete.
2. Change the title of this story from Champions of Mareth 2 to something without the 2 so there is no confusion.
Thank you and please post more!
is it possible for them to encounter each other at some point because that would be interesting.
Hehhh... I don't know.
The first story was more interesting, I think.
Well, it was at least more 'involved' in its transformation and ''love'' of the (bigger) changes.
This one, so far, as more interactions with interesting NPCs, but less (bigger) ''fun stuff''.
The strong point of Corruption of Champion always was how far and how big you could push your character, while still keeping his/her/(herm) personality (the one you had imagined for him/her/(herm), at least).