I know a full day hasn't passed yet, but screw it, I'm not staying up til 1:00 am each night for the next few days. Just count this as today's and the earlier one as yesterday's.

I can't wait until she manages to get out

I can see her enjoying the delights of the Factory in record time.

...Is it bad that I recognized the name Mareth? Or is it worse that I commented without reading the story?

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If I had to pick out of the two, I'd say the former.
After all, a comment without reading is worth more to me than a read without commenting.

4332081 It's labeled Incomplete, and I'd rather not read incomplete stories. That, and the Dark tag. And you didn't have to choose one or the other. I was just saying that I didn't read it, and commenting without reading is typically frowned upon.
Like the idea, though. Mareth's a somewhat nice place, as long as you look past the, erm... "Welcoming party". Bloody imp...

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that makes no sense to me

like if someone commented on something I drew without actually looking at it ...
okay, I guess that would have somewhat more of an effect on me than the viewcount being incremented by one, since that's just a number

but that comment was literally just "ohey I'm aware of the thing that you're referencing, teehee~"
hmmmmmmm...

Oh boy, this one is even funnier than the first!
Normally I dislike Pinkie and her special mental state, however, in this story it plays out rather well!
Bravo!
Kepp going!

-Zeph

So... Pinkie is a well-endowed femmeboy in the land of Mareth who can't keep herself under wraps, so to speak?

My condolences to anything unimpregnated in that land, because that state won't last...

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Okay, I should clarify I guess. I'm not saying that overall, like across the internet in general, leaving comments without actually viewing the material is all that useful.

I'm just saying that I personally like getting comments on my work. Like, a lot. So if someone comments on my story without reading, I'm just like, "eh, that's cool, gave me something to read for a second or two."

But if someone doesn't comment, I don't think anything because I wasn't really ever aware of their presence. I'm still grateful for them taking the time to read my stuff, though, and really, without actual readers, my writing wouldn't really be sustainable.

Basically, I just find it nice to get insight into other people's minds, be they readers or not.

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(P.S. Good bloody luck waiting for any of my stories to reach completion RuBoo)

4332164 Starting the first, just finished Chapter 4, Crashie's in trouble.

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Wow... well, that was faster than I expected.

Honestly, I thought my time with Game of Estrus was just a fluke, definitely didn't expect to see myself up in that box again so soon. So seriously guys, thanks so much for reading, it means the world to me.

And also, welcome any new people coming here from the featurey box. Enjoy your stay. You may not leave entirely the same

4332179 And now, I'm all caught up.
...Wow, Pinkie. Just wow. That's... Wow. Pinkie... I'd tell you to control yourself, but I know that's impossible for you. So, instead, I'll just say... You'd get along well with Urta and/or Loppe. My favorite characters, actually, despite how I don't really care for hermaphrodites...

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Well, for someone initially averse to reading any of the story, the transition to one of my currently most outspoken readers is quite impressive.
Thanks for all the feedback, and I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Hope to see you return for future updates, but even if not, I appreciate the enthusiasm you've shown already

4332489 Here's hoping the Dark tag is only referencing the pitiful state of Mareth, and not some particularly dark later occurrences. And, as I mentioned earlier, Fluttershy's involvement would make this story at least 20% cooler, IMO.

I see you have heard and/or played this game and made a story out of it. I hope Fenoxo knows what are you doing.

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I doubt that it's come to his attention. But then, I don't really see why it should need to.

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Playing this game without getting raped at least once is like eating a tub of popcorn without finding an unpopped kernel. Happens, but is rare.
Stories containing rape generally require a Dark tag. That's pretty much the whole reason for it being there.

4332750 I guess that makes sense.

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Really, all the violence is just foreplay and deciding who gets to be on top. I am also terrified at the thought of what Pinkie is going to turn into when she finds the Tel'adre bakery.

Also, I've just completed a 'virgin' run. Almost* all content completed and unlocked with my hymen and black cherry intact!

*Damn Amily and her pregnancy fetish. And the other companions that need various forms of sex and/or rape to recruit.

I'm going to die of dick explosion, and it will be brilliant!

Best. Sentence. Ever.

4333426 what about when she finds out she can fuck a cupcake woman

4357416 It will be beautiful, that is all I can say about it.