• Published 30th Jan 2014
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Terror in Equestria 5: One Thousand Years Later - StormLuna



Celestia and Twilight finish their sentences on the sun and Twilight wants to rise to glory once more. She first must convince Celestia and other powerful ponies to help her to have a chance to do this.

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The Unmaking of Evil

Finally the threat of the world being cast into chains was gone. Colgate and her higher ups had just a few loose ends to tie before everything could return to normal. They needed to punish Twilight and her envoy before this could happen.

Brevity walked up to LaurFa and laughed, "Well, well, well, it looks like Brevity has won this battle against you, the final battle between us."

LaurFa scowled and replied, "Oh, and what makes you think this will be the final battle? Whatever you do to me, I will eventually escape because you do know that since we are Creator Goddesses, that we can't be killed and you can't banish me forever."

Brevity mocked LaurFa saying, "Ooooh, look at me, I'm the high and mighty LaurFa. I can't be killed, you will never be rid of me! You'll see! Brevity knows things that you could never imagine!"

Luna walked up to the rest of her family and said, "I just don't get it. How could the three of you want to help Twilight conquer the world? You know all you would be is stewards on Alicorn Island don't you. You wouldn't have had any real power. You would be nothing more than pawns in her hooves."

Cosmos shouted, "Don't you remember when Twilight took the Jade Alicorn that you were on Twilight's side with me? So you are not this innocent pony who has never sided with her."

Luna growled, "Well that was then and I was under her loyalty spell. Now I am a pony who thinks for herself and I will not fight for a pony who would put everypony in chains."

Twilight shouted, "Would you two shut up. It is time for the Dark Goddess to speak! Colgate, you won't get away with this! I will find a way to get out of this ooze and you will face the wrath of the Dark Goddess Twilight Sparkle!"

Colgate laughed, swatted Twilight's horn and replied, "Oh Twily, you are so funny! Just like last time, you are vanquished and you still think you can take everything back!"

Scootaloo asked, "Colgate, what are we going to do with them?"

Colgate replied, "Well initially I was going to transform Twilight into an earth pony but I am thinking something else."

Brevity walked over and whispered into Colgate's ear that she has an excellent punishment for Twilight and her envoy that would rid the world of them once and for all. Colgate asked, "What is that Brevity?"

Brevity replied, "Oh, you'll see. I will do this on Celestia first. I want to see what the others' reaction will be."

Colgate replied, "Ok, go for it. General Dark Night, lead Celestia over by that charred building."

Dark Night replied, "Will do Colgate, will do."

Dark Night led Celestia over by the charred building. Colgate asked, "Do you have any last words Celestia before Brevity does whatever it is she is going to do?"

Celestia broke down crying and said, "Twilight, you said that we would win. You said that this wouldn't happen to us."

Twilight shouted, "You know what Celestia, I have heard you cry more than anypony else I have ever known. I sometimes wonder if you and Luna are even sisters. She is strong, focused, fearless and calm and collected. I remember how you cried when the first time I invaded Canterlot. She did her best to fight but thanks to you and your crying, she had to carry you out of battle because the city was lost."

Luna said, "Yes Twilight, we are sisters. She used to not be like that until after your coronation and corruption. Continue on Celestia, I am sure we want to get these punishments done before it is time for supper."

Celestia replied, "I have nothing else to say."

Brevity said, "Ok everypony, Brevity needs you to look away as she casts this spell. Brevity will shine brighter than a thousand suns."

Everypony looked away. Brevity began to glow extremely bright, her cutie mark was glowing brightly, her eyes began to shine a bright pink as she recited, "For this object was created in ancient times, long long before nearly anypony's time, the atoms that hold this together are strong but that won't last for long, for what was made can also be unmade for even atoms ultimately will go to their grave."

Upon finishing the spell, a powerful bolt of pink energy struck Celestia, and she simply vanished into thin air. Finally Brevity stopped shining and everypony looked and saw that there was no trace of her. While Brevity had told everypony to look away, LaurFa saw a bit of what happened out of the corner of her eye and was horrified.

LaurFa shouted, "Brevity, an unmaking spell? How the hay do you know that?"

Brevity laughed, "Oh dear sister, do you remember when I couldn't get the spell to transform a unicorn into an Alicorn right?"

LaurFa sneered, "Yes Brevity, I remember that."

Brevity continued, "Well at the same time Brevity knew the unmaking spell and you could never get it right. Quite funny we think, Brevity saw your reaction to her unmaking Celestia. So sis, look at the bright side. Nopony will suffer during their punishments!"

LaurFa shouted, "Brevity, you do know you can't unmake me. I, like you, am a Creator Goddess. We can be banished but we can't be destroyed."

Twilight added, "Yeah Brevity, you can't do anything to her."

Colgate decided that the time had come to have Brevity finish off her sister. She asked, "Dark Night, could you lead our distinguished guest of honor over to where Celestia was?"

Dark Night replied, "Of course!"

Dark Night led an overly confident LaurFa over to where Colgate wanted her. She kept on shouting, "She can't do anything to me! You'll see! After she tries her precious little spell and I'm still here, you'll let me and the rest of us go!"

Brevity laughed, "Yeah, uh huh Twilight." Brevity again warned everypony to look away while she did this. Again she began to glow brightly and her eyes were shining a bright pink. She lowered her horn towards her sister and replied, "For this object was created in ancient times, long long before nearly anypony's time, the atoms that hold this together are strong but that won't last for long, for what was made can also be unmade for even atoms ultimately will go to their grave."

Brevity fired a powerful beam of pink energy at LaurFa, and very quickly she disappeared without a trace. The remaining three prisoners looked to see that LaurFa was gone. They had a look of despair on their faces. Finally Galaxia asked, "Brevity, how could you be so cruel to unmake your own sister."

Brevity replied, "LaurFa banished us eons ago and we decided that this was the perfect time for revenge. A type of revenge that can not be countered. Guess what, you are next."

Colgate interrupted, "Brevity, do you think you could just unmake the rest of them all at once. It will be time for supper in an hour and I am hungry."

Brevity replied, "Of course we can do them all at once. After all, we showed Fluttershy how we unmake things when we unmade that hill off to the northwest of town."

Applejack commented, "So that's what happened to that hill. Wow, you're the most powerful pony I've ever seen!"

Brevity smiled and nodded at Applejack. She then turned her attention to Twilight and Luna's parents. Twilight shouted, "You can't unmake me! I am the most powerful pony in existence! You can't unmake a Dark Goddess!"

Brevity laughed, "Oh Twily, what are we going to do with you! You are so arrogant it makes you so adorable and pwecious!" Brevity walked over and pinched Twilight's cheeks. Twilight tried to bite Brevity's hoof but missed. Brevity continued, "Awww, our widdle Twily is so pwecious! Hers tried to bite us!"

Everypony laughed as Brevity was talking to Twilight like she were a baby. Twilight shouted, "HOW DARE YOU DISRESPECT ME LIKE THAT! YOU NEVER, EVER TALK DOWN TO A DARK GODDESS! WHEN I GET FREE, I'M KILLING ALL OF YOU!"

Brevity grunted and said, "Ok, Brevity is sick of this. Everypony stand back and look away one more time. Twily and her pawns must go."

Brevity once again began to shine brightly and her eyes were shining a bright pink Once more she recited, "For this object was created in ancient times, long long before nearly anypony's time, the atoms that hold this together are strong but that won't last for long, for what was made can also be unmade for even atoms ultimately will go to their grave."

Brevity fired a bolt of pink energy and they vanished without a trace. When Brevity stopped glowing everypony looked to see that they were gone. The crowd began cheering loudly and chanting, "BREVITY, BREVITY, BREVITY!"

Colgate addressed everypony, "Ok, it is time for supper. There will be no meeting tonight as tomorrow we will have one final meeting. I do have some awards I will be handing out to those who showed the greatest amount of courage. You are dismissed."

After a much bigger supper than normal, all of those in Colgate's inner circle headed home while Colgate headed to bed. She felt a great sense of peace and had the best night of sleep in her entire life.

Author's Note:

Unmake-- "For this object was created in ancient times, long long before nearly anypony's time, the atoms that hold this together are strong but that won't last for long, for what was made can also be unmade for even atoms ultimately will go to their grave."

Invisibility----"Whether it be one or a bunch of ones, nopony needs to see so that we don't have to flee, invisibility is the treat of not having to retreat."

Visibility---"The unseen shall now be seen, with their friends being present, hiding only shows resent, those who have disappeared shall now appear."

Duplication---"From one to two, two to four and so much more, when one is simple mere, more and more shall appear."

Banish to void--- "You have committed treason and that is not in season, you are a threat to me and I simply can not let that be, I can no longer be annoyed so you shall be cast into the void."

Loyalty spell---"From another to me, that is where your allegiance will now be, you thought your old commander loved you like pie when all they wanted was for you to die. With me all shall be great, there shall be no hate."

Giving drones a mind of their own---"those without a mind are in a bind, no longer shall they just be, but they will still be loyal to me, for officers they are now but they don't ask how."

Unbanish---"The one who has been banished has done their time, they are now forgiven for their crime, their time has come, now they need to contribute some, it is Equestria that they must serve or into the spiral of the void they shall curve."

Transform unicorn to Alicorn--- "The unicorn who has no wings is bound to the ground, they can not really get around, their smarts are great yet without flight they will be late, with these wings they will be great and they shall never have a bad fate."

Transform multiple unicorns to Alicorns--- "The unicorns who have no wings are bound to the ground, they can not really get around, their smarts are great yet without flight they will be late, with these wings they will be great and they shall never have a bad fate."

Transform Pegasus to Alicorn---"The one who can fly likes to fly free desires the powers that allow the unicorn to be, he/she wishes so much to levitate and create, rather than berate, for the winged one now has magic, without that it would be tragic."

Transform Earth Pony to Alicorn---"The pony without magic or flight is in a bind, for they feel like they have fallen behind, they work themselves to death, even to their very last breath, for now with magic and wings, great things shall be what life brings."

Increase size of pony---"The small one wishes they were tall so that they won't have to crawl, with height their future is bright and everything will be alright, for the small one is small no more, with height their happiness shall be galore."

Mature pony--"The innocent pony is unsure of who she wants to be, that may be cute but it is not what is good for me, she needs to mature if she is to be strong for without maturity she won't last for long, the naive one shall be so no more, for her maturity will carry her into lore."

Strengthen Armor---"The one without armor does not stand a chance, so it is what we must enhance, the unarmed one will likely receive death, with armor he shall continue to draw breath, without armor he will be torn to shreds like a rag but with armor victory is in the bag."

Activate Jade Alicorn---"The jade Alicorn will help me see all, without it I might miss a brawl, while the distances are great, I can see all the hate, wisdom is what comes along with the eye so that overthrowing me nopony will try."

Hurricane spell--- "The nice weather must come to an end, for without a storm the enemy will not bend, the wind shall be strong and my enemies won't last for long, a hurricane is a must so the tyrants will sink and go bust."

Fixing spell--- "The city was devastated by a storm, which is not the norm, their suffering is great yet we can not allow normalcy to be late, the city must be restored to the way it was before so they can pay taxes like they did before.

COLGATE'S SPELLS

Unlock---"The door is locked, but from me my information is blocked, a lot of learning I have to do, but with this locked I won't have a clue, now the door is open for me and infinite knowledge for me shall now be."

Lock---"Right now the door is not locked, from others the information is not blocked, the others must not be allowed to learn, for this is not theirs to earn, the door is now closed for all but me because infinite knowledge is not free."

Shatter Armor---"Our foes' armor is great, that is something I hate, with their armor they are strong, but them having armor is just plain wrong, now their armor is gone and it is time for them to say bye as they are struck by energy and die."

Return Blue sky---"The sky is purple which is ok for some, but it just makes me numb, for I miss the way it used to be, blue is beautiful to me, the normal sky shall be back and everything will return on track."

Drain pony---"The large pony is too big for me, for smaller the pony shall be, the size and knowledge will become mine, but the negative qualities is where I draw the line, for what must grow is my power, so that I may remain in the tower."

Change eye blue---"The green eye is not for me, for blue is what it shall be, the evil shall be banished as the good can not vanish, what shall return will be an eye of blue as it is the perfect hue."

Freeze time---"Tick tock, tick tock, look at the racing clock, what is short is time and being late is a crime, we must finish on top so it is time I must stop, with time froze, it is my enemies I shall bulldoze."

Unfreeze time---"Look at the clock, it is stuck in place, with this there can be no pace, everything is still but that does not fit the bill, for now the clock shall again run so everypony can have fun."

Time bubble---"A bubble is what we need, so from frozen time we can be freed, in this bubble we can move fast, while everything else is stuck in the past, it is frozen time which through we must pass so we will never be late to class."

Undo time bubble---"In the bubble time continues to run, but now the time outside runs and allows fun, the bubble must burst so we can quench our thirst, from the bubble we are now free and everything we can clearly see."

Release Brevity Thrash--- "She was banished long ago, but her power she will not forego, it is revenge she wants, it is her sister she shall taunt, for Brevity Thrash shall return once more and be more than just long lost lore."

Fire spell-- "Dragon breath shall result in certain death, yet we must continue to draw breath. His fire will make us burn but our death he will not earn. While he desires for our burned bodies to decay, we shall continue to live so we may fight another day."

PINKIE'S SPELL

"The changeling's power is good, but not great, they can fire ooze but not enough to make their foes lose, for them to be great, they must fire bolts of hate, the energy shall be strong so their enemies won't last for long."

Twily's dark Alicorns

General Dark Night
Colonel Dark Sky
Major Dark Storm
Captain Death Crystal
Lieutenant Piercing Ice

Twily's changelings

General Green Death
Colonel Sharp Spear
Major Choking Mist
Captain Green Storm
Lieutenant Moldy Ooze


Colgate's dark Alicorns

General Dark Night
Colonel Black Mist
Major Frigid Wind
Captain Black Ice
Lieutenant Dark Crystal

Changelings

General Lightning Storm
Colonel Green Toxin
Major Deadly Cloud
Captain Green Storm
Lieutenant Southern Haze