unaware of the shadow coming from the bedroom window.
Well I wonder what that could be? The way this story is going I would want to say a pony that has been following them around, but I really don't know. Hungry for more, keep up the great work!
3760608 If it's worth noting, the chapter five reviewed by ambion was Solace, my horrid attempt at trying to end this story. Since then, I've re-booted the series and written an alternate chapter: Luna Forsaken Night, which does not have a review.
Now, as I'm sure ambion, being such an excellent and thorough reviewer, is likely busy with new stories or his own projects, there is the new Ch. 5 to be reviewed. You know, in case you're still interested. Then there's the fact that a new chapter will be up before long, hopefully.
3761040 There's plenty of time. After all, I'll be busy with college again after today. Got lucky and my lab for the day was cancelled, so I'm gonna be working on this very story all I can, while I can. After that, it's gonna be really slow moving with anything, unfortunately. Well, that, and, through a balance of video games and life experience, I've become quite patient, so no worries there. If you happen to just not find it worthwhile at some point, though, a PM letting me know would be much appreciated.
Either way, thanks for the offer. I can't wait to hear what you have to say.
3983567 Either sounds grand, though I believe that having a reader help out might spoil the experience. Also, I'm still a ways from done, and my methods with others sometimes seem... odd. Just a warning if you're sure you want to help.
3461955 And what did you think of the story?
3462027 good, just update soon!
3462631 Well, I'm very glad to see you're enjoying it.
3462634 well, i do think you should add in flashbacks or something, çause we still don't know how RD died! i mean, she didn't just drop dead, right?
3462939 Oh, everything will be explained, in due time.
3462942 good. I'll be waiting.
Well I wonder what that could be? The way this story is going I would want to say a pony that has been following them around, but I really don't know. Hungry for more, keep up the great work!
Yay! Another Chapter! Now, time to speculate...
More?
3551527 Oh, there will be more. Unfortunately, it will not be until I can get another story up. I'm not done with this yet, I assure you.
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Damn it, knew I forgot something. Thanks, ambion. Life got in the way and I couldn't review this.
3760608 If it's worth noting, the chapter five reviewed by ambion was Solace, my horrid attempt at trying to end this story. Since then, I've re-booted the series and written an alternate chapter: Luna Forsaken Night, which does not have a review.
Now, as I'm sure ambion, being such an excellent and thorough reviewer, is likely busy with new stories or his own projects, there is the new Ch. 5 to be reviewed. You know, in case you're still interested. Then there's the fact that a new chapter will be up before long, hopefully.
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I dunno if I'll be able to get to it since I've got work now. I'll try, though.
3761040 There's plenty of time. After all, I'll be busy with college again after today. Got lucky and my lab for the day was cancelled, so I'm gonna be working on this very story all I can, while I can. After that, it's gonna be really slow moving with anything, unfortunately. Well, that, and, through a balance of video games and life experience, I've become quite patient, so no worries there. If you happen to just not find it worthwhile at some point, though, a PM letting me know would be much appreciated.
Either way, thanks for the offer. I can't wait to hear what you have to say.
~CC
3551667 I can't take it! I am willing to wait a million years for this, but suspense man! SUSPENSE!! It's killing me...
3982486 At least you're not alone. It's apparently killed about five other ponies as well.
3983200 Well, I'm gonna have to wait then...
3983548 Not long. The other story is out, and the next chapter will be up as soon as I can get an editor...
3983562 I can edit maybe... Or I can have a friend and editor of mine see if she has time
3983567 Either sounds grand, though I believe that having a reader help out might spoil the experience. Also, I'm still a ways from done, and my methods with others sometimes seem... odd. Just a warning if you're sure you want to help.
thus begins the ending