The writers who read it for the Plot, face off in several 'Plot heavy' stories about the oft neglected characters of Luna and Gilda Vote In the Description
THIS was good. It was tight, it was focused, it wasn't too wordy, it wasn't over wrought ... why'd I think this was anything but?! I'm a moron, that's why!
I have nothing to say. It was good. I prefer unclothed but that's just me. There really wasn't anything specific I could point out as 'bad.' It wasn't necessarily 'clop' material but if this is what you like, I can totally see someone getting into this. If I hadn't already voted, this would be a VERY close second place in my books.
THIS was good. It was tight, it was focused, it wasn't too wordy, it wasn't over wrought ... why'd I think this was anything but?! I'm a moron, that's why!
I have nothing to say. It was good. I prefer unclothed but that's just me. There really wasn't anything specific I could point out as 'bad.' It wasn't necessarily 'clop' material but if this is what you like, I can totally see someone getting into this. If I hadn't already voted, this would be a VERY close second place in my books.
Excellent. It flowed well. I am big fan of the whole clothes thing. I was worried you wouldn't describe her outfit for a while, but then it was there.