The writers who read it for the Plot, face off in several 'Plot heavy' stories about the oft neglected characters of Luna and Gilda Vote In the Description
For what it is, it's ok I guess? It really does a better job then number 1 of focusing on the actual butt of the plot. No back story, no fancy flowering crap (lol) - just ass. I can dig it. It delves into a fetish I don't share but I think it's good? It's focused on that aspect. Some word usage issues and I had a bit of a hard time following when a butt of really pressed into one of them or when it was just above them. Also, you use 'she' in some areas where it's not exactly clear which she is which - oh it was that 'her.' Who has a magical suppressor on? I'm confused.
It's focused on both the action and the fetish it wanted to explore. It's a bit hard to follow in some places and it seems to sometimes forget what just happened in lieu of just more fetish.
I apologize for suggesting it was a trollfic of bad, that was unkind of me. Please ignore that.
I've only read this one. I'll probably vote for it, cause it has farting in it, and that's my bag.
For what it is, it's ok I guess? It really does a better job then number 1 of focusing on the actual butt of the plot. No back story, no fancy flowering crap (lol) - just ass. I can dig it. It delves into a fetish I don't share but I think it's good? It's focused on that aspect. Some word usage issues and I had a bit of a hard time following when a butt of really pressed into one of them or when it was just above them. Also, you use 'she' in some areas where it's not exactly clear which she is which - oh it was that 'her.' Who has a magical suppressor on? I'm confused.
It's focused on both the action and the fetish it wanted to explore. It's a bit hard to follow in some places and it seems to sometimes forget what just happened in lieu of just more fetish.
I apologize for suggesting it was a trollfic of bad, that was unkind of me. Please ignore that.
Okay, I am sorry, but no. no no no.