I didn't think life would get this complicated, but it did. Now, my sister, her boyfriend and I are stuck in a land called Equestria, and we don't know what to do.
To begin, my name is Mason, and, well... I'm stuck in this land of colorful, talking ponies. My sister, Stacy and her boyfriend, Craig, are also stuck here with me, so I guess I can't complain. Although, they have their significant other here with them, while I am utterly and hopelessly alone.
But you just said they're with you!
Obviously he means relationship wise, but still, it drives me nuts.
3163733 Well, there is a reason for this, and it will be addressed later on. I'm not one to put something risky in a story without thinking it through first.
3167451 Thank you! Finally someone who doesn't opt out without finding out the reason for her behavior! It needed to be done, and I now it's risky, but I have it all planned out.
Though I didn't exactly like how you set up the thought that rumor and myth/legend basically made sure that Celestia and Luna wanted the Death Sentence, I do appreciate how you set it up that Lyra could come in and save the day.
Then theres the whole, 'Loving Misunderstandings' because they got tipsy and actually felt like something was going for them- IE, Lyra has a chance at getting some happiness. Mason doesn't realize a few things- Lyra is a very very intelligent mare! She would listen! She may have been heart broken several times but she probably knows that it may turn in her favor to slowly and carefully get him used to dating a pony!
She doesn't need to be anypony but herself to make him see that she's a charming and wonderful mare who is just as lonely..and sees the potential to stop both their loneliness. The fact that Bon Bon shows how much she cares for Lyra as did Rarity does show while she may not have many friends, she DOES have a group who want her to succeed. He may be outnumbered- but these are Ponyville ponies. They won't ostracize him for long.
3169426 All valid points and all things I've thought about. We're only 2 chapters in, and I've got a good number of things set up to address most, if not all of these things. Let this bud bloom into the flower before ostracizing it.
Interesting story so far. At the beginning of the first chapter, I had my reservations regarding the shockingly out of character reactions from Tia and Luna, but after reading the comments, I would love to see how exactly you plan to weave all these peices together.
3163125 Cool story. You won't be missed, negative nancy.
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> Sees "Mature" rating and "Sex" tag.
Pretty much. And in more ways than one, I might add.
I like it can't wait to see what happens next.
Ahem
MOAR
please if you don't mind
But you just said they're with you!
Obviously he means relationship wise, but still, it drives me nuts.
3163733 Well, there is a reason for this, and it will be addressed later on. I'm not one to put something risky in a story without thinking it through first.
Lol, I like it... Damn... I think I may have another fetish >.>
>fanfics featuring Lyra named 'Tugging at my/your/her heartstrings'
not going to read, despite the good rating
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That GIF is brilliant... XD
3167451 Thank you! Finally someone who doesn't opt out without finding out the reason for her behavior!
It needed to be done, and I now it's risky, but I have it all planned out.
Interesting, continue.
Though I didn't exactly like how you set up the thought that rumor and myth/legend basically made sure that Celestia and Luna wanted the Death Sentence, I do appreciate how you set it up that Lyra could come in and save the day.
Then theres the whole, 'Loving Misunderstandings' because they got tipsy and actually felt like something was going for them- IE, Lyra has a chance at getting some happiness.
Mason doesn't realize a few things- Lyra is a very very intelligent mare! She would listen! She may have been heart broken several times but she probably knows that it may turn in her favor to slowly and carefully get him used to dating a pony!
She doesn't need to be anypony but herself to make him see that she's a charming and wonderful mare who is just as lonely..and sees the potential to stop both their loneliness. The fact that Bon Bon shows how much she cares for Lyra as did Rarity does show while she may not have many friends, she DOES have a group who want her to succeed. He may be outnumbered- but these are Ponyville ponies. They won't ostracize him for long.
3169426 All valid points and all things I've thought about. We're only 2 chapters in, and I've got a good number of things set up to address most, if not all of these things. Let this bud bloom into the flower before ostracizing it.
Interesting story so far. At the beginning of the first chapter, I had my reservations regarding the shockingly out of character reactions from Tia and Luna, but after reading the comments, I would love to see how exactly you plan to weave all these peices together.
umm wow I did not see bon-bon cominb