A fantastic climax after ten chapters of buildup (not that the buildup wasn't amazing as well), Trixie was a very fitting first victim and I look forward to seeing who might be next. I do have a question though, what happened to the Alicorn Amulet? Was it given to Zecora like in the show or is it just sitting in Twilight's room forgotten?
Wow. I can say that my expectations for her first actual murder were more than exceeded. Excellently done. You know it's well written when you feel that pang of horror that's supposed to come with these kinds of stories.
I don't know if the author is ever going to finish this story, but as of this comment this is my third time reading it. I'd love to adopt the story or at least do a reimagining of sorts, but I don't know if I could do the story justice. Although, reading the A/N for the last chapter that came out, I did have a few ideas of how it could go...
Yep. She went off the deep end... And the only way to go from there, is down...
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Well, I'm glad you've found it again and find it enjoyable. Thanks for reading!
Damn, great chapter, although I wish it came out sooner. Can't wait for more.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
A fantastic climax after ten chapters of buildup (not that the buildup wasn't amazing as well), Trixie was a very fitting first victim and I look forward to seeing who might be next. I do have a question though, what happened to the Alicorn Amulet? Was it given to Zecora like in the show or is it just sitting in Twilight's room forgotten?
Oh yes, these actions please me.
And... shit's officially hit the fan.
>inb4 she becomes an immortal alicorn
Trixie was perfect first real victim. Best chapter so far.
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Well, I'm glad you've all enjoyed it so far. I hope you stick around to see where it goes.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for the Alicorn Amulet, I will be handling that later on, but good eye for details!
5498214 I've been with this since chapter two came out. I just wish you had new chapters more often.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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Well, I'll try to get them out when I can. This past one took so long because of everything I had to focus on in life.
Wow. I can say that my expectations for her first actual murder were more than exceeded. Excellently done. You know it's well written when you feel that pang of horror that's supposed to come with these kinds of stories.
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Twilight... really not gusta...
You poor thing.
I don't know if the author is ever going to finish this story, but as of this comment this is my third time reading it. I'd love to adopt the story or at least do a reimagining of sorts, but I don't know if I could do the story justice. Although, reading the A/N for the last chapter that came out, I did have a few ideas of how it could go...