The orange filly walked back to her dorm room, deep in thought. She was trying to analyze what had just happened between her and Sky Blitz. Why should I have to try to think about this? she thought. Should I just tell him, or should I keep it to my self.
She fought her way into a fitful sleep. Even then, she had nightmares. She remember her nightmare of the Rainbow Factory, and she woke up in a cold sweat. It was then she realized where Rainbow was. She couldn't get any more sleep that night
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When it was morning the next day, she hastily got dressed, and hurried downstairs to meet Sky Blitz. She got breakfast, and she went to go talk to Sky Blitz. Not to mention, apoligize for running off the previous night. "Hey, Sky Blitz" She said. Sky Blitz just turned his head and refused to acknowledge her. "Come on, Blitz, what's wrong?" She said, desperatly trying to get him to talk to her, "Look, I'm really sorry for last night. I just want to make it up to you. You're my partner. I shouldn't try to keep secrets from you."
"Will you tell tell me what has been bothering you for the past few days? I'm just worried about you. I really like you, you know that?"
"Fine, I'll tell you what's been bothering me. As for your feelings for me, yes I knew, and I really like you too"
"So what's bothering you? Maybe I could help you."
"This really needs to be kept a secret. Why don't we go to my room?"
"Ok, let's go. We have some time before drills"
They finished their breakfast, and went upstairs.
When we got into the room he asked, "Well, what's been bothering you?!"
"Well, at first I just wanted to ask Rainbow a question. I was wondering if I made her made her annoyed by beating her records from when she was here as a student."
"I'd be worried, too. She is my idol, too"
"Well , she's my sister. Anyways, I just realized, she works at the Raibow Factory. That's where she's been."
"What's the Rainbow Factory?"
Crap, she thought, No one else knows about the Rainbow Factory. I'll just make him promise to not tell anyone.
"Ok, I'll tell you, but you have to promise not to tell anyone"
"Fine, I won't tell, but why? Is it something bad?
"Yes, it is. The Rainbow Factory is a place where they take pegasi that failed their flight test. They grind them up and turn them into spectra, the stuff they turn into rainbows."
Sky Blitz tried to fly out of the room, but Scoots was faster. She caught him before he reached the door, and pinned him down. "You promised you wouldn't tell!" She exclaimed.
"Why shouldn't I?"
"I wanted to tell when I first heard, too, but I knew I had to be loyal to her, like she is to me."
"Fine I promise I won't tell"
"Good" she said, stepping off him.
"I only promised because I trust Rainbow"
"I don't care why you promised; only that you keep your promise"
"You have a scout's honor"
"What?"
"A scout's honor" He explained, "In the Boy Scout Law, it says a scout Is trustworthy. I must keep my promise"
"Okay, I trust you"
"Good, but before we go out to practice, can I ask you a question?"
"Sure"
"Remember how I said I really like you"
"Yeah, waht about it?"
"I was wondering if, maybe, you'd go out with me"
Scootaloo hesitated. This was the first time she had been asked out. What do I say? She thought
"Of course I would"
"Really?"
"Why not? I've kind of liked you, too, when I first saw you."
"Really?"
"Yeah"
"Let's go. Speed Demon will be wondering where we went."
I don't know if I like this being a Rainbow Factory fic. It really came out of the left field, it doesn't have a Dark Tag or Gore, has an everyone rating. And didn't have any lead up. You could've had any other twist than that and it would've been better. But I usually don't read Alt. Rainbow Factory fics. And without any kind of link up, or lead up this kinda ruins the fic for me.
I'll give it a few chapters before I decide weither I want to upvote and fav, or simply dump the fic and move on.
3451870 It isn't a Rainbow Factory fic. this was a tie to my previous story.
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I read the story just now, so this is technically an Alt. Rainbow Factory tie in sequel? Rainbow Dash never said that it was true. But here supposedly in the future Rainbow tells her the truth. But if CWC is as corrupt and has as much near omniprescence as in RF. Then the second Dash told Scoots then Scoots would've been in trouble. Hell telling anypony else she'd basically be putting herself and Dash in danger.
I've always had a few problems with RF that was talked about in the official sequel a Pegasus Device (didn't like that), but still. Celestia either never knew, or purposefully allowed the mass murder of thousands upon thousands of innocent children. Her friends never saw the mental breakage of Dash from working in that hell whole. And while other ponies are being watched like a hawk and the only way to leave is in a box or in a mental insitution. Yet Dash is given free reigns.
I hope you end the "Rainbow Factory" and Dash leaves that place so we can focus on the dynamics between Dash and Scoots. And I don't think that Colt can keep his mouth shut. I mean the mass murder of innocent children is something that you don't just keep shut, especially since 99% of the Pegasi populace have no knowledge of it. And he doesn't owe anything to Scoots especially if he has any siblings or cousins / nephews he cares about.
But as I said I'm going to watch what happens in this fic. I personally don't like RF, and even as a tie in. It was confirmed here in this fic that foals are mass murdered for Spectrum, the only difference here is noone was killed off in the last fic.